Sky and Sky

After re-reading The Evil King of Another World, I watched The Sky of Heaven for the second time. I felt a lot of emotion, and even more heartbroken. Compared to the heart-warming feeling after watching Evil Lord carefully, the ending of Heaven and Sky was more nondescript, breathtaking, and uncomfortable. There are many chapters that you can't read without skipping. This novel is doomed to have problems at its foundation. In the third level, the higher the level, the smaller the length of writing. There are more than 700 chapters written about the Cold Sun Continent, but there are only 500 chapters about the world outside the mortal world that should be focused on. In terms of characterization, Jun Yinglian is a better character, but the portrayal is unsatisfactory. Hanyang Continent didn't write it, Qingyun Tianyu seems to have written a lot of emotional scenes, and it seems like nothing was written, and Red Dust World is even less dramatic. In the end, looking back on this character, does it really have any distinctive character? Bing Xinyue and Wenren Chuchu didn't say whether they were with Ye Xiao or not. There wasn't even a formal wedding at the end. It seemed as if the heroines existed only because of Ye Xiao. Is there any female character who was as vividly portrayed as Dugu Xiaoyi? The finale is even more outrageous. Instead of filling in the pits and making up for the regrets, there is a plot where the protagonist is beaten up by the brother of the protagonist in the previous book. It really takes the spotlight. No matter how much Fengling likes a book, the protagonist should be the protagonist's strength, and the protagonist's brother should be the protagonist's brother's strength. In the end, Ye Xiao's cultivation did not become a master, but became a junior? Originally, the protagonist of a book should grow independently. In the mid-term, characters from other books should not appear to affect Ye Xiao's growth. Otherwise, not only will it be suspected of resting on one's laurels, but the protagonist's growth into a strong generation will be entrusted to the illusory luck and destiny. As for a linkage like Lin Dong and Xiao Yan after they grow up, it would be good, but at least the protagonists who grow up should be equal, instead of ending like this without even seeing Chu Yang, Chu Yang's brothers can beat Ye Xiao to the ground. Well, reading a book is already a melancholy thing, but looking at the sky and the sky is even more melancholy. It is absolutely impossible to watch it a third time. After reading the introduction of Feng Ling Zuodao Qingtian, I have no desire to read it. I hope that Xie Jun and Ao Shi will not become the pinnacle of Feng Ling in the world.

The author is too nagging, too watery, and uses a lot of swear words, which makes people unable to see his true nature. He just feels embarrassed. This has something to do with my language and literature skills. Moreover, the mixture of classical Chinese and vernacular Chinese is awkward. What impressed me the most was that when the protagonist gave the Danyun elixir to Lan Langlang, he said, "Please forgive me." I wondered if this was a modal particle from "Water Margin". Moreover, he can tell you about one thing over and over again for several chapters, especially the early auction section, the conversation between the protagonist and Fanyunfuyulou, which lasted for six or seven chapters. He can also talk about a simple truth in vernacular. It is really long-winded, with no practical information at all, and the plot is delayed, which is really a flaw.

It must have been more than ten years since I read all the previous books by Feng Ling. To be honest, the plot in the second half of the "Tian Wai Tian" part was too rushed and ended too hastily. The plot in the last two hundred chapters went too fast, and some characters even had no appearance or sense of presence. This may be the reason why Feng Ling himself said that he was not satisfied with the end in a hurry. Otherwise, I feel that another 5800 chapters would be more than enough for the second half of the plot, but I still support Feng Ling and think of that day's running under the sunset, that was my lost youth 😭😭

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Modern urban romance reveals the intrigues between colleagues, the boss's harsh demands on employees, the temptation of interests and beauty in society, how to face family and friends, the choice and pain and hesitation, the unethical affairs of leaders and subordinates, how to become the company's vice president from a small role, how to leverage the company's employees to resign collectively, along the way, but can not withstand the provocation between brothers, where will they go? Can they go back to the past...

Ye Xiao: Qingyun Tianyu laughs at the monarch, calls me the monarch in the universe, and laughs at all the heroes in the world. Cultivation realm: The ninth level of Daoyuan is at the peak of subtle perfection, and the prison level is at the elementary level. Alias: Alchemist Feng Zhiling, the throne of Lingbao Pavilion in Hanyang Continent; Ye Chongxiao, a common disciple of the three supreme elders of Qingyun Tianhanyue Tiange; Ye Jun, a pseudonym used briefly when traveling around the world.

The writing of a reborn boss feels like two hundred and fifty, with too much nonsense. Can fantasy novels not use so many modern words? The poems written are not very good. The more I read, the more embarrassing they become.

The protagonist is too pretentious, forcing himself to show off, and his aura of intelligence is too strong. Basic logic is missing. It's written very casually! ! ! Is the author too pretty? To be honest, I liked the author's The Evil King from Another World very much and masturbated 4 times. But the others are really unsatisfactory, painful to watch, and embarrassing. Now that the author is awesome, he can say that he can leave if he doesn't like it. I really want to remind you that even if you take a few minutes to read it after writing every day, the result will not be like this.

No, brother, of course you will find this book poisonous if you look at it from your current perspective. This was a book written in 2014. At that time, it was considered a fairy tale 🙂

It makes me laugh. Who is so talented? I took a trip and saw such slogans when I came back, which was an eye-opener. The depressed mood was gone. But why is no one talking about grabbing monthly tickets? That guy didn't even call me to tell me, so he missed out on the double credit; what a pity.

I just started reading this book, and now that I'm at chapter 273, I really can't stand it anymore. You said that your official novel website has various missing chapters, forcing readers to find pirated versions. Then what are you going to do to see the genuine version? Looking at the original version, there are also various typos and *****. There are still fewer chapters, which is really frustrating. 😡

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The author's name can be changed. Instead of calling it Feng Ling Tian Xia, change it to Shui Ben Tian Xia.

This book is actually pretty good in the first and middle stages (in my opinion), but it's a bit unfinished at the end. Cool and simple writing, if you are looking for profound connotations, stay away.

It's a classic book. I remember reading it when I was in primary school.

I came here specifically to spray! Could you please be smarter and stop treating readers like idiots by explaining so much?

The setting of time travel and rebirth in this book is really not as good as the previous ones, and the family relationship is very awkward. There are emotional conflicts between different planes, especially between past and present lives! I haven't read much, but when I reach the second plane, it won't work! Legend of Lingtian, The Evil King of Another World, The Proud Ninth Heaven, I read it in one go, and it was very enjoyable to read through it multiple times.

I have read the book review sections of many old books, and they are all written by trainees crazily. Different styles are popular in different periods, so I will dio the previous books for my current taste. . . 😒In a few years, some of the books you are reading now will be so awesome. How many books can really make you a god? Accumulate virtue with your mouth! Sailor dead 🐴

Why do you put some things that are not related to the main text at the front? Aren't the extras at the back? It's really uncomfortable

It's rare that this author writes a book where the heroine is not someone else's fiancée

I used to watch pirated copies, but now I'm watching them as apprentices

I read it when I was in elementary school. It was the first novel I read. It was all about youth.

The author doesn't seem to understand that if the opponent is shit, then the protagonist can only be considered a shit-maker - doesn't beating two fools in the finale make the protagonist incompetent?

I watched it in high school. . Youth

Forgive me, I'm a scholar. I'm actually making fun of Ye Xiao and Bai Chen's CP😭😭😭😭

Southern Emperor, Ji Qingxiao Northern Emperor, Ce Xingchen Eastern Emperor, White Jade Sky Western Emperor, Meng Tianluo Southern Emperor, Long Yutian Northern Emperor, Han Jianghai Liu Li Emperor, Xuanyuan Liuli Leaf from the Sky, Ye Hongchen Clouds and Rain Tower, Bai Chen Monarch Pavilion, Ye Xiao

From the ninth level of the world to the firmament of heaven, thank you to the author.

Reading this book for the second time. In the blink of an eye, more than ten years have passed. The last time I saw him, he was still a kid in junior high school. This time, I saw he was already a college graduate. I used to hide under the quilt and not sleep, using an old and broken Samsung mobile phone to watch secretly. At that time, I thought it would be great to watch it when I grow up. More than ten years have passed, and when I look back at the novel One Night, I no longer have the same feeling I had at the beginning. The sentence that once felt exquisite now seems a bit embarrassing, but it still arouses an unspeakable feeling in my heart. After looking at it for a while, it seemed as if he was lying together with his former self. The little kid in the past felt nervous and excited, but now the miserable cow and horse shed two tears without knowing it. After all, I grew up with regrets and failed hopes. But when I was a child, I could look forward to the future when I grow up. What can I expect now? I can't see the future, and I am struggling to find a job in a muddle. Now I can only read the stories I read when I was young, chew on the residue of those childhood memories, and long for a little light and hope to numb myself.

Jun Yinglian reminded me of Mo Qingwu, the heroine in Feng Da's last novel. Isn't that what Chu Yang and Mo Qingwu had in their previous lives? They liked each other but couldn't be together. Chu Yang also avoided Mo Qingwu, which eventually turned into a tragedy. In this new book, Ye Xiao and Jun Yinglian are also so similar. This time, it is Ye Xiao who is the tragic one. This time the author had to compensate Jun Yinglian well and let Ye Xiao double the love he owed to Jun Yinglian in his previous life. Such a good woman deserves to be protected with his life. When I saw Jun Yinglian, I realized that Xuan Bing was really not as good as Jun Yinglian. Xuan Bing's proud persistence should be let go. Otherwise, it would seem too hypocritical. There is no pride in face that can't be let go. If these are more important than love, then it is not worthy of Ye Xiao's continued love. . .

"Humanity Continent"