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Plot problem, after watching 70+, the shortcomings gradually accumulated and there were no obvious advantages to cover up, so I could only watch this.

I feel that this writing style is so fresh, and it has a unique feeling when put into an online article But so far it feels a bit bland

I thought it was a story about time travel in a parallel world, but it turned out to be a story about transformation in a parallel world. Male-to-female transformation is not about a boy in our world transforming into a girl in a parallel world, but a man in a parallel world transforming into a girl in a parallel world. Do you draw comics? It doesn't matter. But the author should not play with the spirit of chess. It is understood that when creating Go Soul, he not only visited many Go teachers, but also collected a large number of chess records played by professional Go players. But now, after reading so many chapters, the protagonist only knows how to draw. Relying on my shallow Go knowledge to draw, instead of visiting chess players, I hired a Go teacher. How could I still win a prize? You must know that every chess game in Chess Soul, even if it is played by a passerby, is a chess game played by professional chess players. I think he is drawing a Go boy with the skin of a chess spirit. Harmony between heaven and earth, great devil between heaven and earth

The plot after two hundred chapters made me feel uncomfortable. I felt like it was stuck in my throat and I couldn't express it. I had nowhere to vent. After reading nearly a hundred chapters, I couldn't resolve the contradiction. I knew that the author wanted to write about the growth of the two people. This was also the foreshadowing laid before, but this does not mean Nearly a hundred chapters are spent watching two little girls coy and drag Tata. In the previous article, it was said that hormones cannot completely control a person's thoughts. In the second article, Liang Yu's indecisiveness and indiscriminate behavior have created cracks in the protagonist's image. Let's talk about this contradiction. As I write, I keep writing about being followed. The inexplicable plot makes people scratch their heads. It would be great if the contradiction is resolved, but the conflict is not resolved yet. The protagonist has not talked about this conflict for countless chapters. It is intermittent and makes people feel really uncomfortable. Is this really a high-IQ talent? What about the high emotional intelligence shown earlier? What are the priorities? The protagonist's 30+ years of experience in his previous life are no match for the changes he has experienced in the past six months? Let's talk about contradictions. This Liang-Chen contradiction should be a sublimation of the whole book. I didn't see the sublimation, and it made me feel a lot uncomfortable Luo Shaotian, who was portrayed in the previous article, was obviously well portrayed, but suddenly he was sent a lunch and disappeared directly. I really didn't understand it. According to the previous description, did a person who values ​​dreams and hard work give up because of an expected failure of his confession? This is a young man who needs to be cured! Maybe the author wants to highlight the persistence of Chen Nan, Liang Yu and others in their dreams, but please pay attention, readers are not stupid. Having said all this, I hope the author will feel something after reading it, and hope that future works will continue to do this.

He writes about transformation and loves to watch transformations, he has a girlish heart.

The first time I bubbled up, I was a little excited 🥺

The front is still a time-travelling of a mature adult, but the back is a completely sensual little girl...

Oh! I found that I have never been so disgusted with the color green. The stock market is in a sluggish state, but it is full of greenery and has been cut like leeks again and again. What a trap! Read the novel to change your mood! I found n novels to read, either the main character is green or the supporting character is green, I have a bit of a myocardial infarction! Forget it (ﾉ_ _)ﾉI'm going to read the news, what the hell! There is someone cheating on someone in the financial column, and I'm a little irritable! Watch the funny video, look! What is that... Shabi is still laughing when she is cuckolding, damn... My eyes are already wet. Fortunately, I don't have a wife or girlfriend, otherwise how would I live my life?

No wonder this novel is not popular.

Which work does Liang Yu plan to paint next? Forget it, I won't erect an archway—— Which work will the author copy next? More will be added if you guess correctly. Two updates before the obvious hint is given in the text, one update after the hint and before the comic title is announced. Limit two per person, any more will be invalid.

The first part seemed okay, but more than 30 chapters on how to bet on being a girlfriend is extremely toxic... A good book was wasted.

I can't appreciate this kind of culture, but I still have to rush for it.

Anyway, I was deeply moved when I first read this book a few years ago.

Same-sex time-traveling, books about transmigration or about girls are usually next door. It doesn't mean that you can't write about girls. Even if you write about girls, you don't want a man to travel through a woman or a woman to travel through a man. Don't you feel awkward when you fall in love? I only see ghosts and beasts. Will a good work have a ghost and beast feeling? This is like writing a gay novel. The problem is that most people are not gay. Normal people will just feel disgusted after reading it, okay?

Why do you like the transformation scene so much? I really like this genre, but I really can't stand it. Nine out of ten books are transformations, it's true. . . . . Hey, it's not for personal reasons. It's really poisonous. I watched it after someone recommended it, but I had to give it up after seeing another transformation. Feel sorry.

It's pretty good, but not very popular. I just discovered this novel now.

I saw many readers asking in the book review section whether this article is of the Lily type. To this question, I would like to say: I don't know. Because I've only seen half of it. But from my personal point of view, this book tells a story, a very warm story, a story about people and people, heart and heart, redemption and self-redemption. The author's writing style and plot are excellent, and the story connection is smooth and natural. It can add a touch of warmth to you after reading it. The last book that touched me so much was "The Quiet Parallel World" by Mr. Xue. The plot tension and discussion of life and youth in that book were also very good. However, like this book, although it is a niche book, the author also tells the story carefully. Anyway, cheers to the author! When reading this book, I felt something but didn't know what to say.

The most disgusting thing about this book is that it is copied and copied. It has to be written with my own inspiration. Other comics will at least introduce the original author.

It's August 2020, is anyone still reading this book? I really like the freshness and uniqueness of this book. Support the author to open a new book, Love Free Prostitution!

It's only after more than 300 chapters that I get VIP status. The author is amazing.

The story is light and interesting, but it's a pity that online readers are unlikely to like it. The transformation is also good. I can't stand the male protagonists at the starting point anymore. They only know the lower body and their IQ usually does not exceed 80.

There is a question that I have never been able to figure out. Logically speaking, when Liang Yu was on Earth, the Internet media should have been very popular. Could it be that Liang Yu before time travel was still in 2000? Otherwise, there is no reason for her to act like she has never been exposed to online media after time travel. She is more native than a native during this time travel.

Readers who have not experienced the baptism of healing and depression will not be able to see the sadness of this book. My trashy daily book recommendation has changed? You actually recommended such a good novel?

I dug out the book eight years ago and read it, and I was quite pleasantly surprised. The story is very easy to attract people to read. There are group portraits of cartoonists, assistants, editors, fans, etc. In the book. The various characters are all very interesting. The only drawback is that the subject matter is too niche.

Happy Lantern Festival, did everyone eat Lantern Festival today?

I am currently writing fan fiction. In order to write a good fan fiction, I need to deduct a lot of details from the original work, just to make it less embarrassing. After seeing that the author wrote this and had such data, I realized.

There was a lot of text in the early stage, but the more it went on, the more it collapsed until I couldn't write anymore.

Maybe it's a little late to post now, but you, the author, are so kind to write this book. All the plots are pieced together, and it can be said that there is no originality at all. Except for the name, you may have spent some time on it, and even the plots of semi-original comics are actual works. Let me narrate it again with your writing style. Does it turn out that writing a novel only requires writing?

I just feel that there is not enough publicity and no one knows about this book.

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