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I would never say that I came in after reading the last introduction.

Six years ago? How did it survive on my bookshelf for so long!

Throw flowers and applaud. I hope the author can work hard. When can I write about territory construction? I look forward to territory construction.

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Have you forgotten the Priest Valley where I used to have a hammer...

I am also someone who is preparing to write a book, and I know how much an author needs the encouragement of a reader now, but I have to point out some of the issues that may affect your book. 1. The protagonist's strength progresses too fast. Such unreasonable rapid advancement may have serious consequences. What I'm talking about is not the progress of the ranks but the diversity of his methods. This will make the new cards obtained later not of much use. 2. The output is too high. In the novel, it is okay to cross levels and crush lower levels, but there must be a certain degree of antagonism between the same levels. The enemy can be ridiculously strong but must have weaknesses. The protagonist can have output but must be limited. It is boring to crush all the time. Counterattack with remaining blood is the real thing. 3. The golden finger is too powerful. There are too many good things in the gift package. This is the reason why the protagonist's strength improves too quickly. Being familiar with other worlds and adding hidden professions is already a very powerful golden finger. 4. There is no limit to the ability. Fireball is too **, no CD, low mana consumption, high damage, especially with no CD. The first-level fireball can be used as a third-level continuous fireball or even higher-level skills, which is not good. Planting mines is okay, there is a CD limit, but the damage is too unscientific. The clone skills are too scary and have almost no weaknesses. I don't know how they will improve after upgrading the cards. That's all I can think of for now, I hope it can be of some help to you (P. S. If you have a complete plan or a more reliable outline, please ignore my speech except for the bug of fireball)

😊 3 times 588 great efforts

Like the title, let's talk about whether we can let our daughter become a human being in the future. Also, with this name, you might as well call your daughter "Origin". Come on, author🌹🌹🤭🤭

Of course to play that you need a good gay friend and rmb who are equally interested (sexually)

He said that Hearthstone ladder is cheating 15 and I want to check it out.

Assuming there is such a ** profession, why do we need other professions? If you want fireball, make a fireball card, if you want treatment, make a healing card, if you want summoning, make a summoning card, if you want equipment, make an equipment card, and if you want martial arts, make a martial arts card. Do other professions still have the meaning of existence?

By the way, I have given you recommendations, and I have given you Sanjiang tickets continuously. Please update more 🤭🌹🤝😁😄

In fact, I have probably talked about the problem before, Maybe it wasn't taken seriously. After all, I just watch it for free, So... But I can talk to you again, this book, The storyline is pretty good. It has potential without much improvement. However, The problem is that none of the characters are clearly portrayed. Many great gods at the top of the rankings, Basically, the character will not be downplayed like this. See now, Including the protagonist, None of them have distinct personalities, Well-defined characters appear in this book. In addition, I mean it seriously, In terms of progress, system flow, data flow You haven't decided yet. So, The upgrade system is confusing, The enemy's strength is not clear. That is to say, the strength system in the book is terrible. Next, The protagonist's strength and progress are not clearly explained. So the upgrade flow is not the same, There's no coolness, either. There are often things that far exceed the protagonist's strength to crush the protagonist. (Although there is no humiliation, I can't see or feel it.) The heroine doesn't have any interaction either; It feels like everyone has no emotions at all. I can only use it to keep the ring occasionally. Or the soy sauce vase NPC, The main character is not gay. The upgrade stream does not upgrade, The plot is more adventurous. Although it is possible to develop in this direction, But it doesn't quite fit the profile either. It feels like you haven't decided how to write. To be honest, it is very important that the introduction matches the content. The most important thing is to improve the character. If you really feel that it is difficult to improve the characters you write, You can try summoning flow. Methods such as directly summoning well-known heroines. But most importantly, Or you should try to portray the protagonist and heroine. Rather than each and every useless character

What happened to the ban on voting?

Very nice Excellent grasp of the compactness of the plot Can't help but read on I finished reading Chapter 79 in an instant There are some small suggestions one is There is very little interaction between the protagonist and the female character You can consider sculpting the presence of each female character a little bit. The other one is There are some foreshadowings in the article I feel like I can change it to the protagonist, I don't know. What readers know For example, Catherine. Bettis. Erin. Centaur Girl-Christie Stories and interior monologues It can be something the protagonist himself knows Or the conspiracy of various enemies Personally, I think there are too many foreshadowings. The author himself has difficulty remembering And readers have no way of knowing So now many novels have The tendency to reveal the foreshadowing part You can consider it Then the character creation can be more visual and personalized. Otherwise, every character is a bit bland. There is a phenomenon of low sense of existence hope it can be better Come on, author

[Fn=2_2]Use your imagination and think of some magical cards. If appropriate, I will add them to the book.