A Cozy, Cute Life

Seeing the beginning, the legitimate daughter of the female protagonist kept referring to her stepmother as "legitimate mother," making her feel like she was born out of wedlock. It didn't feel right, and I was quite worried about the author's skill in writing ancient romance novels, fearing I might fall into the trap of a novice author. Has anyone seen this? Can I go in and watch it?

1. Pay attention to the coherence of the plot, and try to avoid logical errors so that the reader doesn't feel lost or confused. 2. Practice your writing style. It's not about grand scenes or exquisite descriptions; the highest level of language mastery is achieving the ability to convey extraordinary meaning through ordinary language. 3. Try to avoid typos.

It's quite good, but the writing style gets increasingly ghostwritten towards the end. Phrases like "tsk, tsk, tsk..." And "that's exactly it..." Clash with the grander themes of the earlier parts.

So the book ends when the protagonist is about to get married?

I can't figure out how much of an age difference these three brothers actually have! First they say the sixth brother is 3 years older than the ninth brother, and the ninth brother is 13 to 15 years older! That would be at most around 25! Then they say Han Ning started assisting the sixth brother when he was a teenager for 20 years! That would make him at least in his 30s! Author, it's fine to be vague about the ages, but don't make it too jarring for the audience!

It's a great read; I enjoyed writing it and I enjoyed reading it too.

After reading so many chapters, I can't help but express my feelings. It's clear that the author put a lot of effort into it; the language seems simple and lacks any fancy rhetoric.

Overall, the author writes very well, especially the concept, which is quite novel and breaks away from the clichés of many current novels, showcasing the author's own style. The structure is meticulous and logically sound, making it a rare gem. Added to my bookshelf. Looking forward to more updates!

Powerful forces—a typical trope in third-rate novels! However, when written by an author with such eloquent prose and a deep understanding of human nature and social dynamics, it only adds more brilliance to the story. I always thought this library wouldn't contain anything of value, but now I have to admit I was wrong.

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