Wulin Alone

Martial arts is not easy, just stick to it and finish it! Come on

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The plot is a bit slow and the sense of conflict is not strong enough, but the plot design is still good. Keep at it and write a classic. I will give you suggestions [20, 6, 316, 26, 49,].

Come on! I support your novels and find them more interesting the more I read them!

I finally got the book I wanted to read. Author, your novel brought back memories of reading martial arts novels when I was a kid. Thank you!

Write well, your writing style is very good, and the plot is also very novel. I have also read a lot of books, and your book is the most worth reading recently. Although the beginning is not very exciting, as I read it slowly, your work still shocked my soul greatly. The writing is also very real, very pure, and not artificial at all. If it's not good, it means that martial arts is no longer good, and you need to revise the beginning. After all, many readers find the beginning boring and don't want to read further, no matter how wonderful you write later, it's my personal opinion. At the same time, I appeal to everyone to read this book carefully. This book is really good and novel. The author has a deep historical research, so it is also very real and informative. A good novel is not about being enjoyable and forgetting after reading it, but about being deeply read, but not forgotten, the author! I will always support you! Come on! You must finish this novel, and you can't do it, or I will kill you!

Personally, I feel that your writing is quite fresh, and your technique is much more proficient than mine. The plot structure is wonderful, making people want to read on, and the description process is detailed. It is not as rough and unclear as mine. It is hard to imagine. Regarding the plot, I seem to have written only one-third of it because your exposition is very comprehensive and thorough, and the work is pure. I feel close to your work. A good beginning is the top priority of a work, and the author has done it. When I started reading, I felt it was a bit boring, and then I wanted to turn it off. Later, I found it interesting, and after reading a few chapters, it was pretty good. The author's description contains many techniques, and some rich insights. I can see that the author can clearly describe some difficulties that are beyond your level. It's not like me writing over and over again, it's still the same few sentences, but I will study more.