Saiyan Blood in Another World

First of all, Saiyans are the highlight of this book, and most people probably read the book for this reason. Therefore, if the setting of Saiyans is not well written, it will be 100% dead. Then, I read the first 6 chapters of the book myself, and I have some suggestions that I don't want to express. Just the content, routines of these 6 chapters, and a little bit of content revealed by the author in the discussion forum. First, the beginning is terrible! Second, the layout is too small! How many people thought it was time travel? Anyway, I flipped through the beginning and read it twice before I realized that the protagonist was not from time travel but from the local area. It can be said that the Dragon Ball animation at the beginning is simply disturbing readers and has no meaning. In fact, just writing about being struck by lightning and then having a Dragon Ball world and Saiyan bloodline would be completely OK. Just like being struck by lightning and traveling through time, no one would be confused about whether it was the Thunder God's hands that shook him or aliens. Let's talk about the plot, as far as these 6 chapters are concerned, it is completely the standard plot of a third-rate novel. It is a snake oil. Whether you want to write about the Saiyan bloodline or the Nobita bloodline, you can use any method. But on the other hand, after reading these 6 chapters, you will probably just think "this is just a third-rate novel." Even if you don't read the subsequent plot, you will probably know that it is a vulgar plot of slaps and counter-slaps in the face. As far as this book is concerned, it is a nightmare to think about the plot of "the protagonist is slapped in the face, and then turns into a Saiyan and slaps back in the face; then gets beaten again, and then becomes a Super Saiyan and fights back; then gets beaten again, and then turns into a Saiyan and fights back again" is a nightmare. In my opinion, it might be better to start with the protagonist being raised by a master deep in the mountains and forests, fighting black bears and tigers every day to practice martial arts, and then starting to go down the mountain because he wants to pursue something. Then when he encounters an enemy, he punches him and blows it up without telling the plot (actually, it is probably the plot of Dragon Ball). To put it bluntly, Dragon Ball is full of passion, and forcing a loser to play a slap-in-the-face plot will only make people think it is insulting to Dragon Ball. Next, let's talk about the pattern. Seeing that the author said that there will be no planets that will be blown up, readers must carefully consider the strength setting of this book. I remember it was mentioned at the beginning of the chapter that complete dragon transformation can only be achieved by level nine or above. Anyway, it should be considered an advanced combat power. Looking at Dragon Ball again, Goku's gorilla transformation should be in the same size class as a dinosaur, and his combat power should not be much different. So what is the combat power of the gorilla? The encyclopedia tells us that it is more than 200. At the end of the juvenile chapter, the battle with the Big Devil Piccolo is more than 300. The basic moves are Wu Kong Technique and Turtle Style Qigong. There are no super transformations, super turtle style Qigong, etc. Therefore, based on this speculation, the top strength of the juvenile chapter can probably sweep across this world with dinosaurs as its fighting force. As an aside, the encyclopedia states that when fighting Raditz, Goku's power was 400 and he had not yet transformed into a Saiyan. When fighting Vegeta, his power was 5,000. The final power of the Super Series was 150 million. There may be discrepancies in the data, but what I want to point out is that Dragon Ball's combat power has been expanding since the Saiyan form, which makes no sense at all. Even if Naruto's setting is quite exaggerated, it seems that at most it is just playing on the moon. If the author had followed the format of an ordinary web article, it would have been completely different. The most enjoyable part of Dragon Ball could only be abandoned. Nearly a thousand words have been said. If the author thinks it is acceptable, he can add more details. To be honest, the readers of this book are probably for the passionate and exaggerated Dragon Ball setting. If it were written in this style, this book would probably have no future or money.

Even if you are greedy for life and fearful of death, you deserve to be called a Saiyan. Bah!

The male protagonist wants to be mentally retarded, no, he is mentally retarded.

The first one says that no matter how many times you watch Dragon Ball, you still won't get tired of it. The second one immediately says that you don't understand the Saiyan bloodline. Why don't you write a chicken.

I logged in three times before logging in to my account. I couldn't enter the writer's area after that. I had to wait until tonight and try again. I can't post new chapters now.

Alas, I was quite optimistic about this book when it first came out, but now look at the results. . . Sigh.

The author has written all of them. How many pieces have you written? It's been so long and I haven't turned into a Super Saiyan yet. I'm also drunk. How long do you want to write before the protagonist turns into a Super Saiyan? No change, looks boring

It's a good subject, but it's a pity that I ran out of time to write it.

Maybe the author has not read the original work, so the second chapter persuades him to quit.

Do you have Super Saiyan blood? Why don't you see the ability to transform? I just want to say that a person has Uchiha blood but only knows fire escape. Let's change the title of the book!

I gave up after reading the second chapter. People on Earth know about the Dragon Balls but not the Saiyans. That's it! !

It's not about how the Saiyan blood survives in the dinosaur world~ but how the dinosaur world is not ruined by the Saiyans~ It's really GG if the back is broken~

It's very well written and I won't get tired of it. , When I saw Chapter 240. Suddenly I had an amazing idea. How awesome would it be if two Wukongs exchanged and practiced with each other?

1. Pay attention to the coherence of the plot, try not to make logical errors, and don't make readers feel that they are inconsistent! 2. Pay attention to practicing your writing skills. It doesn't mean that the scene is grand, but the description is exquisite. To practice ordinary language to reveal extraordinary artistic conception is the highest state of language control! 3. Please try not to make typos. This will make readers question the author's level. Moreover, readers are enjoying reading and suddenly a typo appears, which is really off-putting! 4. Increase the connotation and artistic conception of the novel. For old readers who have read too many books, all the gorgeous clothes are not as attractive as the resonant connotation!

As a new writer, you need to understand one thing: when creating characters, you should show your distinctive character and extraordinary speaking background, so that the characters you create can be active on the paper. I really like the male protagonist created by the author now, and I quite admire the author's skill in creating characters.

As a pure reader, I read this novel and found the plot and characters attractive enough. However, sometimes I felt there were some problems with the writing and I looked forward to better writing.

It's pretty good that the author can keep updating daily. I can't stop reading it. Please keep updating!

Although the author is writing a novel, the things he expresses are very real, and many of them touch his heart~~

The writing is great, the content is quite attractive, and it is worth watching. Come on, work hard to create! 🌹

Looking at the updated parts, I found that the author's concept is quite novel, and the original conflict points are gradually revealed. The male protagonist's restraint needs more characterization, and I hope the author can write a different plot. I like the author's writing, keep it up!

The writing style of this book is simply not on the same level as most online novels. I give this book thirty-two likes!

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Sing with me: "Don't ask me where I come from. I am supporting the author's book. The author wrote a good book...!", Cough cough.

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I finally got a big break in recent chapters, which is so exciting!! There are currently only a few good works with few bugs in the starting point. Judging from my decades of experience in novels, if I maintain the current level, I hope to become a god!!!

Can natives understand what Super Saiyan is?

Clicked in again, the author doesn't plan to kill the Saiyans? 🥺