Le Zun

Why do you feel that you have lost your direction when the book arrives? Why do you no longer have the joyful behavior behind you? What the hell is a musician's weapon? Shouldn't it be a musical instrument? This shouldn't be the way a musician fights, right?

Why should Luo Qing be written like an idiot... It is not so easy to write an unruly and willful character...

Ambiguity with too many female characters, too many emotional dramas

It's a summary, but it can also be regarded as a suggestion. I hope the author can take a look: First, after watching it for so long, I found that there are very few fighting scenes, and I feel that the protagonist is just a quick shooter. He either misses the key moments or ends it quickly. The fighting scenes are not attractive at all. Is this still a cultivation novel? This is a farming article! When I read the introduction, I was really looking forward to what it would be like when the protagonist uses the music of the earth to fight. But after watching it for so long, there were only two fights, and each one disappeared after a while. . . (There are so many songs out there, the only one that feels new to me is Caiyun Chasing the Moon, which became Shenfa Song. The rest are not new at all... It feels no different from reading urban entertainment articles.) This disappears for a while because every time I see GC, when I am about to destroy the enemy, the enemy is not destroyed (in the first fight, the villain escaped because he couldn't beat it) or is not destroyed by the protagonist (in the second time, Brother Lu was swallowed by the space crack). It feels like you are enjoying yourself, but someone pours a basin of cold water on you, and the excitement disappears immediately. Secondly, every time when new music is to be released, how do you lay the groundwork in front of it, including all kinds of high-end music, fairy music, divine music, heavenly music, etc., And finally come out with something like Little Apple? It doesn't match the previous foreshadowing at all, okay? It's like before a blind date, the introducer keeps praising the other person for how beautiful and good-looking they are, but when they meet, they are all fat and round! ! ! It doesn't require a lot of high-end music, and there's no need to make such a vulgar one either, okay! Although it is to foreshadow Zuyinguo's love for being flattered, but for a fruit that is bound to be eaten, is it necessary to foreshadow so much? Isn't the foreshadowing result just to show that the Zuyin Fruit is different, or that this fruit is spiritual? But what about the result? Wasn't it eaten up by the protagonist and the old man in one bite! Even if it doesn't turn into excrement, this kind of preparation is completely unnecessary! (A strong feeling of trying to make up the word count!) Unless the protagonist digs out the Zuyin fruit tree and takes it away, and then he turns into a human form! ! When you eat, do you use various descriptions of rice? In the end, it's not about eating it in your stomach! Even on food shows, all kinds of adjectives appear only after you eat something! Third, after reading the latest two chapters, the protagonist entered the human world and met the little girl. I had a feeling in my heart just after reading these two chapters. I deeply felt that the protagonist was a fool! That little girl is also a fool! This is not a curse! I really feel this way. Especially when I saw that the protagonist wanted to take the little girl away at the end, but the little girl was like a nerd, struggling with the fate of her destiny. I just want to say one thing, the author, your portrayal of this little girl was such a failure! The author probably wanted to portray an eccentric and cute little girl, right? But after I finished reading, I only had a nerdy little girl in my mind who was not very flexible, dull, and a little unreasonable... It was like a robot AI that had just appeared! And the protagonist who has all kinds of entanglements with such NPCs also looks stupid... Fourth, the fourth problem is something I just discovered. Previously, because most of the plot was reasonable and the characterization was okay, I covered up this problem. However, as soon as I saw the little girl and the conversation between her and the protagonist that was obviously for the sake of dialogue, this problem was exposed: There are so many things going on in the protagonist's mind every time he chooses a song! Basically it takes up half of the content, and the rest is dialogue... The previous dialogue was relatively normal, so it didn't highlight this point. The dialogue in the latest two chapters really feels too deliberate! This problem immediately became apparent. I finished reading these two chapters in less than two minutes. I can imagine that the author must have spent a lot of time coding out these four thousand to five thousand words. However, I basically just skimmed over the protagonist's mental activities when choosing songs or other times. I didn't jump to read it, but when I saw the first sentence, I almost knew what was going to follow. So I watched it very quickly, which meant that it didn't give me any sense of expectation at all. The above are all the complaints I have read for nearly half a month. If the author can accept it, then accept it. If you can't, just give the essence. Please comfort me and code it out.

By Chapter 9.10, I felt like I couldn't stand it anymore. It was so cliche. . Shit!

That music you wrote? I won't watch it if it's about Western and modern music, but the subject matter is good

Does music have five notes and six rhythms? Author, you can go to Baidu... I haven't started reading yet, but I feel that the introduction is too unfriendly. In fact, if you can't write an introduction, then don't write it. It's a waste... Forget it, give it a try first. Who calls Shu Huang...

The main character of the design is unpleasant to watch.

There are too many supporting female characters, and the few supporting male characters are bad guys.

From Chen Jinyuan, to Chen Dasheng, to Xiao Yun, I finally couldn't help it anymore! This is the rhythm of becoming a god! The Guigu Immortal Master Bar has been established. I hope everyone will join me in making Guigu a god! ! ! !

The dialogue between these characters is so idiotic! The writer's characterization, situation description, and character dialogue are extremely poor. It's extremely boring to watch.

It feels like there are a lot of fighting scenes, and I always use right-angle bars Jump

? ? ? Follow the urban rebirth novel. .

Although it is a very old book, I still can't help but say: It's so verbose.

After reading more than 400 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. I feel like the protagonist is just a gangster. If he hadn't time traveled, he wouldn't be the protagonist. The protagonist's friends are like vampires, crazy about taking advantage of luck. The protagonist has no stand of his own and is easily persuaded. If he doesn't stick to himself, in one word, frustration!

I read this book when I was in high school. This book can be said to be the predecessor of Confucianism and Daoism.

Ever since I escaped from the Lord God's space through trickery, all the props and bloodlines I had obtained were stripped away by the Lord God, leaving only an invitation letter from the Lord God. If any of you wants to enter the main god space, please leave a message below. I will tear open the invitation letter from the main god across the screen. As for which of you enters the main god space, it depends on your luck. Now I read the password. Want to understand the meaning of life? Do you want to really... Live? Yes or no If you choose yes, you will have a very small chance of entering the main god's space, going through adventures, and becoming a saint from now on. If you choose or, you will be impeached or die from plastic surgery failure. If you choose no, I beg you here to search "War of the Worlds" on the starting point and give the author a collection. The author of this novel saved my life before I entered the main god space. I have nothing to offer now, so I can only repay the author in this way. Finally, leave a summary of the book: This is the story of a high-level immortal warrior in the Warring States world, invading the heavens, and colonizing the Ganges plane.

How to say it? I feel like vomiting when I see this kind of world where tens of thousands or even tens of millions of years of civilized history have been suspended after time travel. How old is the history of human civilization? Don't people from other worlds produce geniuses? Don't think that modern times are invincible to ancient times. How many things in ancient times are incredible even from a modern perspective?

Reading this book reminded me of a novel by San Shao

After I caught up with the latest chapter of Super God of Learning in elementary school, I had no choice but to read this book. I really like this book including the setting type. Unfortunately, the response was mediocre or even a little bad. I wonder if the author thinks there are any shortcomings in this book.

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