Yan Nangui

The first few chapters gave me the feeling that the heroine is calm and steady, and handles things very well. In the chapters, it is always mentioned that the heroine gives people around her a sense of incomprehension. Although she occasionally loses her memory and is confused, I quite like the image created. However, after the chapter about her mother, I felt that the heroine's little emotions appeared quite strange and she became stupid. There are always confusions, surprises, and coquettishness later on. This character jump is inexplicable. This novel is not as good as the author's other novel Xitong

The writing style is very good. I was attracted by this writing style from the beginning. The writing is also great at the beginning. Especially this idea, double birth, but the heroine has forgotten part of the memory. But later on, when the heroine goes to the capital, it is a mess, and there are often details in the front and behind. The mismatch was not a matter of long-standing details, but the time between the previous chapter and the next chapter, the plot plummeted. When I reached 80% of the book, I just skipped to read it. It was quite disappointing to the cp of the heroine's brother and Miss Mei, and the IQ of a certain heroine later was also worrying. There are also various villains. The only outstanding thing is that the writing is really good. It is a Mary Sue novel with excellent writing but a terrible plot.

The previous writing was really good, but after a hundred chapters I couldn't stand it anymore. It was so long-winded, the characters fell into the water and had their legs broken at every turn 😥, they got tired at every turn, there were no healthy people, and there were all kinds of infirmities. There was a misunderstanding of a few sentences, but it took a long time to explain clearly, so I gave up.

Saw about 70 percent. I really can't stand it anymore. I feel like I was deceived by the introduction, which was so irritating and domineering. But this book is very depressing throughout. And a lot of words are used to describe N other characters' emotional lines that are not part of the main line. Especially the emotional description of my parents made me feel embarrassed + disgusted. Please forgive me for using such straightforward words. It's really hard to accept. The parents who have given birth to a child that was considered a eldest child in ancient times still live and die for love all day long, sad for Qiuyue. Of course they can love each other deeply, but I hope they can be described in different ways, otherwise it will lead to a contrast between their love and their children's love. The result of the comparison is that it is disrespectful to be old. There is no elder's responsibility, not like a pair of parents. It's so selfish to only say that I love you and I'm sorry for you, but to continue to be myself without taking any actual actions. But obviously the author didn't want to express this feeling. There are too many points to describe one by one. I can only say that this article disappointed me. The author's writing skills are obviously more than that. I hope the next one can surprise me.

Can the heroine speak with more energy? Either her eyes are confused and dazed, or her tone is calm, and she occasionally frowns 😂 Can we get agitated? 🤔

After reading the introduction of the novel, I personally feel that it is necessary to explain that class distinctions in ancient times were very strict. A lady from an official family would not marry into a merchant family, unless she was a down-and-out official lady. Seeing that the heroine in the article was born as the daughter of a treacherous minister, she was a relatively powerful official family. How could she marry into a merchant family? This doesn't make sense? Although the author does not allow it to be studied, this is not a trivial detail issue. It is a very particular class issue in ancient times.

The original person was simply abandoned by her parents and died 😒 She was disgusting and unworthy of being a human being. Either she would have given her life for love or to save her life and not have children 😒 Is the original mother really weak? She also knew how to save money to buy concubines and dowries for her brothers and sisters. Her husband's family looked down on her, so she hid in the mountains. Didn't she want to have a backer from her natal family? It was so selfish to pay off gambling debts for her brothers. Why didn't she say that she was saving a dowry for her original body? The original father is away at war, so he won't come home, right? After giving birth to a daughter, he doesn't care about life or death, right? Girls who time travel are unlucky. They traveled to such a family and were killed by their parents when they were only 10 years old. Why did they travel to this family? Don't talk about whitewashing their parents later 😒 Disgusting.

This is another book that I liked very much at the beginning, but in the end it became extremely long-winded and I kept going back and forth in my memory. The male protagonist in the description of "Double Life" seemed to be very powerful. However, the two of them and the heroine's family still suffered a lot. The heroine still hasn't remembered the memory after the halfway point, and her rosy face turned pale every day because of the memory. The hero often got sick, and none of the people in the article were healthy. I was worried that they would suffer from diseases in the rest of their lives! Obviously everything is clear in my heart, but the result is that I don't take action to solve it🙄It's uncomfortable...

Why do I feel so tired and have no desire to continue reading? I've read more than ten chapters and I don't want to read anymore.

I'm a little confused. Why is the heroine always confused and her brain is not working well?

The content is lagging and the plot is empty. It is not recommended to enter the pit, it does not look good.

I am reading Chapter 186 now. After a hundred chapters, I feel that it is not the readers who want to abandon the article, but the author himself who has started to fool the readers. The author himself abandoned the article first. It is too long-winded.

The more I write, the worse it becomes and more verbose, with all kinds of unnecessary plot descriptions, just to make up the word count. I won't read it and will delete it.

Don't read it, the rest of it is just a random plot, it's a piece of shit

At first, it was said that the Xiao family was a small family in the capital, and the Mei family was not as good as the Xiao family. However, it turned out that the Mei family could find out what Xiao Yuzhu did. If the Mei family can find out this kind of secret, shouldn't everyone in the upper class know about it? The logic doesn't make sense. After reading it, I still don't understand what Xiao Yuzhu did when he went to North Vietnam. And the heroine's father, who didn't even know anything about the family, suddenly became smarter when he came back. Don't you think it's strange? Unfinished, very disappointing. I don't understand why the male protagonist has never solved the emperor. He knows everything in his new life. Didn't he stop the tragedy of Dan Yao earlier? The male protagonist seemed to have great powers, but he failed to do many things that could be avoided in a new life. What are the advantages of being a prophet? As a result, the male protagonist chose to wait for one thing to happen and then solve it, rather than directly preventing these things from happening. When the Jiang family was not yet prosperous, the neighboring Herb Country and the Emperor of Dachu were actually played and applauded by such unknown people.

The scene of the story is very large. The setting of the heroine who is reborn but has forgotten her previous life is very interesting. It is also interesting to uncover the veil of the past life step by step. However, the process is too fast. Although the readers are very happy to watch, their impression of the heroine is much shallower. As a result, it does not matter whether the heroine is present or not in the advancement of the story. The heroine's IQ changes from indifferent to indifferent at the beginning. The pair was weakened a lot at once, and instead, the other male protagonists were fooled around. Even Xiao Zimo couldn't handle it. When I saw the middle, I could almost guess the plot after that. Some details were not known, and there were only a few misunderstandings between the male and female protagonists. After the middle, it became boring. Of course, this is just my personal opinion.

I just want to know when the heroine will remember it. I'm tired of watching it. I thought it was pretty good at first, but now it seems like the male and female protagonists have a misunderstanding. The problem that can be solved in a few words has been dragged on for so long. The female protagonist has all kinds of inexplicable little emotions, and it's confusing to watch. I decided to give up on the article because I couldn't stand it anymore.

It's so beautiful, really. The more I watch it, the more I want to watch it. I can't stop.

The background of this story doesn't convince me, I really can't stand it. When a general leads an army outside, a normal monarch's approach is to control the general's family members to serve as hostages in the capital, and to take the family members of the frontline generals to the border to serve as hostages. Do you think that the troops in your hands can surpass the frontier army that has fought hundreds of battles? Is it because you are afraid that the general who leads the army will not fight back?

Does it look good? Does it look good? I haven't started watching it yet. I don't know if it's good or not. If you know, please tell me.

When I see such a name, I don't want to read it. Why do I always get it?

It may be that the book's poor performance dampened the author's enthusiasm So the writing got worse as it went on After chapter 200, it started to become too clean

After reading more than ten chapters, it's a bit confusing and I can't stand it.

Chenyu, the wind is blowing! Watchable and recommended.

The author's writing is very good and definitely worth reading and subscribing to. I recommend a book that is decisive in killing and has many joys. "The old man in time travels picks up rags and makes a living by making bad movies" which is hilarious...

Why did I abandon this book before I could see the ending. It's because the author writes too much.

"You Shouldn't Be the Last Straw to Break Her" is my personal experience. Friends who have similar experiences are welcome to join us and write a big book that belongs to us born in the 70s and 80s, and then make it into a big drama. It was only when I was on the verge of a mental breakdown that I decided to write a book to express my emotions and welcome advice.

Mr. Gu is such an idiot, I can't stand it anymore

This book is so depressing and frustrating that I can't stand it.