Full-Time Immortal Master

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I'm unhappy, there are some repetitions starting from chapter 154, and the plot is also incoherent. Didn't the author notice?

This book is great! I hope the follow-up will be more exciting!

Unique, thoughtful, and well-written, I can't get enough of it.

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First of all, hello to the writer and everyone. This is my first time playing.

[Qingfeng's brief review] [Brother Tianyou's progress and remaining shortcomings] Let me start with a little digression. This morning I was finally able to sit down for a while, and I was in good spirits. I saw that the book review competition held was very successful, which was very good. I heard that the opening chapter has been revised. Although I have read the old version of the opening chapter before, I have to start reading it again this time. After reading five chapters, I dare not say much about the plot. I will mainly talk about my feelings about the writing content and logic during and after reading it. 1. Progress The progress is quite obvious and undeniable. Whether it's the orderliness of the narrative, the accuracy of the wording, or the smooth expression of the story, in my opinion, it's pretty good. Moreover, I didn't see the uncomfortable typos again, at least not in the first five chapters. It was very comfortable to read, so I had a reason to continue reading. After all, who would want to read if it felt uncomfortable. The progress of these basics is obvious. Everyone can tell at a glance that the basics are the prerequisite for success, so I won't say more. The skill of setting up the story has also improved rapidly. Compared with my previous feelings, the foreshadowing of the story this time is very orderly. After reading it, it will make people think and guess what the next outcome will be. This is of course very important. Only stories with strong storytelling can trigger readers to think and guess the results, and are valuable. Just like the TV series Red Sorghum I watched before and the two TV series Pinocchio I am following this time, no matter where I look, there are always foreshadowings in the progress of the story. After noticing those foreshadowings and connecting them to the current plot, it naturally triggered my thinking, and then I could naturally vaguely guess what the outcome would be. Although I can vaguely guess the result, it is still a guess. After all, I still want to know the process to confirm my guess. Brother Tianyou's ability to foreshadow stories has improved greatly now, which is really a big compliment! Of course, I admire Brother Tianyou's great perseverance in writing and his ability to attract the favor of many book lovers. Everything happens for a reason. I will talk more about my experience in this area in the future. I believe it will be very useful to me, whether it is on a virtual network or in the real world. I just re-read Chapter 5, where Qin Feng was rescued and the ceremony was held in Jiuliyuan. I don't know if the subsequent plot has been changed, but the plot and the foreshadowing in it are very attractive to me. I try to continue reading after writing these things and see the little **** part. When I have free time, I can continue to write about my feelings and other things, just for fun. 2. Shortcomings The shortcomings should be some details. These shortcomings are just the assumptions of my supervisor. To use an analogy, the quality of current full-timers is like a regular octagon, and the quality of some masterpieces is shaped like the circumscribed circle of this regular octagon. After polishing and repairing, the regular octagon turned into a smooth circle, which looks comfortable and round. But it is undeniable that regular octagons and circles have their own merits. Maybe there are many people who prefer octagons to circles. After all, if you are used to seeing circles, looking at octagons will make your eyes light up. 1. Lack of selectivity; why can Qin Feng only have the nihilistic opportunity to seek revenge through the jade pendant being favored by the immortals but has no other choice? After all, there is almost more than one way to solve problems encountered in reality, and they are all selective. After weighing the pros and cons of various alternative methods, the choice made seems reasonable, at least it will not seem far-fetched. The selectivity in the book is also one of the good points, which will trigger readers' thinking and speculation. I have seen the pinnacle works of many great masters, among which Wangda has done a very good job in this aspect. Thinking about it carefully, what do you think I am saying? 2. The foreshadowing explanation is slightly lacking; the explanation of cause and effect and inheritance between the Nine Hearts Jade Pendant, the competition for the position of the leader, and the immortal cultivators is slightly insufficient, and it can be said that the explanation is not to the point. Why did the former head pass the headship to Qin Feng after he knew that the protagonist Qin Feng had colluded with the immortal cultivators? What exactly does it mean to have bad intentions? Why was his senior brother able to reach the level of an immortal cultivator just for the illusory value of that jade pendant? In the text, the description of the jade pendant can be said to be nothing but rumors, and few people know about it, and the cultivators are even more mysterious. Even if I have to explain these issues, I can still be convinced, but there is always a feeling of lack of roundness. If these backgrounds can be explained more in the dialogue, the plot will definitely be improved to a higher level. 3. Lack of consistency; the text is preachy

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--- Due to work reasons, I have much less time to study and work, and my spiritual food is exhausted. Since ancient times, it has been said that it is difficult to have both loyalty and filial piety, but I would like to say that sometimes it is difficult to have both spiritual and material things! ---To tell you the truth, people are lazy. I keep telling myself that no matter how busy I am, I should take time to read more books and help Fu Zhi write comments. But when I start writing, I am thinking about work and have no inspiration. Sometimes when I support Fu Zhi, my first instinct is not to go to the book, but to him! --- We are both fallen people in the world, and when we meet a close friend, a thousand cups are too little. I have inexplicable sympathy for Fu Zhi's helplessness. Maybe the world is full of helplessness, but we don't have to complain. Instead, we should think about things for the better. As long as we do our own thing well, care more about others, cultivate ourselves and our family well, there is no need to worry about governing the country! ---Finally, I wish Fu Zhi's new book "Fu Zhi" a smooth release, with lots of votes and rewards. In the future, I will write more reviews for Fu Zhi and support this book! In addition, this side story is just an appetizer. I will have time to write reviews next month. I hope everyone will support me~~~😄😊

Inspired by myself, my brother's new work is on the shelves and it is a big hit. There are countless feelings of self-pity and self-pity, all caused by the inability to help. However, because of my brother's feelings, it is not appropriate to say too many pretentious words. I can only fill in the poem "Man Jiang Hong" crudely, which shows my true feelings. . Azolla Dreaming about reincarnation, who gets what he wants? Hazy and mundane. The heaven and earth move, the clouds and wind rise, and the hero appears. The joke is about the present and the past, sitting still and calming down changes. When the waves rise, he who is afraid of going against his will is not a true man. The steps are not easy, but safety is inevitable. There are so many books, how many tens of thousands do you know? For the great cause of becoming a god, they drive and fight fiercely. If you encounter setbacks and your mind is calm, you should make great progress, and your righteousness will chill your courage. From now on, I will gather all my friends and wield the magic sword.

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🌹Time flies by, we are immersed in the world of cultivation of a full-time immortal master, and before we know it, it's Saturday again. As Tianyou's big fingertips strike the beautiful melody on the keyboard, we feel the lightness and joy in it and the rapid tension in it. The scenes, like a movie, flashed before my eyes. Good and evil, gain and loss, cause and effect, etc., Aren't those what we should always consider in life? 🌹Hey, this is my first time recording, so I'm a little excited. Aha, let me mention one thing first: "Half a volume of immortal master's paintings, how many long-term feelings. The road is so bumpy, and how many people are worried about it." Therefore, the theme of our discussion this time is: about the subtle emotions and future development of the protagonists Qin Feng and Liu Lin. 🌹 Next to the Sansheng Stone, we looked at each other's faces to see if we had seen each other in previous lives. However, by the bridge, my eyes are confused, and I can't remember where I was in the past? At that time, I entered Yunjing to avoid pursuit, and I saw you looking pitiful. You were kind in your heart at that time, and you gave me a warm smile before buying talismans. The past is still the same. I, Ice Body Qianxuan, can you come to Huayizong to meet me? I shoulder a heavy responsibility, and from now on, I will practice the law against heaven. Maybe we will meet again and sigh that we are destined. 🌹 🌹The following is a condensed version of the discussion: Inspiration Changchun: Have you read any books recently? What do you think of the plot? Xiaoyao: La la la, chase me every day. Turn around and fall in love with the Emperor: Alas Qin: I read Lin Huiyin's book. Turn around and fall in love with the Great Emperor: It's so hard to chase, it's a little bit like that. Xiaoyao: I feel a little slow lately Inspiration Changchun: Yes, a little bit, but we have to appreciate God's blessing. It's cold, and it's not easy for him to work hard coding in that small room. Xiaoyao: But in the distant future, when Liu Lin and Qin Feng are separated forever, these will be endless beautiful memories. Inspiration Changchun: Yes, parting for a while, isn't it just for the sake of a beautiful reunion in the future? Xiaoyao: Little Lolita Liu Lin actually occupied Xiao Qinfeng Inspiration Changchun: Haha, this Qin Feng is moved by his own heart, how can it be said that Xiao Lin'er is occupying it. Jingjian. Hongchen: First of all, I don't think Xiaolin will become Qin Feng's heroine Xiaoyao: I think so Jingjian Hongchen: Secondly, in Qin Feng's heart, Xiaolin is at least half a girl. Turn around and fall in love with the Great Emperor: Is it because I want to transform into a sect? Inspiration from Changchun: Qin Feng's heart is moved Xiaoyao: Haha, sister, don't do so much Jingjian Hongchen: Once again, it might be possible to become a confidante Xiaoyao: One pity month is enough Inspiration Changchun: You see Qin Feng is squirming in front of Liu Lin, he almost dare not look directly, there is something wrong in his heart Jingjian Hongchen: Just imagine, that man has never been moved when he sees a beautiful woman. Xiaoyao: I feel Liu Lin is qualified Mengwu: I think Xiaolin is more likely to become Qin Feng's confidante or sister Xiaoyao: After all, the Baixuan ice body can transform into Qianxuan Wanxuan, which can keep up with Qin Feng's cheat. Inspiration Changchun: Yes, they will all be high-level monks by then. Gee, there is hope. Divine Seal 92: It's better to give up Liu Lin Jingjian Hongchen: Do you think Liu Lin is swollen? Please evaluate this person. This is better. Xiaoyao: Liu Lin is so cute. Turn around and fall in love with the emperor: Loli is growing up Jingjian Hongchen: But since she has become an existence of ice, she should gradually become a noble and cold woman in the future. Xiaoyao: Ahaha, goddesses only belong to pig's feet Turn around and fall in love with the Emperor: What to do if a better heroine appears later Xiaoyao: Those are all passers-by, and they will all be abandoned. Turn around and fall in love with the Emperor: That's not necessarily the case Uncle Ghost: Lin'er is a beauty, okay? Xiaoyao: How can it be Turn around and fall in love with the emperor: God Bless has a hint. Jingjian Hongchen: Oh, but let me think about it, it is possible to become a heroine, but the probability is a little low. Inspiration Changchun: Haha, Xiao Wanqing is out of luck Jingjian Hongchen: Any tips? Xiaoyao: Must eat it Jingjian Hongchen: Xiaowan is absolutely impossible Xiaoyao: Haha, the plan can't keep up with the changes 🌹 Mengwu: The emotional issues of pig's feet can be considered based on the author's actual situation. In reality, the author and his girlfriend did not get along day and night. When two people are together, they don't get along day and night, and trust is crucial. Longing is also an essential ingredient, so the protagonist in the novel will not easily fall in love with the person next to him, even if he has a heartbeat. So Xiaolin will only be Qin Feng's sister or confidante. Xiaoyao: Da da da, Liu Lin's initial purity and kindness made Qin Feng feel loved from the bottom of his heart, and then she turned into a cold goddess, making it impossible for others to attack her, and Xiao Liu

When I look at Brother Ling's collection of works, I am filled with emotions, sighs, and praises. Your pages are magnificent and your words are as rich as the waves of a river. They are endless. You are truly worthy of being called inspiration. Alas, I no longer dare to compete for the top spot!