Jackals Need to Survive

Come on, author, it's so hard to find a book I like to read. I don't want the book I want to read to be missing.

No matter how much I scold you, it will still be at this level, haha.

It's hard work writing a book, please take some rest and good night~!

Why did you stop writing about fishmen and start a new book about jackals? I hope you work hard and don't break like a fishman!

I don't know why I can't send a private message to the author. I had no choice but to post it in a book review

Isn't that special mount skill reserved for Onyxia?

The big article is based on the Murloc City Strategy. To be precise, it should be a construction novel. In terms of design, it should also be a construction novel. However, as of today, the work actually has many shortcomings. First, there are too many golden fingers. First of all, I said at the very beginning that I didn't really like the cultivator's golden finger, but I said that it was so that pig's feet could live on Earth. But now, how many times has the golden finger of the Ghost Control Technique appeared? ! Instead, he became a warlock. I remember that the article described that pig's feet can use the Ghost Control Technique in Azeroth? Have you passed the examination as a warlock or a monk? And that lucky wheel, where did it go? Second, plot differentiation Murlocs used to have two lines, Earthstar and Azeroth. This way of writing is very controversial among fish people. Great or want to learn its lessons. However, the big way to deal with it is to aggravate the Earth Star plot, which, well, now makes the plot even more divided. The fishman wrote it in a way that deliberately weakened the plot of the earth star instead of emphasizing the description of the earth star. The third plot is off topic The main plot described in detail is to build a jackal village, but until now, the pig's feet are still running around outside and turned into a novel about fighting monsters and upgrading, which has completely strayed away from the main purpose of building a jackal village. To be precise, the big pig's feet don't look like a village chief but a mercenary. I hope you will seriously consider the future plot. It is best to abandon one of the three golden fingers of Lucky Roulette, Ghost Control Technique, and Warlock. Weaken the Earth Star plot and re-describe the construction of the Jackal. It is best not to describe the quests in the World of Warcraft game as a plot, which will make readers very boring.

Well, Damn, I personally think that the construction category looked better before, but now I don't think it looks good...

In fact, this book is really a trap. Might as well come up with ideas to open a new book I hope to open a new history book It is best not for the protagonist to activate Aotian mode It should be necessary for the protagonist to suffer a few big defeats when he takes charge of the army for the first time. Don't just run around and stand in line to become a strong soldier in the world. It's disgusting to copy the platoon leader, company commander, captain, lieutenant, etc., And then don't always let the protagonist win with less. If you are really serious, you can check out the technical posts in Baidu Historical Novel Bar, which are very helpful. Welcome to follow Baidu Huang Chengyi, and please be more precise when posting.

😰 After all, this is the main point If it's a fishman, or a passerby one day, then it's really......

Fishman's TJ The quilboar is being fattened Come on, author!

I'm going to work now! Keep fattening up! You should update it carefully! No matter what, I support you! I haven't watched the latest ones, but I still have to say: Damn! Why didn't Brother's Ji Bing appear? No need to explain! You must be lazy! 😭

But then I thought that Onizi could also become an elf, so I chose an elf. But forget about the night elves, the model is really loveless. It's better to have blood elves. By the way, Sylvanas is also a high elf, so you understand [fn=2_3]

A good new book, two recommendation votes are given every day