First Love

I forgot to select a long comment, so I tried to repost the result page and it was fooled. It was all in vain... I wanted to post a long comment, but I finished it again and forgot to change it. The whole tragedy... The author does not need to let the different opinions of readers in the book review area affect his mood. I have read many articles, and eight out of ten books will have the same problem. This is an issue that the author can easily ignore. After all, the author mainly thinks about the plot, and often ignores the perspectives of the "live" people in the book. This is normal. But having questions does not mean that readers will speak. People nowadays live in a tight pace, and most of them are unwilling to take the time to speak. They find it troublesome, so the book review section has become popular because of this, which is a good thing! Without love, how can you be willing to take the time to leave a message, right? Returning to the topic of the article, in fact, the current plot development does not constitute a BUG. However, if it continues to develop according to this model a little bit, the wounds and mistakes will be blurred, so readers will leave different opinions and express their frustrations for the heroine. Personally, I don't agree with revising previous articles, because revising an already written plot often takes many times more time than coding a new structured article. During the process, you will get tired and lose confidence, and it is easy to question the plot you have written. This is my personal experience. In my opinion, just sort it out and code it according to the current plot. Writing is "please yourself first, and then entertain others". In fact, the author does not need to pay too much attention to the criticism of readers. If he finds a problem, he can just think about it and straighten it out. Write whatever makes you happy, otherwise you will easily lose your enthusiasm for writing, and readers will not want to see such a situation. As for the male protagonist, in fact, no one is perfect, and who would not make mistakes? The male protagonist is also a human being, but the author did not deal with the grievances of the female protagonist before, so it will cause readers to cry out for the female protagonist. The male protagonist has made serious mistakes since his rebirth, and he should not be allowed to live with them like this. He should be wary of his own mentality. Previously, he spent all his thoughts on marrying the female protagonist back to Jiji Yingying, neglecting that he should first maintain and clean up the place where the female protagonist will live in the future! He should have figured out the basics of the women in his original body and planned out the plan, instead of forgetting, hiding, and letting the heroine wait. If he had arranged it earlier, he would not have made the heroine physically and mentally injured during the wedding, and let himself be labeled as "dishonest" by the heroine. He should be angry with himself! He must clearly understand that the chance of their rebirth now is a fluke! If he does not have a correct attitude, he cannot protect the heroine! He wanted to be soft-hearted, pity, and make good arrangements for those women as innocent people, but why didn't he think of who he had to protect first? He was so sure that those women would sit back and wait for him to send him away? If he didn't touch them, they wouldn't be jealous? They wouldn't fight? He doesn't know how to scheme? He won't vent his anger on the heroine who is the "culprit"? He doesn't stay in the back house all day long, and he doesn't have supernatural powers to predict and prevent all plots. If he doesn't harden his heart, does he want the heroine to be the cruel person? Or wait for others to be cruel to the woman he loves? The longer he delays, the more disgusting the heroine will be. The more he wants to kill it, the longer it will take! He can't expect those women to be stupid enough to come to him and find an excuse to kill him, and he can't think that he won't have an accident before cleaning up! At least, he is not invulnerable, and he is not a god. Maybe he doesn't need any medicine, just being drunk is bad enough. I have to emphasize here that the author knows whether it will happen, but the male protagonist does not know, this is what he should think about! As for the heroine, the author actually didn't write that she won't be angry! What women are best at is the way they get angry, which is more changeable than the weather! The author just writes about her psychology, calculations, and mentality. In fact, being cold, indifferent, and watching with cold eyes is not a way of getting angry? Waiting for the male protagonist to solve the problem of the back house on his own is also a kind of distrust? After all, if you believe it, how can you not help? Who likes other women in the back house? As for the meat, so what if she eats it? This is what she should eat, this is her right! What's more, after getting the body, she is as gluey as paint, the sex is harmonious, but she is eccentric but not at all depressed. She eats carelessly and feels at ease. With such a huge contrast, how aggrieved is the male protagonist? The more clearly he understands the mistakes he has made and the mistakes he made, the more annoyed he becomes. The more the body fits, the more he wants to win! The more he thinks about it, the deeper he will get, and he will

In this way, isn't the male protagonist's body very dirty? Isn't it strange that the female protagonist doesn't care about it so easily? She's not so generous in this regard, right? She should be a little less tempered, otherwise the group of women who have "nothing to do" with the male protagonist will be disgusting! Moreover, the female protagonist can take the opportunity to clean up the male protagonist and let him understand that even if he is "innocent", she will not care at all, so that he knows that if he is "not innocent", the outcome will definitely not be changed. In short, this is a good opportunity! Considering the heroine's experience of being hurt by men, why should she make a fuss, right? PS: After fattening up and about to start killing, I picked a few chapters to read. Unexpectedly, I picked up a thorn as soon as I started picking... I'll wait and see and then start killing again...

After reading the last few chapters, I decided to give it a try. Recently, many readers have commented, giving suggestions and complaining. Cheers to the author~ Write what you want to write, just don't be ruthless. It is definitely what I want to read. Support!

Even if the other party is a scumbag, there is no need to kill him. Although for the sake of the story and betrayal, he will kill his wife in his new life. .

In ancient times, it is understandable that women existed before the heroine appeared, right? Ahem, I think it would be great for men in ancient times to be as protective of themselves and devoted to their love after the heroine appears. That's true, but looking at it from the heroine's perspective, it's not just that! The male protagonist first concealed his group of "unrelated" women (although they were really "unrelated", in ancient times, the most appropriate thing was the status!! What disgusted the wife the most was the status of the women other than her). This had already buried a thorn in the female protagonist's heart. The male protagonist lied to her. This is a fact until the truth is revealed! The heroine has been through the pain herself, so it's impossible for the hero to just believe it when he says he's keeping his integrity, right? So easily? You have to know that he already has a record of being "dishonest"! If lies in the name of love can be used as an excuse to deceive, then it's just nonsense for the couple to admit this frankly, isn't it? No matter whether the male protagonist can solve the problem of house fighting on his own, before he dotes on his wife and kills his concubines, those women will always be there to make the female protagonist sick and an eyesore. How can the female protagonist trust her like this? Let alone trust her with her body and sincerity! I think that based on the heroine's temperament and the scars on her heart, she should wait until the hero has completely eliminated those women before the hero can eat them! Don't they say that men will not be cherished once they get them? Although the hero himself and the author both know whether this will be the case, the heroine doesn't know! Isn't she afraid? Wouldn't she think of using herself as a bargaining chip? She has already fallen once, so she should be more afraid of pain!

Why are there so many people speaking traditional Chinese characters, are they Taiwanese or Hong Kong people?