Defeat the Goddess

The biggest advantage is that the story outline is quite innovative and the plot is quite ups and downs. The shortcoming of the plot is that the logic of some details cannot withstand scrutiny. The biggest shortcoming is the language. There are too many explanatory texts during the game, and the details of the battles are often brushed off. When the rhythm should be paid attention to, there is a lot of words, and the next action cannot be explained for a long time, which is a bit annoying. I hope the author will work harder on controlling the narrative rhythm and write better articles in the future 🤝

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