Jin Mou

As I watched it, I realized that the contradictions and inconsistencies were simply disappointing. The author could not control such a story.

Why am I the only one who thinks it looks good?

I was really convinced. One moment he said that the father knew that his daughter was protecting the family and had done all those things. She had the ability to protect herself and was not just ignorant. The next moment she said that the father knew that his daughter was simple-minded and not defensive. There were too many contradictions.

The male protagonist has a particularly unpleasant personality, while the female protagonist, who is usually a very smart and strategic person, has a negative IQ and gets all kinds of blushes when she meets the male protagonist. Hey, I'm running out of books, so I'll just keep reading.

Passing by recommendation 👍

I thought it was a good house-fighting book in the first few chapters, but once the third aunt came out, the style of painting changed, and the inner monologue was annoying as hell. Is it necessary to explain so much? Readers are not stupid. Every movement or look can annoy me for a page or two. It's been over a hundred chapters and there's no progress at all. My sister and my second aunt are jumping around every day. It's so boring.

There are inconsistencies. The author has a memory like a fish. There are quite a lot of small loopholes. The plot is generally good, but the relationship between the male and female protagonists is too bluntly portrayed and lacks empathy. I feel like the heroine doesn't particularly like the hero. The relationship between the two develops inexplicably.

I really admire all the little boys and girls under the age of ten who show "extraordinary wisdom", ruthlessness, intrigues, and are not inferior to the reborn heroine. What is the point of a reborn heroine? It can only show that she was too stupid in her previous life. She can't live without rebirth. Moreover, even if the heroine is reborn, she does not take the initiative or acts passively. The description of the characters is also very boring, and she looks like "an evil ghost from hell" at every turn. Have you seen the evil ghosts in hell? All the descriptions are really inconsistent when placed on an eight or nine-year-old child. The heroine originally described should be a strategic person, but I didn't see the specific strategy, only the demeanor of the heroine. Can a person prove that she is smart just by having a calm and quiet demeanor?

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The author's writing style is fluent, and the plots are interlocking and fascinating. Ancient Chinese proverbs are difficult to write. This is one of the best among ancient Chinese writers. It is definitely worth reading. I would like to make a small suggestion. The author should be careful to use the title "young man" for the male protagonist and male supporting character in the article. They are all generals and high officials in the court. It feels a bit inconsistent to call them this way , but in any case, this article is definitely not a brainless article and belongs to the top grade of ancient Chinese.

The pace is too slow. I checked it but didn't check it completely. I saw more than 300 chapters and no one has solved it yet. What are you doing! ! !

Every time I read a rebirth novel, the more miserable the past life is, the more heartache it feels. It usually shows how stupid the heroine is and how ignorant she is about people. After rebirth, she either becomes smart all of a sudden (unreasonable, did the rebirth also change her brain), or follows the previous routine to prevent things from happening. But everyone knows the butterfly effect. How come after one change, the rest remains the same? I hope this novel isn't so clichéd!

I think it looks good!

There are too many narrations and it's too long-winded.

The story is good, but the writing feels very awkward. If you want to read it, you can't stand it. If you don't read it, you'll be a little obsessed with the plot. Oh, it's awkward.

Passing by recommendation 🤭

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Passing by recommendation 👍

Passing by recommendation 👍

I like Jin Mou so much that I stayed up for a few nights and finally finished reading it. Each character has its own characteristics. After reading Jin Mou, I wanted to read other books by the author, so I made a special starting point ❤️🌹

The author's writing is very good and definitely worth reading and subscribing to. I recommend a book that is decisive in killing and has many joys. "The old man in time travels picks up rags and makes a living by making bad movies" which is hilarious...

After reading the beginning, I don't know if I should follow it or not.