Instruments Move Mountains and Rivers

The novel is very good, the cultivation system is novel, and the plot is ingenious. It is a fantasy that people look forward to. After reading it, I have some thoughts, which I would like to mention here. 1. Tone. At the beginning of the book, the protagonist suffers "mother and Yiyi" and embarks on the road of revenge, which determines the overall tone of the book to be relatively dull. However, after a few chapters, the protagonist's language, inner thoughts, and actions all reveal a cheerful feeling. Maybe the author wanted to make the reader look relaxed, but in this way, it felt a bit out of place. If possible, I suggest the author make the atmosphere more serious and formal. 2. Character. It seems that the characters all have one personality, because their language styles are similar, such as "Zhuo Jun". The description was very good when he first appeared. He was a very distinctive character, which made people's eyes bright. But after a while, his language became the same as the protagonist. In fact, his language style can be more ethereal. After all, he is a master and has such temperament. 3. Plot design. The apprenticeship part is a bit sudden. There is no reasonable reason why Zhuo Jun accepts the protagonist as his apprentice. It should be paved in advance. 4. Small problems with writing. Character dialogues like to start with quotation marks. "..." Said. "..." Said. ... You can change the form and it will look much better. Let me give you an example. XX said: "..." "Really?" Xiao Ming was surprised, then frowned and thought, "You can't lie to me, can you?" "No way!" Zhao Jiu was surprised, then looked suspicious, "Is that guy Xiaomu really that handsome?" After hearing this, Xiaomu looked proud, "That's necessary!" The above are all my personal suggestions. If they are not good, please don't take them seriously.

Why is the currency in the book gold coins? If it is okay in our world, but in a world where everyone is strong, how can gold, a flashy metal, serve as currency?

Is there a grade standard, classification, etc. For weapon skills and life weapons in the book? Seeing that there is only a general description of some powerful weapon techniques in the book without a specific summary, it is recommended to establish a classification and grade of all related tools, so that an image can be clearly established in the minds of readers.

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