Sword Master

Are you a eunuch? After waiting for several years, it still hasn't moved.

Looking back on one of the pitfalls of that year in 2200. If this is completed, it will definitely be very popular. What a pity.

Regarding the protagonist, he is a person who has been reborn, not an old grandfather. He has experienced the pain of taking away his wife and annihilating his clan, and then climbed to the top step by step. Everything he has done is earned by himself, so his character should be excellent. Even if he cannot reach the state of being unmoved by the collapse of Mount Tai, at least he will not be happy or sad because of a little gain or loss. Imagine that you are now in your twenties, and you go back to kindergarten and get a score of 0 or 100 on the exam. Will you be proud or disappointed? Of course not. The protagonist's vision should be more long-term. He is too popular, so he should restrain his sharpness and accumulate strength. When he finally takes action, the pleasure will be more intense and even form a short period of sex. Regarding the supporting characters, whether they are decent villains or villains, they are extremely important. They can help the protagonist develop and promote the plot. The quality of the supporting characters determines the quality of a book! A good supporting character will not be baseless or unreasonable. Those villains also have their own lives, thoughts, feelings and calculations. They can laugh, cry, fall in love, and have the softest part in their hearts. The most vivid example is Li Mochou! She was a murderous female devil who did not blink an eye, but she could breastfeed Guo Xiang and use her weapons to drive away mosquitoes from Guo Xiang. She was so infatuated that when she was buried in a sea of ​​fire, how many people were moved by it! Therefore, the villain's eyes are definitely not as simple as just focusing on the protagonist. They will have their own plans. For one reason or another, they will start to connect with the protagonist, and then they will focus on the protagonist bit by bit. In this way, the final conflict will naturally take place. Looking at all successful works, in addition to the protagonist, there are also some conspicuous supporting roles. For example, Li Mochou, Mei Chaofeng, East Evil, West Poison, Southern Emperor and Northern Beggar, and even Dugu Qiubai... They are very popular and can be said to be a household name! ! And they are just supporting roles. The great master Dugu Qiubai doesn't even have a chance to appear! ! Of course, I don't mean to compare myself to the masters, so I guess the author is under a lot of pressure. I just hope that the author will pay more attention and write more vivid supporting characters. Xiaoxin in the book is very vivid, at least, I like it very much. And, for those villains, I hope that the author can also write some vivid characters in the book, and they won't be all mindless. To be honest, there are too many fantasy villains sharing the same supporting role. Even in some great books, it's the same, change the name, change the identity, change the map, but the same person is still the same in the heart, and then pretend to be B for the protagonist, and give up his life again thousands of miles away. I just laughed. In this fantasy model, which is similar to mechanized mass production, if you want to stand out, you have to be different, and villains are also extremely important. Of course, this point is not easy to talk about, it is difficult to grasp, and it will definitely make the author rack his brains. I hope the author sees it. At the same time, the above are purely personal suggestions. If you don't like it, don't comment. If you agree, please leave a like silently.

Brother Bai Yu was also a decent person during his lifetime. Let's all spit on him and leave.

The author died suddenly, the time of reading the last chapter was 23 or 52. The author is dead, rest in peace.

Hey, three years. Maybe the author is really gone? After reading Chapter 1160, there are at least 4 holes left unfilled: 1. What kind of existence is the black book world and the little girl in it? 2. Could Jiang Baiyu's mother be the sister of the Nine Tribulations Thunder Envoy? 3. Is the strength of the Son of Heaven an emperor or higher? 4Who is Xiaoxu? Why

It's a pity that the author is a eunuch. Otherwise, it is more likely that one book will become a god.

What's going on with the author Jiang Shanyu? There's suddenly no news.

Um, I haven't updated it in two years... It's a very interesting novel. It may become a sensation when it's finished.😰😰

There has been no update for three years. . .

It's a pity that it's not you who will accompany me until the end

The premise is that the author will update 100 times today. 1. The author is not satisfied with the 100 updates today, so I slap the author in the face. 2. The author has 100 updates today, but I didn't subscribe to them all, so slap me in the face. 3. The author has hundreds of updates today. I'll order them all. Please give me the best ones from the moderator. The post is an oath, and a slap in the face is welcome. PS: Actually, I just want to mix the essence.

The writing style of this article is elegant, and although the plot is somewhat imitated, it is better than the great master. It is obvious that he has many years of experience in reading online articles. The description of the sword is extremely wonderful, like a lone cloud emerging from Xiu's sword and flowing through the rainbow. It is truly a masterpiece of fantasy fairy tales! The only thing that is a bit annoying is that it adds some Western elements, which is a bit spoof and a bit trendy... In a nutshell, such a good book cannot be ignored! 🌹🌹🌹

After many years, I still remember that some of the details of using the sword as a sword master were very well written. I didn't expect that it has not been updated for ten years.

I've been waiting for three years.

Yu Loli~ Your introduction said it will be on the shelves on August 1st~ 100~ Otherwise you will understand (evil smile) Supplement: If you want to play a chapter with a few hundred words, I will [beep——] drop you~

Does anyone know if the author has any other accounts?

I used my ID to comment. 😁😁😁 The novel is quite well written, with almost no flaws. After reading the first few articles, you can tell that this is a successful novel. The plot is very fascinating and makes people want to put it down. This is the most immersive novel I have ever seen! The protagonist's several competitions are described with ups and downs, ups and downs. This shows the author's skill. The connection of each plot can also be said to be of the same origin and interlocking. The arrangement of each plot is also very reasonable and very exciting. Especially the plot of treasure appraisal is quite novel. Among the stereotyped fantasy novels, it can be said that I have never seen it before. After thinking about it carefully, I feel that this novel is based on plot. Others,,, to be fair, that's right,,,, But plot is the soul of the novel. The writer who writes the plot well is the winner among authors. I wish you to become a god soon. I will support you till the end and support you as always! ! 🌹🌹

There are no updates on the shelves. . I'll kill you immediately. . You know

The article is very novel and the plot is very attractive. Today, when there are so many works, I am really happy to see such works... I hope the author will continue to work hard, develop his own style, improve his writing skills, stick to his own writing path, and don't ignore quality for the sake of quantity... I agree: quality comes first! Dear readers!

Thinking about it now, there are still a lot of holes left unfilled at the front of this book. Does the author want to go home with a reputation as a cheating god?

Hello, author. I appreciate your work very much. It is very good. I hope I can communicate with you.

Author, are you lonely? It means that I feel lonely after reading your book! I bet you won't reply to me, please reply to me~

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What is remarkable about this book is its portrayal of characters. In the author's writing, every action of everyone is motivated by their own interests and has clear and reasonable reasons, which makes readers feel very natural. The author is obviously a sophisticated, intelligent and sophisticated person. He has an accurate grasp of the character's personality and psychological transformation, and is good at portraying the character's personality from some particularly small details. Come on!

🌹🌹🌹 Come on, the fighting description can be strengthened.

This book has a strong sense of immersion and makes people want to put it down. A good start, I support it.

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🥺 First of all, the protagonist is a rich, handsome man. This setting is good. Even if he is reborn, it does not feel abrupt. (Personally, I don't like Diao Si flow protagonists very much. They always rely on pills to encounter something or directly get someone else's top inheritance to reach the top. That kind of protagonist will undoubtedly not be able to break through in the later stage and continue to live in other people's paths. At the same time, this is also one of the reasons why the previous fights were so messed up.) Then there are many details in the book that I hope to grasp well. For example, the piece of chalk in the first chapter made me almost think it was an urban novel. Then there are the precise numbers that appear continuously. Although they have existential significance in this book, they always make people feel that this world is controlled by some kind of existence. This feeling is similar to some online game novels, or the most typical fantasy Douluo Continent. The whole story is like a host controlling the world. In the later stages of writing, even if the protagonist reaches his peak, there is still an invisible thing running the rules of the world. This is why many people complain that Douluo Continent is an online game novel. Have you ever seen some skills written in fantasy novels such as three-second invincibility, multi-fold increase in skill, and the existence of MISS? The numbers are too precise, which feels bad. But it also depends on the author's own setting. If he only pursues the pinnacle of martial arts, rather than a macro novel that transcends the way of heaven, there is no need to complain about this carefree and pretentious setting. Then I can lay some foreshadowing and pave the way for the big map later, because I haven't seen any information about the subsequent plot so far. It's just that the author leads me by the nose to watch the protagonist pretend to be cool, and there is less sense of expectation. In addition to the exciting production of Tudou, Chendong's pits are also very exciting. Then there was no more, and I forgot what I wanted to say. That's all. I hope this book becomes a huge hit.