The Inheritance of Civilization in the Last Days

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I originally made a lot of suggestions, but one login exception and all were lost. So annoying. Let's talk about it briefly If the protagonist feels that he is in danger, don't carry any burden, especially the heroine. Don't talk nonsense about having to die together. There is no encumbrance and there is still a chance to escape. Just wait to die with this burden. I hope the author can pay more attention to this aspect. . The book is very nice.

The difference in level is not reflected, and the description of the fight is too simple and contradictory. I remember the previous article said that the protagonist feels that he can fight two black iron-level monsters alone, but not more. So using normal logic to understand, it is easy to kill one, and it takes a while to kill two without getting hurt. Three or more monsters may be injured, but when describing it, it is as simple as a few sentences to kill a few monsters. It feels like It happened in an instant, and when it came to killing a long-tongued toad, it was the same with a few simple descriptions. It turned out that it took 3 minutes, so controlling the time and rhythm of the battle was also a problem. It is recommended to think about how to use the level of the character, the level of the dark beast, plus the number and combat environment to measure the level of description of the battle. The current monotonous understatement has no appeal and tension. In addition, the adventure of the saplings in the park and the scene of killing the three-headed dog felt a bit childish, so I suggest you put more thought into the idea.