Hidden Job in Online Games

Cheers, bro, it's updated. I saw the latest one. Come on, work hard to update. Thank you for your hard work.

Why is it that after reading more than ten chapters, I still don't have a level in the Gathering Technique?

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After reading one chapter, I feel that the writing is good, and the structure of the plot is also very good, but there is a slight flaw. I feel that the plot of DaDa should be more ups and downs. Of course, this is my personal opinion. Just give Da Da a reference, hehe. The second is the characterization of the characters. The detailed description is very good, but the panoramic description is somewhat lacking. I hope you will pay more attention to it. Generally speaking, the writing is very good and the processing is relatively good. These are my personal opinions and are for reference only. After all, writing a book is a personal matter, and the evaluation of oneself by the outside world only serves as an auxiliary reference and cannot be used as a decisive factor affecting the direction of the story.

Well! Brother, here I go again! I'm here to advertise this time! But this time I read a few more chapters, and I'm saying a few words! Not looking for trouble! , This time, I think points will still be deducted for the handling of details, and it is best to use more foreshadowing, which will bring more pleasure to readers! Uh, okay, that's it. The collection was given the day before yesterday, and I recommend it to you today! I will continue to support you tomorrow! Also, I hope that your brothers will go to my place and take a look at "Peerless Beauty". When you return to visit, if you don't have a collection, you can add it to my collection. If you have, you can recommend it to me!