Book of Warlocks

It's a very good book. I will keep reading it and recommend it to you! Come on!

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But why is there no mention of the protagonist's slap in the face? Like the duel with Li Terry, it was solved in just a few dozen words. It doesn't feel cool at all

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Writing a book is a long-term battle. A wonderful beginning is important, but the subsequent plot tension is also important. I feel that the recent chapters have become more and more exciting, and the plot has become more and more attractive. Come on, write a wonderful masterpiece. [Url=IFbEJ3]

The author has a good grasp of the rhythm, but the content is not a cookie-cutter storyline. An old bookworm like me who has read too many novels will only be interested in reading this kind of book.

According to the flow of the novel, moral character will begin to be tested from the moment you enter the forest...

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I am used to watching Western fantasy under the DND system. The author has at least done a good job in terms of innovation. With the refreshing rhythm of the writing, I hope the author can make the story have the level of traditional Western fantasy. This is great.

Facing the conspiracy of Bill and others, the protagonist obviously has some information, but cannot break the situation with wisdom. In the end, he has to break the situation with strength. The protagonist's IQ is very questionable.

"Knight's Manifesto" Chinese version Humility, integrity, compassion, bravery, justice, sacrifice, honor, soul! In the face of a powerful enemy, be unafraid, be courageous and loyal, be worthy of God, be loyal and upright, would rather die than surrender, and protect the weak, it is not against the laws of nature! I swear to be kind to the weak I swear to fight bravely** I swear to fight against all mistakes I swear to fight for the defenseless I vow to help anyone who asks me for help I swear not to hurt any woman I swear to help my brother knight I swear to treat my friends sincerely I swear that I will stay with the one I love until death Chinese poetry version I swear to heaven to make my will clear; Don't bully the weak, spend your time humbly; In the battles you go through, don't be afraid of powerful enemies; Anyone who is wrong or wrong will be punished by me! When women are weak and children grow up, war will do them; If you ask for help from behind bars, you can help them with all your strength; A woman is delicate and should never offend; Colleagues share the same goals and work hard to help each other; Treat friends sincerely and consider yourself a gentleman; My dearest love, everlasting loyalty! English version Iwillbekinotheweak. Iwillbebr**eagainstthestrong. Iwillfightallwhodowrong. Iwillfightforthosewhocannotfight Iwillhelpthosewhocallmeforhelp. Iwillharmnowoman. Iwillhelpmybrotherknight. Iwillbetrueyfriends. Iwillbefaithfulinlove. Italian Sar? Naturaaideboli. Sar? Coraggiosacontroilforte. Iolottachefaretuttiisbagliato. Iolottapercolorochenonpossonolottare Vorreiaiutarecolorochemichiamateperassistenza. Midannonessunadonn*. *Orreiaiutareilmiofratello. Sar? Veroaimieiamici. Iofedeliinamore. Portuguese Voutratarosfracosamig? Vel Voucorajosamen****frentaropoderoso Vouserfeitonadadeerradoeaspessoasquelutam Natilde; ovoulutar***batentes Vouajudaraquelesquemepediuparaajudaropovo Natilde; ovoumachucara**ulheres VouajudarosirmãosCleveland Vouserlealparatrataraumamigo Eusinceramenteir? Lidar***oamor

I give it 55 points out of 100. The only highlight is that I didn't see much typos. In addition, this book is between passing and failing. The reason is not that the author has no idea, but that the author has planted bamboo in his mind. Although he is "confident", it is obvious that the prepared soil for cultivating bamboo lacks many elements and nutrients, and the bamboo is sick and unhealthy. The author is a newcomer, but when he started the new work, he prepared the protagonist to be mentally mature, hard-working, and perseverant and possess all noble qualities. However, when writing, he prepared the enemy pattern too low. I have some relevant suggestions for the author here. I was reading Chapter 332 of a book called "Martial Arts World Adventure": How one's own achievements depend not only on one's own factors, but also on what kind of person the opponent is. If the opponent is outstanding, pressure can be turned into motivation! This was the case for Lang Fanyun and Pang Ban. The two had long regarded each other as their ultimate rival. In the end, they both broke through in the battle to block the river, and flew away through the air, becoming legends. This is the environmental factor! The environment in the World of Rain is full of masters. You will never be lonely on the martial arts path. You can find opponents everywhere. Only in this way can masters of the Broken level be created. Originally, there was no shortage of masters in the Tang Dynasty world. The three great masters, Shi Zhixuan and Song Que were all figures who were expected to be Broken. The reason why none of them succeeded was not due to talent or fate, but due to the lack of their own structure! Bi Xuan, Fu Cailin tied his own destiny to his family and country. If there is no way of transcendence in the world, this will naturally be a general pattern. But there is clearly a way of transcendence in the world, but he still does this. This is a pattern problem! Ning Daoqi is willing to be Jingzhai's thug. Although his martial arts skills are high but his structure is low, he can teach others to be impressed. Shi Zhixuan was schizophrenic due to a woman. Even if he is extremely talented, he will be nothing more than a pile of loess after a hundred years. It is rare to achieve transcendence! Song Que, the only one who had a big picture and a hope of breaking away and transcending, was tricked like this. All the opponents in the world who were worthy of a fight were like this. What could he do? ! Ye Gucheng's battle with Ximen Chuixue is essentially the same as the battle between Pang Ban and Lang Fanyun. Unfortunately, the environment of this world determines that there is no possibility of Shattering at all. Even if the four great books of Demon Strategy, Immortality Art, War God's Illustration, and Sword Code are thrown into this world, it will still take hundreds of years of development. Only when the masters have accumulated to a certain level can a Shattered Void level master be born. I find the above passage very interesting. Pattern determines future achievements. I don't mean to advertise here, I just want to share my thoughts with the author: "The strength and excellence of the protagonist are closely related to his opponent. The opponent of an ant can always be an ant. A fool cannot be looked down upon by a genius. You can't let us readers understand that a person who wins from fools every time can finally become the king of the world. That is not an insult to the IQ of our readers, but an insult to all the outstanding figures in the history of novels and stories, an insult to those who stand out from the crowd and become the heroes of the world."

Really, the rest is very interesting, but in the first three chapters, if I hadn't gritted my teeth and persevered, I would have missed the opportunity. Hurry, hurry up...

After reading most of the content, I felt that there were a lot of things that felt far-fetched. First of all, why does the protagonist keep pestering that noble girl? In my opinion, there is no relationship between the two. It would be understandable if you assume that the woman has a fragment of the artifact on her body. Is it reasonable to keep being hot and cold towards a woman who has nothing to do with her and even has a vague impression of her? Secondly, why does the protagonist keep following the caravan? You, a second-level professional, can't even find a way? It's really hard for you to pretend to be a pig every day and compete with a group of ordinary people. Finally, it is obvious that the main plot has a lot to do with the artifact fragment. This is almost 150,000 words, and it is still talking about some rubbish. It makes people lose sight of the main plot of the story. It took nearly 100,000 words to write these little bits and pieces that are destined to be gray. Do you want to write 10 million words for this book?

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This book was not a good read. At first I thought it was because the author was not strong enough to write an interesting plot, but I finally found out that I was wrong. I read it carefully from the first chapter to the latest chapter, and what made me most impatient was the protagonist himself. From this, I realized that the biggest problem was that the author set up a tall and powerful character, but did not have the means to express his extraordinary charm. So much so that I lacked a sense of empathy and completely disagreed with all the pretense he did. My personal opinion is whether a newcomer should write a book or set up a protagonist who is ordinary or even has an obvious personality disorder. Only in this way can the advantages be highlighted. After all, the popular trend is for the weak to beat the rich and handsome.

The settings of devil and devil are reversed. Devils are the race of ordered evil.

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