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Chu Tianjie is well portrayed, and his conversations with girls are wonderful.

"The blue is the ocean, not the sea. The sea is green. If you want to see the blue ocean, you must have the determination and courage to sail far!" Qi Li looked at the dark green sea water in front of her, not knowing whether she was sighing or hinting. Excerpts from dialogues in the work 🤝🤝🌹🌹

After reading one chapter, I feel that the writing is good, and the structure of the plot is also very good, but there is a slight flaw. I feel that the plot of DaDa should be more ups and downs. Of course, this is my personal opinion. Just give Da Da a reference, hehe. The second is the characterization of the characters. The detailed description is very good, but the panoramic description is somewhat lacking. I hope you will pay more attention to it. Overall, the writing is very good and the processing is relatively good. These are my personal opinions and are for reference only. After all, writing a book is a personal matter, and the evaluation of oneself by the outside world only serves as a supplementary reference and cannot be used as a decisive factor affecting the direction of the story.

Personally, I feel that your writing is quite fresh, and your technique is much more proficient than mine. The plot structure is wonderful, making people want to read on, and the description process is meticulous. It is not as rough and unclear as mine, and it is hard to imagine. In terms of plot, I seem to have only one-third of what you wrote, because your exposition is very comprehensive and thorough, and the work is pure, and I feel close to your work. A good beginning is the most important thing for a work, and the author has done it. When I started reading it, I felt it was a bit boring, and then I wanted to turn it off. Later, I found it interesting and found it interesting. I read a few chapters and it was not bad. Looking at the author's description, it contains many techniques and some rich insights. I can see that the author can clearly describe some difficulties that are beyond your level. It's not like me writing over and over again, it's still the same few sentences, but I will study more.