Time Travel 1640

Your book is really bad. I gritted my teeth and read a hundred chapters and couldn't bear it anymore. Before deleting, I have a few words to say to the author. If you want to do this, let's take some time to practice writing and increase relevant knowledge and common sense. Three hundred artillery pieces for a force of two thousand men? No artillery division has so many artillery pieces. It's so stupid to keep selling weapons to your opponents when you don't have much weapons. One hundred SEALs have to kneel down when facing five thousand Japanese soldiers with thirty-eight caps. There are a lot of flaws in similar books. There are also typos that make you have to guess the words after reading the book. Please pay attention to the author.

Excuse me, 543 people have traveled through time, who doesn't want to be a pig's foot?

I don't like group wear the most. Travel back to ancient times, and 89 out of 10 modern people who have been spoiled by pseudo-democracy have their own ideas, and no one will obey anyone else. Without a strong leader, one would definitely seek death in ancient times.

Group travel novels are difficult to write. The story must take into account all the time travellers, but they are also dissatisfied with each other, and it is easy to fight among themselves.

More than 500 people on a sightseeing boat to Xisha Islands mortgaged all their belongings to the captain? ? ? ? Is this for sightseeing? Not a human trafficker? ? ?

Has the author ever thought about traveling to the past without GPS and knowing their location, and even traveling with a Type 95 rifle? I want to ask if he has any brains?

Don't forget your motherland in Australia, good!

I really admire the author, the writing style is so unique and there is no eunuch...

There are more than 500 time-travelers, this is too outrageous. The ending of this book has basically been decided, and there is nothing left to read.

What does "war" mean? According to the dictionary, it means "shivering". Does it mean that you are trembling when you travel to the past?

Test the poison with your own body, old bookworms should be careful, those who are not well-read and have no taste can spend their time.

This is complete nonsense. Are the weapons on the cruise ship so advanced? Is it possible in the 21st century? Abandon books

I patiently read it from beginning to end, feeling that the author Jun Yue was becoming less and less confident in his writing. At the beginning, there was a division of labor among the people to start a business, and the business part was pretty good. Later, the politics part was really unnecessary, and the military part was a bit novice. Alas, what a pity!

Trek series

This kind of novel is the same in every novel. The purpose of time travel is to save the Ming Dynasty and transform it. Then nondescript.

Get a more powerful version of the bomb and explode it at the right place at the critical moment. Will history change?

The development is too slow, and I will abandon the book if I don't see what I like.

Damn it, the author is still a fellow countryman

Writing is not easy for newcomers, and coding is even harder. If you keep working hard, good books will not be buried [fn=2_3]