Divorced 365 Times

I just read a little bit and have some suggestions. 1. I found that the character's speech was very problematic and inconsistent with his identity. This is nothing, but the novel has always wanted to create an image of a unique and clean heroine, but when others asked her to do beauty treatments, she accepted brand-name clothes, and she was a fucking stranger. This is a bit of a problem. Even an ordinary woman wouldn't accept it just to be reserved. To be honest, how could such a young lady be so cheap? She looked even cheaper and coquettish than the low-class ones around the male protagonist and her fiancé. This is obviously because she wants to have a follow-up, otherwise no normal person will accept it if she is short-handed, let alone tens of thousands, or even hundreds of thousands of things, and her current family background cannot afford it. And she said she has self-respect and wants to be equal, so how can she still accept it? Don't you think it's charity? Don't you need to buy and fight for yourself? It's not like she had to.

The introduction is okay, but it's too wordy. The marathon article is too long.

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Hey, the heroine is a bit unreasonable

This heroine is too bitchy!

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Oh, it doesn't look good. It's too wordy.