A Cozy, Cute Life

When I saw the beginning, the heroine who was a legitimate daughter was talking to her stepmother, making her look like a common daughter. I didn't feel very good. I was quite worried about the author's ancient Chinese proverbs and was afraid of falling into the trap of a novice author. Has anyone seen it? Can I go in and take a look?

1. Pay attention to the coherence of the plot, try not to make logical errors, and don't make readers feel that they are inconsistent! 2. Pay attention to practicing your writing skills. It doesn't mean that the scene is grand, but the description is exquisite. To practice ordinary language to reveal extraordinary artistic conception is the highest state of language control! 3. Please try not to make typos. This will make readers question the author's level. Moreover, readers are enjoying reading and suddenly a typo appears, which is really off-putting! 4. Increase the connotation and artistic conception of the novel. For old readers who have read too many books, all the gorgeous clothes are not as attractive as the resonant connotation!

It's pretty good to read, but the writing style becomes more and more like a gunman as you go to the back. The writing style of "Tsk, tut, tut,...", "Isn't it just..." Is too inconsistent with the atmospheric part at the front.

So this book ends when I'm about to get married?

I don't understand what's the age difference between these three brothers? At one point, it was said that the sixth brother was 3 years older than the ninth brother, and the ninth brother was 5 years older than the thirteenth brother! That works out to about 25 at most! Later it was said that Han Ning had been assisting Liu Ge for 20 years since he was a teenager! Then it costs more than 30! Author, it's okay for you to blur your age, but don't make people laugh too much!

It's beautiful, I enjoyed writing it and I enjoyed reading it too.

After reading so many chapters, I really can't help but sigh. It can be seen that the author is very careful. It seems that the words are very simple and there is no gorgeous rhetoric.

Generally speaking, the writing is very good, especially the concept is quite novel. It breaks the routine of many novels today and shows the author's own style. The structure is well-conceived and logical. It is a rare masterpiece. Put it in the bookshelf. Looking forward to big updates!

Powerful power - a typical plot in third-rate novels~~~ However, all this is written by an author with such gorgeous writing and a deep understanding of human society and human affairs, which can only add more splendor to the novel. I always thought that there would be nothing good in this library, but now I have to admit that I was wrong.

It's the most annoying thing to wait for the update.