City of Adventure

Very good, looks very comfortable

As a hardcore book lover, it has been six or seven years since I read novels in junior high school until I graduated from college and started working now. I have read countless novels of various types. To exaggerate, I have witnessed the development of online literature. However, this book is really the most vivid one I have ever read. It is also the book I have read the most. It is said to be an online novel, but it is also divorced from online literature. "Vulgar Taste" describes the maturity and changes of a person's character. In ordinary life, there may not be a so-called system. If you can always insist on self-discipline and self-improvement and pursue inner strength, can you also say that you are a systematic person? If you are self-disciplined and self-improvement, you will be able to have the same abilities as the protagonist. Everyone wants to become stronger, but most of them lose because of their laziness and other people's bad qualities... Does everyone want to have a system similar to the protagonist, forcing you to grow and self-discipline?😭😁

1. Close to reality The first impression this book gave me was that it was close to reality. When the system first possessed me and the first mode started, I thought it would be "distorted" like other books, but I still read it patiently. Unexpectedly, when describing the changes in the environment, the author focused on the psychological transformation of the protagonist. On the book, after the description of the environment is over, the role of the system begins to be gradually downplayed. In other words, the focus of the book is more focused on the life of the protagonist. The main story line is not complicated and clear at a glance. What I feel is three words: down-to-earth~~ Reading this book is like listening to other people telling stories that happened around you. 2. Full of creativity The same urban theme, the same system flow, but the writing is different and novel. The most outstanding creative aspect is the way the system changes the world in the eyes of the protagonist. People often say that "the world in the eyes of XX (mathematicians, artists, geniuses, madmen) is different from ordinary people" and "there are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand people." This is the first book I have seen that has both a subjective perspective and a God's perspective. The wonderful thing about novels is that this subjective perspective lies in the illusion seen by the protagonist rather than the application of the first person (the most prominent one in literary masks is that when the protagonist faces a choice, the event (world) is seen through the protagonist's eyes, while at other times it is the psychological activities of the protagonist and other people). The author cleverly uses the illusion of system mapping to make the protagonist a "wise man" who can see through many things. By describing the protagonist's discomfort (feeling that he is abnormal and wanting to hide it), many wonderful conflict points also appeared. [When I write this, I think of Wei Computer, which is also full of creativity. Of course, in addition to the down-to-earth description, Obiye focuses on describing human nature and wits] 3. Distinctive characters Many supporting characters appearing in the book are vivid, memorable and spiritual! For example, the cute office girl, the smart, sincere and principled heroine, the gossipy brother... To be honest, my memory of names is not strong. There are many books where I don't know who is who by the middle of the book, except for the protagonist (for example, the one I am reading recently, My Wife is a Princess , Princess An Nanxiu and rich woman An Zhishui can sometimes not be distinguished), but if it is a novel with good character descriptions, after reading a few paragraphs and looking at the speaking style of this person whose name cannot be remembered, you will have a feeling of "Oh, it turns out to be him", and you can continue reading. What I want to express is that if the characters are well described, the characters will be easy to remember. Coupled with good writing and a good story, you will have a classic! Also, I think the idea of ​​this system mapping illusions also helps with character development. 4. There is no more 4, but I would like to give some suggestions. I know that your articles are closer to life, and are a little more general than Furui Mubo. I just hope that you will come up with a "big event" every 20 to 300,000 words to create some trouble for the protagonist. It can be a major event in life centered on the protagonist, or it can be a systematic phased task. You have to push the protagonist into a hurry and let him use the abilities given by the system to the extreme. It is best if the whole incident is over and no one knows who is the driving force behind the incident, so as not to affect the protagonist's peaceful life. By the way, if you adopt my suggestion, it is best not to overwhelm the system capabilities and focus on describing the character's psychology and behavior. The protagonist's efforts should account for the majority in the process of achieving the goal. Don't give people the feeling that as long as there is a system, an individual can achieve the goal. 5. Give me another suggestion Here are a dozen more... One or two templates. When the main (reader) character (reader) gets tired of playing (watching), replace him with a new one. In addition, it will create a little trouble for the main character, as a diversion from the ordinary daily life (after all, the purpose of this system is to make life less boring), or the kind that does not affect the main plot. For example: a flying little cockroach came to the toilet, bumped into someone while walking and thought, and was startled by the strange mask when he looked up.

I'm doing some archeology. I saw posts from 14 years ago.

Weren't you locked up in a dark room before? Released again?

Horrible, the first three chapters are rambling and confusing.

? ? ? It is a rare good book with many shining points and good ideas incorporated into it. If the author had realized it himself, I can only say that I admire it. ? ? ? I don't know if the author has played Dangan Rinpo before. It's a bit similar to the second volume. It's pretty good. If you haven't played it yet, you can give it a try. ? ? ? It's a pity that the author is not a beauty, otherwise she is all in Guangzhou... The number one female lead is a perfect woman ? ? ? Keep watching, don't collapse [fn=2_3]

This book cannot be found on the author page. . .

I can't find this book when I check the author page.

I watched it in the past four years and now I come back and watch it again. But I still don't like Xu Huixin very much. She already has a girlfriend and she is still clinging to the protagonist. I really can't stand this kind of person who has no sense of boundaries.