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[Comment] This transition is a bit abrupt. . .
The previous chapters were written in a warm and ordinary way, but suddenly it turned into a bolt from the blue, and all kinds of oppression and problems came out. . . It's really depressing
Hot search? Is the starting point of the eunuch's four-year book so unorthodox?
[Comment] Another pretentious and slap-in-the-face article.
There are too many of this type. Doesn't it hurt your hands from beating them back and forth? Isn't your face stiff when you pretend? I can't stand this kind of white text.
[Comment] Ah! Just open other people's stuff! Big problem
People with poor quality, self-cultivation, etc. Still have legal problems! This kind of society is too bad! Especially one of the heroines! 😰
[Comment] Bo Yile. . .
The protagonist is a freshman who is about 18-19 years old, and the twin kindergarten sisters are 4 years old. If his mother got married at 18 and gave birth to a child at 19, then the protagonist gave birth to twin sisters when he was 14-15 years old, which means the mother was already 32-34 years old at that time. If it is normal law If the law stipulates that women should not get married before the age of 20, then the age at which the mother will give birth to a daughter will be around 36-37 years old. A properly older woman is not afraid of danger and has to wait until her son is around 14-15 years old before giving birth to another child. The parents of the protagonist are so generous and generous.
[Comment] I just read the book and let me comment on my first complaint about the book.
I am a VIP. Just now, I suddenly jumped to the VIP chapter because I was in a panic. I even subscribed to a chapter. I was speechless. Let's talk about the first point of complaint, that is the protagonist's screen name - Fruit War. It makes me speechless. It has no meaning at all, no artistic conception at all, and it is not worthy of the protagonist at all. Can we learn from the masters Jin Yong and Gu Long? ? Come up with a nice online name. Do you know the author? When I saw the "Mr. Fruit War" part in the book, I laughed out loud, right? ? There are also some suggestions for this book. Can the protagonist be as professional as possible in choosing a novel? There should be no Jin Yong Gulong martial arts in the world in this book. Then try to design as many martial arts novels as possible. Also, if the protagonist wants to write fantasy novels, I think it is better to cultivate the truth and the ancient world of immortals. Write Jin Yong and Gu Long novels from the beginning, and change the background era of each novel to the ancient times of Blue Star, and write it so that it can become a martial arts historical series. For example, Xun Qin is the Qin Dynasty, and Double Dragon is the Tang Dynasty. As for the Gu Long martial arts novels that do not indicate the dynasty, the protagonist can also be adapted and the background is placed in an era suitable for Blue Star. After finishing the martial arts novel, I started writing about cultivation, then Xianxia, and finally The Great Desolation. Make a timeline of when the stories took place. It is best to make each work mention a little bit about characters or things in other books. In this way, wouldn't it be the Chinese version of "World of Warcraft" in the end? Isn't it the martial arts version of "History Book"? This point has never been written by an author. In novels with similar themes and protagonists copying novels, they are written randomly, such as writing about the divine eagle first and then the shooting of the eagle. I also have a question about fantasy novels. I wonder if the author has read The Lord? In it, the protagonists of several previous novels are connected through so-called planes. I think this is a very good idea! Author, you can let the protagonist write a fantasy novel and mention that the story is set in XX plane in the world, and consciously unify the power system when adapting it. For example, the world of the previous novel set 9 realms, and the next novel will also be adapted into 9 realms. The only difference is that the power system and name are different, but the strength in the same realm is almost the same. After accumulating some classic fantasy novels, when the time comes, let the protagonist write a super master! It includes the protagonists and power systems in various previous novels, and the fighting spirit, runes, immortal energy, soul power, and magic all appear in a fantasy novel, becoming the protagonist's final fantasy masterpiece! In the end, I think it's better to touch on songwriting and other things a little bit. I suggest that the protagonist's main focus should be on the novel. It's better to distinguish between the main job and the side job. I personally hope that the main character will be novels, and the songs will be the supplement. It would be better if the protagonist's songs and novels cooperate with each other. For example, for each novel, the protagonist chooses a theme song for him, and it is produced as a set. I think it should be pretty good. For example, in Xiao Li's novel Flying Knife, it is completely possible to write a song with the title "The Ruthless Swordsman". There is no need to have such a song in reality. Just introduce the name, style and a little content of the song. In this way, the protagonist's novel can be supplemented by the main song. If the protagonist's novel is to be adapted into a TV series, then this song can be written as the theme song of the TV series! In this way, novels-songs-TV can be connected By the way, it would be great if the protagonist of martial arts novels could design a set of strength levels for him, so that there would no longer be a series of problems such as Ximen Chuixue or Dugu Qiubai Water Gun, etc.! The protagonist can completely set it himself! Anyway, if I were the protagonist and traveled to a world like this, I would definitely design a strength system suitable for martial arts! In this way, the power system of the martial arts novel is given to death! The people behind you can only wander around in the power system set by the protagonist. Want to find another way? It depends on whether people accept it or not. Haha, this is a good YY point.
[Comment] Don't understand something? The protagonist said that he no longer calls for money! But there is no money!
Just make hundreds of thousands each time? It sounds like he is a pauper! (Compared with rich people) Everything must be decided by others, and I am a creator! I don't feel safe no matter what! Because if you meet a rich and cruel person, you will only have knowledge to use, and nothing else! Only those who are truly rich can be willful and can better protect themselves, their relatives, girlfriends, etc. Just like now, what ability does he have to protect his girlfriend? Just earn hundreds of thousands every time? There must be more rich people than him every minute! Don't compare us poor people, otherwise the price will drop and it will be of no use!
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[Comment] Why did Mao write about conspiracies and conspiracies?
Since it was released, the plot has been obviously vulgar and not as good as the previous one.
[Comment] It's a good book with a blocky pace, but it's too fast and the author is obviously perfunctory.
I feel like it's more difficult to make money this way.
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