Gotham City Judge

Is self-righteous justice absolutely correct? The protagonist is not as paranoid as Batman. You will definitely be played to death by a clown. 🙂

Come and visit the grave. It hasn't been updated in five years.

Choking, four years ago...

I hope the author can write Batman's absolute justice

In fact, if Batman reveals his identity, Gotham's top brass can only kneel down and look at Tony.

The author of Endless War, a non-believer, came to visit me. It was not a provocation, but just to provide some opinions on the plot. 1. Batman belongs to DC, while Iron Man and S. H. I. E. L. D. Belong to Marvel. Although the two companies have cooperated in producing many comic series, in fact, the two sides have different worldviews, character settings, etc. I hope there is no confusion. DC's heroic organizations are the Justice League and Teen Titans, and the founders are Superman and Nightwing, not Nick Fury. The consequences will be serious if American comic fans see this; 2. Batman really has a younger brother. In the setting of the New 52, he died at birth. Later, someone pretended to be him. Although he was found out, he really had a younger brother. This protagonist setting may be questioned; 3. The Bat-opera was a fabrication of Nolan's version of Batman. It was actually a movie about Gray Ghost, and Gray Ghost was Batman's ideal hero. He watched the entire show before leaving. His parents died after being robbed in Crime Alley; 4. If the protagonist kills someone, the real Batman will arrest him personally. His creed does not allow him to kill, nor does he allow others to kill. Regardless of the motive and reason for killing, as long as he kills, he is a sinner. For details, you can read the comics of Red Hood and Angel of Death. 5. I am also a fan of Batman. Although I know the information is false, I ask for a return visit 😁!

I don't know why, but suddenly it's a little small. Chicken jelly...🥺🥺🥺

Author, please stop being funny, okay? Rancher, when are you passing by? Hahaha😁

This is a big problem. Even if we only follow the movie, there are many problems. For example, the issue of coexistence between the Justice League and the Avengers, they themselves will have a civil war, let alone different alliances? Moreover, Zhenglian was formed spontaneously, while Avengers is under the name of the government. DC superheroes generally ignore the government, and many of Marvel's superheroes work under the name of the government. This is a contradiction. Not to mention that none of the villains in DC are scientific. Anyone who has looked up Batman's enemies knows that those guys can reach the limit of their human body by exercising on their own.

I'll go... The writing is really "good". The author is a primary school student, right? Your parents must not know that the writing is so 'good'. I think this website is a small temple to you. No wonder there are always countless dazzling works. It turns out that they are all written by talents like you? I advise you, the author, to stop writing. It will cost you too much. To be honest, if your article does not participate in the Nobel Prize for Literature, you are very sorry for yourself. I don't have much. I only have 10 evaluation votes to evaluate a great work. I have never seen such a scumbag in my life.

The weak protagonist is 15 years old after all! Batman is too weak. How can he be on the same level as the protagonist? In "Batman: Arkham Origins", were Deathstroke and Bane the only ones who suffered a loss for Batman through force? Even when other bosses beat them, Batman wouldn't be out of breath! ! ! Another thing is that the protagonist looks more and more like a weakened version of Iron Man. I really can't tell that the protagonist knows Kung Fu... I only see him using that armor to bully people! The protagonist is still Batman's younger brother😅😅

I am somewhat of a Batman fan. I saw the author's book and liked it very much. I haven't written many Batman books since I started, so I hope I can stick to it. At the same time, I also feel that this book has some flaws. Just a personal opinion. The author's description of Batman is greatly influenced by Nolan's version of the movie. There is no such thing as the League of Shadows in other movies and comics. Of course, there has never been a Batman joining this kind of plot that I think is extremely embarrassing. This organization is called the "Assassin's League", and most of its members are strictly trained ninjas. The name of the leader will not be translated as "Ninja Master". If it is translated phonetically, it should be called "Ras Al Ghul", and according to the meaning, it should be called "Devil's Head". He has never been Batman's master, but his daughter Thalia actually had an affair with Batman. Furthermore, I think the protagonist's abilities are too childish and unscientific at first glance. It is absolutely impossible to reach Bruce's level at the age of 15 just by running, swimming, and practicing kung fu. From the perspective of human development, 15 years old is when growth is just beginning, and muscle strength and bone density cannot be compared with adults. Bruce has gone through extremely rigorous training, a specific diet structure, and biofeedback training to reach such a level. And when he returned to Gotham City, he was at least 27 years old and mature both mentally and physically. Therefore, Batman's physical fitness represents the peak level that normal humans can achieve. It is no exaggeration to say that Bruce's body is like a combination of Olympic champions in many sports. And this is not something that a little guy who is not yet an adult can develop by running and swimming. Furthermore, the plot of Bruce Lee's junior brother seems a bit embarrassing to me. You must be objective when treating Bruce Lee, neither flattering nor looking down on him. Putting aside the fact that this is a character from our time and space, how the protagonist met his junior brother in the fictional city of Gotham, and why the so-called Chinese Kung Fu is so powerful, and even killing people in martial arts competitions, sounds like a fantasy. Facts have proved that it is very one-sided to only specialize in one kind of fighting technique. Otherwise, there would be no such thing as MMA now. Moreover, this is a fictional world, and the task is almost to be a fighting master. No one relies on one kind of Kung Fu to get ahead, even if it is our own legendary Chinese Kung Fu. It's not that our skills are not good, but that it's best to use their settings and values ​​to measure this kind of American comic novels, so that they won't feel weird. As a character in American comics (DC and Marvel combined, this is how the author writes it now), Batman can be considered the best candidate for the martial arts master. He is proficient in 127 martial arts existing in mankind. Compared with the protagonist, the gap feels too big. On the other hand, the protagonist is also a normal person. After learning some kung fu, he can be on par with Batman. It feels like Batman is learning skills in vain. Moreover, the protagonist's golden finger seems to be non-existent, but in fact it is too wide. Personally, I suggest that future chapters include some content about the protagonist developing equipment and training, so that when the protagonist's strength is mentioned, the protagonist's abilities will not seem to be inexplicable.

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First of all, thank you very much to the author for your reply and support to my comments! Because I don't have enough experience, I can't reply, so I can only open another thread. The author wrote that Deathstroke has ten times the speed. I think the source of this setting must be from the information on Deathstroke, which states that "Deathstroke has various enhanced abilities, possessing the strength, speed, agility, endurance and reflexes of ten men, and the use of the brain can even reach 90%." But in fact, this "strength of 10 men" means that Deathstroke can beat ten with one, which means that he can fight ten by himself, and the results he can achieve by himself are equal to 10 men, rather than having the speed, endurance, etc. Of 10 cups. This is a misunderstanding. Just like his self-healing ability, although it can restore fatal injuries, it will make him lose his mind and become full of animality for a certain period of time, and it cannot restore lost organs, such as his right eye. So Deathstroke is not as scary as the author writes, otherwise how would Batman and Nightwing defeat him in a one-on-one hand-to-hand combat? Ten times human speed, that's The Flash. Deathstroke was able to hit The Flash in the knee with a gun while he was moving at high speeds because of his quick nerve reactions. Not because he has comparable speed to The Flash. The same goes for Bane. Without absorbing venom, his normal strength index is about 2,300 pounds, which is 1.15 Tons. Even the most powerful strongmen in the world can reach this level. When using venom, it can be 2 tons, and when using the maximum dose of venom, it can be 3 tons, but this will make him temporarily lose his mind. And although his body is powerful, it is not bulletproof. All in all, although Bane is terrifying without using venom, it is not unbearable. With venom used, if you want to defeat him, you have to use your wits. Batman and Bane both seem to use force, but in fact they are both guys known for their brains. Bane is one of Batman's most intelligent adversaries ever. He can deduce that Batman's true identity is Bruce just by relying on the information. It is conceivable that he is by no means a simple-minded person with strong limbs, but his appearance gives people the illusion that he is mindless.

That Mo Zihao's advertisement is very annoying, and it's also long~~ I read your first chapter, and it's very smooth. If I have to find faults, at most it's that the psychological description is not appropriate enough, but it's actually pretty good, no need to change it! He would actually give you five negative reviews. This person is so petty. Let's encourage each other!

Too few people write about Batman alone! !

I am very familiar with characters from the Marvel world! I'm not very familiar with the characters in the DC world. I suggest you open a leaflet to introduce some of the less popular heroes or villains when they come out! Who are those Selina and Jessica?😅😅

You said this is my trumpet? Whatever you say, it seems like you are very rich, then it's up to you, just do it, I don't care about your so-called slander of me, take your time and invest more

I think the Green Goblin suit is quite suitable for the protagonist. The "Exploding Ball" (pumpkin bomb) can produce a strong explosion. In the movie "Spider-Man 3", the ultimate explosive bomb at the end can even kill Venom. "Dart Ball" The dart ball's shell explodes after being thrown, and two blades protrude from both sides. It has a tracking function and can scratch the opponent. It will explode after impact. "Arm Blade" When fighting, the right arm can stretch out three sharp blades, like three sickles, which can be freely extended and retracted for close combat. The Green Demon Light Blade is a blade similar to a Japanese sword. When the switch on the handle is activated during combat, a layer of green energy will be attached to the blade, making it indestructible. The mask protects the face when flying or fighting, and automatically separates and shrinks to the back of the neck when not in use. As for the mask, the protagonist can change his look. The Green Goblin's mask is too ugly.

** Is not good at chopping, and the speed of drawing the sword is slower than that of the scimitar. It has a straight blade, and its advantage lies in thrusting. Disadvantage: The shock force of chopping is concentrated on the wrist, and the shock force is greater than that of a scimitar. The main attack of the knife is to cut, and the scimitar can better utilize this advantage. This is why the sword is gradually replaced by the scimitar. The author does not need to deny the machete for some reason. The weapon itself is not sinful. It is despised because it is used by evil people. Since the birth of the gun, more than ten million people have died under it, but the gun is still used as the main weapon. Therefore, the inner sentence of a weapon mainly depends on the person who uses it.

The protagonist knows about Batman and Iron Man, but not any of the other heroes. Is it because he only pays attention to tall, rich and handsome people?