Hongyuan Supreme

The writing is okay, but it's a little rough in some places and makes it uncomfortable to read! The character descriptions are not clear enough, and the character of the protagonist is somewhat vague. But overall, it can be seen that it is telling a very interesting story. Some suggestions are to write the plot in a fierce and bloody eruption, which is the most attractive, and not harsh in terms of emotion. All writers are trembling in writing this aspect of the plot. I have been following the book, and the opinions expressed by one person are a bit one-sided~~ Please bear with me!

It would be perfect if the update speed were faster

At first I just tried reading it, but then I gradually fell in love with it. It's a slow-burner. It's a great book. I give it a thumbs up.

🌹🤭🌹🤭🌹 4 votes! Setbacks will come and they will pass, Hot tears will flow down and be put away. Nothing can discourage you, Let's accept the good and the bad. Then go on living without saying a word. Don't worry, time will give you whatever you want. If you are not injured, the years will be fine. Blessings and blessings! 🌹🤝😊🤝🌹

Come support and speed up the update is the best

I really admire you. You wrote this book when I was at Qidian. A few years later, I changed my account number and came back to work, but you were still writing.

The book is very good, and there are a few sentences that would make me uncomfortable if I didn't say them. First, in terms of the plot, I am always unhappy. For example, when the fight is more interesting, the scene suddenly changes, and the author, like a director, cuts off that section. Without conflict, the reader's mind will not move, so I want to say that you need to make the plot turbulent. The second is the emphasis on words. For example, in Chapter 115, the last two sentences you wrote made me feel more and more unhappy, "Humph, finally here!" Under this sentence, Luo said "That word is too difficult to type, I can't type it out." Looking at others, another "Humph!" You have already heard the hum, so don't write hum. The reader will understand with a hum. Either you don't add a hum in the first sentence, and someone snorts coldly at the end, or you snort coldly and describe other alternative words, it's the same. Just these two points, it would be troublesome to say too much.

The book is very good, the author is attentive, and the writing style is quite regular. However, the plot is always not intense, such as fighting. When it feels more interesting, the scene suddenly changes, which makes people feel stuck in the throat. Let me give you a suggestion, you should make the plot intense. In other words, there is a lack of grand scenes and fierce battle scenes.

I've been working overtime so far, so I might as well vote before going to sleep.

[Fn=2_3] Click to read the new chapter, it's so well written!

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There is little breeze in the hot summer and nowhere to find coolness. I can only sit facing the window with a bamboo forest in front of it. How to relieve the heat, there is clear shade in the forest, a quiet room for reading and reading, and the world of articles is wide.

I remember that you wrote this book in 2014. I haven't been to Qidian for a long time. I was browsing out of boredom today and found that you haven't finished this book yet...🥵

The author needs to revise the beginning. If you write like this, it is too straightforward and lacks suspense. You must leave suspense when writing a book. It will make people want to read more. If you explain everything, it will seem uninteresting, just like watching TV that has been spoiled. . . .

Get up in the morning and watch the flowing water by the river, and play chess pieces leisurely after the rain. People who live alone in the mountains are quiet, lying down and looking at the long clouds, which makes them good at composing poems.

The worldly affairs follow their fate and the mind is at peace; life is like a dream, and it is difficult to calm down; simple articles are also interesting; graceful pen and ink are also fragrant.

You have to defeat the self that is hesitant because of past failures. Failure cannot be forgotten, but if you keep carrying that painful memory and just avoid it, it will not change no matter how long it takes. I think it is precisely because you have failed that you understand what you can accomplish.

Still can't find it, forget it, I'll just subscribe, it's better than tipping to others 🌹

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Time will grow longer or shorter depending on how people feel. The theory of relativity is really both romantic and sad.

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After reading your book, I suddenly felt ashamed. My "Seven Pearls of Hongmeng" is still a little worse than yours. Your writing style and characterization are where I learned from. Also, your suspense setting can be described as ups and downs, one link after another. Every time you unravel one, you find that there is another hidden in it, which makes people involuntarily want to read the whole book in one breath, so as to understand the whole truth of the matter and learn from the scriptures... Seeing that I, a newcomer, work so hard to type and write comments for clicks, collections and recommendations, I hope you can recommend this book to me at the end of the chapter after the update. Thank you. After all, you are now a god in my eyes.

I really want to look for the person I used to be, the feeling I had before. In fact, more often than not, I'm looking for my former self. When I fell in love for the first time, do you still remember that boy with a pounding heart? Do you still remember secretly holding the peak summer in the campus and giving a note to the girl you had a crush on next door? Do you still remember running hard on the playground just to take a look at that girl? This is the youth that everyone had in that year when we were in a hurry.

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There were two puppies in the courtyard. The puppy asked its mother, "Mom, Mom, where is happiness?" Is happiness on my tail? Mom is right. Happiness is on your tail. The puppy just kept spinning in circles, chasing its own tail. The mother touched its head and said, silly boy, come on, look ahead, move forward, happiness will follow you. We are happiness itself.

Little loli Yingying, I like this name

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