My Disciple Died Again

The first female channel book I read at Qidian. It was well written. The foreshadowing before and after, and the ups and downs of the plot are all very well written. Please encourage me.

I still remember this book after reading it for a long time. The content is clear and the main line is not confusing. Yu Yanzun is so cute. It is much more coherent than the common quick travel books. The ending can be regarded as a very good book about female channels. Good books about female channels are rare nowadays in the scumbag world. Don't be influenced by biased comments. After all, everyone has different preferences. There may be some people who don't like it.

"My Apprentice Died Again" is officially launched at 8 o'clock tonight. The content... Mary Sue is completely inconsistent with the original text. Poor You Qian greatly encourages the lovely You fans to get clicks, but You Da's heart is bleeding. Every novel is like her child, written bit by bit with her own hard work. Every big heart Everyone in the book had a dream of being a screenwriter, but obviously, the TV series was ruined... DaDa is very sad, and the readers are also very sad. I understand it especially, because I became a fan of DaDa from this book, and it has special meaning. You can complain and curse at will on the TV series barrage, but I hope your relatives will not take DaDa with you, okay? The novel is a novel and the TV series is a TV series. If we look at them separately, you will see the difference. The TV series strives to create the relaxed and funny feeling of the novel. The novel has its own light-hearted humor. After watching the TV series, you may find a novel that is so beautiful. "The Apprentice" is Dada's first novel and has received very high praise from everyone. It has even been made into a web drama (although I don't want to), but everyone wants to When I think about it, there are so many novels in the world, why DaDa's novels are favored. Although I haven't met a good crew or screenwriter, DaDa's novels can be recognized. Everyone can read novels freely and complain about TV series at will. Don't say bad things about DaDa with negative emotions, because this is DaDa's novel. She is sadder than anyone else. She is already so sad. Can you... Still bear to hurt her heart like this again? Bonus sentence: What should you do if you are unhappy? You Qian's novel is a pleasure to read! I have read every one of Da Da's novels, and any one of them can make you laugh out loud. Be a sensible book fan, starting from us. Good night everyone 😁😁😁, Da Da, can you give me a okay? /Shame/ And the last sentence: The copyright is not in your hands! The copyright is not in your hands! The copyright is not in your hands! Say important things three times😡

At first, I really felt that the female protagonist had a very upright outlook, and the plot and theme settings were really amazing. (So you say that the female protagonist, the Holy Virgin White Lotus, is called San Guan Zheng, then let's look at this matter under the premise of San Guan Zheng, although I don't care if she is the Holy Virgin and good-looking...) Until halfway through the plot, a male supporting actor named Yueying who became a demon appeared, which was inseparable from the female protagonist as an excuse to kill people and hurt people randomly. Complete He didn't listen to the heroine at all, didn't obey the command, and even killed the heroine twice (not indirectly). Afterwards, the heroine did nothing and simply taught him a lesson. Then Yueying just felt guilty for a second perfunctorily... (Of course, he didn't change his behavior even after teaching the male counterpart a lesson.) The two of them fell in love with each other and finished the dungeon together as if nothing had happened. Even the heroine is very brainless and prefers to protect Yueying. (The heroine has a little dog-licking dog called Shota that only points east and dares not hit the west. It has accompanied the heroine in rebirth several times, but its status is much lower than Yueying). I have heard of forced whitewashing, but I have never seen someone not washing it... Every time I see Yueying acting cute, I thought he would twitch to death in the next second, strangle the heroine and then kill the passerby... The heroine actually thought this action of his was very cute... Although I am a reader who agrees with NP and doesn't care about White Lotus's very low reading bottom line, I am not a masochist with a deformed view of love, am I? ? The heroine is surrounded by many beautiful men, which is indeed very enjoyable to watch, but she can't accept all rubbish. Finally, in fact, the author's story writing is really very good for women's videos. At least half of it, only the shadow of the moon, is very intriguing. Most of the articles are still worth reading. Everyone is not perfect. This is just an early work. The author is also growing and the readers are also growing. I hope the author will get better and better!

How can I put it this way? If you don't think too hard, it will be a very funny book, and the story is not bad. But if I insist on using normal people's thinking and logic, I almost dropped my phone╮(￣⊿￣)╭

"，"，，                                                                If you are not a suitable group, you shouldn't criticize the works. I also watch male videos, but when I see works that I think are very toxic, I will quit directly. I will only put forward suggestions for improvements to works that I think are good-looking and want to follow them. If you don't like watching, there are many people who like to watch. If you don't like watching, just quit. It's too much to curse.         ""，，？ I think that only if the author deliberately skimps on the word count or writes perfunctorily, and the readers who pay money to read it are qualified to criticize the author from this aspect, this work can be seen that the author put his heart into the writing. I cannot agree with this behavior of criticizing the work just because I don't like to read the subsequent plot. And speaking from the work itself, the heroine's first reaction after seeing the bug is not to be angry, but to educate, isn't it a normal person's thought? Did she travel from modern times? Readers before changing the screen are at most a shark and a pig, right? Shark man? Seriously? Secondly, if there is a world of cultivating immortals in reality, there must be law enforcers like the police. If cultivating immortals is from the heart and you can do whatever you want, wouldn't the world be in chaos? Aren't mortals already extinct? One sword is like a mountain. And among the cultivators, there must be psychopaths similar to the shark-man criminals in reality, right? No one cares? Seriously? Again, those bugs have just been born, can't their fate be changed? They deserve to die for doing nothing? And the heroine knows that she can be resurrected, so dying a few times to educate bugs is nothing to her, right? Some people are beyond hope. Brainless cool articles are harmful to people.

I read it a long time ago, and I still remember it being a novel with an interesting setting. I thought the reviews would praise it, but the results were a lot weird. The character of the heroine is different from the decisive killing of mainstream immortals, but I think it is also very interesting and principled. No one stipulates that in the world of immortals, people must kill people by any means. The plot clues are very smooth and unconventional, and the emotional line is not cruel. Some plots left a deep impression on me. I read it as a cool article before, maybe it doesn't meet the coolness of some people? After all, everyone's reading style is different. Maybe people who are used to watching the protagonist destroy the world will feel that the heroine of this article is not in line with the setting of the novel about cultivating immortals. If they think it is inappropriate, there is no need to attack this novel like this. You can find something more suitable for you.

Suddenly I realized that the people writing this book are all apprentices or even trainees. Have you finished reading this book? At least it has to reach the level of a fan like me (disciple, and I am into comics, so my level is a bit low). If you haven't finished reading it or read pirated copies, don't come here to criticize me. I can't support you free prostitutes at the beginning.

I feel like I often see readers who always talk about other people's holy fathers and holy mothers. If the plot of the novel does not take human lives easily, they will feel unsatisfied. They will argue with other readers about what is reality. I don't know whether it's because inferior novels and inferior games have too much influence on people, or because the social environment is not harmonious enough. They feel that they have to do whatever they want in the virtual world. Tit for tat is seen as the basic rule, and if the other person punches me, then I have to take off at least one of his arms. They like this "cool text". There are many such violent people in the comment area. They think they understand the nature of society, believe that selfishness and speaking with strength are the codes of conduct that should be followed in reality, and refuse to believe in goodwill and dedication. I think this is terrible.

Is the heroine the Virgin Mary? It's as if the world's population can only increase and not decrease. The villain on the opposite side has killed people, but the heroine is still reluctant to get rid of him. She can't judge anything about this kind of thing, ha! I didn't realize that he couldn't be saved, okay? If you want to let him harm other people, don't say that you are doing something to save the world.