Happy Life in America

It's only 50 million yuan or RMB, but you have to give away 70% of the shares? Are you sure Wang is the boss of the dormitory and not the protagonist's long-lost wild father? Doesn't the protagonist not know how popular the agricultural products in space are? The products in the space must be grown on farms, right? Exchange of 50 million for 1% is regarded as the protagonist's righteousness, and 1% is equivalent to giving away Wang's shares for free. In total, the ultimate purpose of the protagonist getting a space is to work for the boss of the dormitory? The so-called brotherhood in the university dormitory is disgusting to watch and poorly written. In the current dormitory, if you don't get poisoned to death after four years of graduation, you will be burned with incense. The weirdest thing is that the protagonist actually meets a rich second generation... The second generation of rich people and the second generation of officials have all studied abroad, right? Don't just meet a middle-class person when you were in school and think that the entire campus is filled with second-generation rich people.

Do you still call yourself "I" or "I am an old man" now? Why don't the protagonist have a niche, I am a late-born, I call myself

Reading the book feels like plagiarism🤫

To be honest, original heroines are boring. Generally speaking, when talking about the United States, people will think of blockbusters, rich people, supermodels, etc. If you write a farming novel and add a heroine who is unlikely to be impressive, it will be too bland to hold this book. In this way, it will not be interesting. I mean, find a celebrity heroine. One who is well-known and beautiful is best. Of course, it would be better if she is not a domestic actress. After all, your theme is a happy life in America. Your introduction also says that you are enjoying American things. Of course, this woman should be included.

The writing is a bit stiff, the plot is draggy, the starting point is too low, and it's not atmospheric. Hope it can be improved in the future. Aren't we going to dig a pond later? We can dig out treasures while digging the pond, but don't have too many treasures. It would be nice to have tens of millions after selling them. This plot can correct the shortcomings of the plot being slow, the starting point is too low, and it is not grand. Then we can develop greatly. The above are my personal suggestions.

Meteorite, diamond and luminous pearl are absolutely valuable

Are you really a 2,500-year-old goblin? Even ginseng costs more than 10 million. If you talk about 10 million to go to the United States, it's really embarrassing. No common sense.

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I can't think of a name now. I've already finished it. It was originally ranked quite high on the urban novel list. It was the first one I saw. Going to the United States, a local owner sold pig's feet. It started with selling a painting. The content inside is very similar to this book.

I clicked in when I saw that the profile said no stallions! Don't change your mind just because others have said a lot of things, otherwise the book will become more and more wrong, and forcing you to correct bugs will also increase... I don't have any idea about the identity of the heroine... I just want to be a stud, 1V1... 🥺

TC, TC, more than a dozen TC from beginning to end. There are so many domestic towns that I can't even guess where they are after seeing them, which really affects reading. Don't you have any other way to express it?

Great author! ! I hope you can update quickly. Reading one chapter a day is not enough! ! ! ! !

After raising it for a long time, there are still so few. 😭

The book is still very good. If the author has more life experience and completes the information, it will be a very good book. The conception and story-telling techniques are quite good. Please support it, give me rewards, and keep working hard!

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It's very small... And with the extra cost... It's definitely not enough.

It seems that everyone who writes about going to the United States will write about farms, and the plots are absolutely the same! ! ! Basically the same~~~