The Dungeon of Doomsday Rebirth

How is this book? Conscience comments🙏🙏🙏

Why not male law or male gun, female ghost, female law?

There are still people who have girlfriends after the end of the world. Do you think it's a romantic drama?

What do you say about this book? It's a bit messy. The pig's horns are too weak for IQ. The author is not good at writing and really can't bring in too much family affection. The writing is too embarrassing 😥

🤭🤭 I couldn't stop coming late at night to have a look! The new day has been greatly updated, come here to satisfy the suspense of yesterday's big writing! I have to come! Your writing skills are very impressive! The technique that does not belong to traditional concepts will definitely be refreshing to many readers. At least I was attracted by the big book. The important thing is that you persist in the diligent and updated spirit of writing calligraphy, which is more worthy of our study. Moreover, the description of the characters in this book is very clear, making it easy for people to fall into the plot of the book after reading it for the first time! This is a very successful point, and the details are also very detailed. Not only does it make people look less impatient, but it also makes people feel that you wrote it very seriously. What you need in creation is that you describe the characters clearly and the plot is compact, so that the readers will feel passionate and enthusiastic! I want to follow in your footsteps. I believe your masterpiece will satisfy many people, keep it up! Sorry for any inconvenience! If you don't like my coming, just think that I am contributing to your book review area! One last word, come on!

This online article is really second to none when I read it now. I can see clearly through various introductions, explanations, and forcible persuasion that the author wants readers to agree with his distorted three views.

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After the protagonist unlocked the second layer of seals, a halo of light appeared behind him, and Shilok also felt familiar. There is also a halo behind the first apostle Destiny Kahn, and the same apostle Shilok must be familiar with him.

After reading a few chapters, I found that the plot obviously jumps a lot. One moment, you are at home, and the next moment, you are fighting with the enemy? Can you explain it in more detail? Is it possible to write novels like this?

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Boy, you have a future. I'm optimistic about you😁

I also write about the end of the world, and I clicked on this book among my "community works", "The Return of the Witch in the End of the World". This book has a good idea. Although it has been written by others, it is generally novel. There are no flaws in the language and organization. However, I have not read the VIP chapters. I can see the progress just from the public part. I hope I can persevere. Only with perseverance can I gain something and write the next book well. And although the recommendation is not high, the clicks are still very good, come on!

I feel a little funny, I feel terrible, haha

How do you say it's the end of the world? Parents are just a burden, and the protagonist doesn't have the courage or dignity of a strong man to speak casually and has no experience. Just like most rebirth novels, the experience is reset once after rebirth, leaving only the foresight, don't you think? The personalities of the female characters are very similar, they are self-righteous and self-centered. Then the protagonist will not be attentive to her and become curious, and then there will be various things or there will be a second-rate brother ╮(╯▽╰)╭ There is nothing you can do. You have written so much that you can't change it. You came back from the apocalypse to survive and do whatever it takes for the sake of profit. A lot of battles have to rely on external forces, although it is for the sake of the plot. The enemy settings are too different from the information I know. Or a strong person will say that for example, the apostle summoned by the Queen of the Moon in the beginning, Arad Continent, is based on Western fantasy. It adds too many unreasonable Chinese-style plot dialogues, which seems very unnatural, and all the enemies are more or less unnatural. Or a little lower IQ "This can be understood as you are a novice" Xiaobaiwen Generally speaking, after living for so long in the apocalypse, the experience before rebirth really needs to be reset, okay? Then there are people outside the ancestors, there are people outside the world, and being a reborn person, being so unaware is also a failure "Hope for improvement" I wrote a comment after two o'clock in the morning, it is easy to scold me

This way you can add another world.

🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹After all, I only played these four when playing DNF, and I am at level 85. There are other professions including Ice King. After playing for a while, the others are gone. For example, I basically don't know the other professional skills you mentioned and I am too lazy to look up the information. I hope the author can add some female ghost plots.

Not bad. I recommend 2 pictures a day. I hope I don't want to be a eunuch 🥺

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