Master of Entertainment from Another World

I read the beginning and don't write about the so-called loser flow. It's painful to start with an extremely depressing plot. A little bit is reasonable. If it's too extreme, it'll be disgusting. The hierarchical system is reasonable, but the hierarchical system setting that is too extreme is very confusing. I feel awkward with the unscientific idea that the hierarchy has imagination.

It's rare to see a book that abuses the main character so harshly at the beginning.

I'm sorry to say that I've only read Chapter 70 of the author's novel, and I can't say that I understand the book very well. I hope the author doesn't mind if I have a few comments here. First of all, this book gave me the impression that it is more about politics than entertainment. I feel that the author is very suitable for writing fantasy novels. It can be seen from the author's settings and upgrade methods of Tianhe in the article. There is no disrespect intended. This is my own little feeling. Furthermore, the author of entertainment novels should try to write down the public's reaction after the work is released, so as to give people a more intuitive impression. I have not noticed this. What I find more is that you prefer to focus on the power struggle between the two parties. It cannot be said that you cannot write about this aspect, but I personally feel that you have shifted the focus of your book. This book feels more like a fantasy and power novel to me. The fun part of reading an entertainment novel is to be relaxed and not give people too heavy a feeling. To put it bluntly, the protagonist can take advantage of the entertainment industry with a golden finger or a golden thigh, and he can use his power to plot a struggle. However, if there are too many, it will make people feel that this is not an entertainment celebrity novel, but a power struggle novel disguised as an entertainment novel, which will make people feel awkward. This is what I saw in Chapter 770. In terms of characters, I actually feel that the ones who have a deeper impression on me now are the protagonist's teacher Lu Jiu, his tomboy senior sister, and Zhang Yi. I think there is a chapter that is well written, which describes the actions that certain people will make after "exercising", which made my impression even deeper. I am less impressed with the girls who worked with him on missions earlier. I think there are two reasons for this. One is that when the author describes the agency mission, he almost briefly mentions the process of participating in the competition. How did the girl Deng Ziqi at this time advance in the competition? , How the two people worked hard, and the comparison of the strengths and weaknesses of the opponents, almost all of them have no description, which makes people feel no tension and is not exciting. It cannot deepen the impression of reading and cannot capture the reader's feeling, so the impression is not deep. The competition scene has no sense of picture, and the focus is on other places. In fact, what we readers want to see at this time is to see her defeat them with her work. Of course, after the work is defeated, how the author makes the protagonist show off her power depends on whether the author can hit the reader's heart, haha~! Having said all that, I really think the author's book is very creative, and the setting is also very good. The main reason is that the focus is too much on power struggle. Entertainment articles are meant to be refreshing and relaxing. I believe that most people who read novels will not like heavy power struggle novels. Like me, I am One day after get off work, after taking a shower, I listened to the novel while playing light music and a cup of tea. It was very pleasant. After a tiring day, I didn't want to think about the conflicts anymore. I was too tired. We came here to relax. If we want to read about power struggles, we can read officialdom novels. The above is a small opinion of mine. I hope the author can adopt it. 😅 It seems that this is the first time I have written a long review since I entered Qidian. 😃 It seems that I gave it to you for the first time 🤓

Datang, Xunqin, Fuyu, the TV series are all weak... Wouldn't it be good to film it according to the original novel?

I am in seat 1, why am I missing 2 votes?

If the eunuch is really confirmed, it will be removed from the shelves.

No more thumbs up?????

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There are many books that pretend to be cool by taking the Earth to a parallel world, but they are basically the same. However, the author's system is considered novel. Others only emphasize how strict it is. It is a good idea for you to directly implement the system. However, if you see this type too much, it will become stale. I hope the author has many eye-catching plots. Come on

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Good-looking, very good-looking😁😁😁😁

First of all, there is nothing to say about the writing style. It can be seen that the author is very careful, and the dialogue description can basically highlight the characters' personalities. However, in terms of creating a refreshing opening chapter, it is a bit dull, because there are not many words, and it is difficult to say what follows.

I can no longer hold back the passion in my heart and decided to give you 999 likes

When I first read the title, I thought it was the kind of work that basically follows the crowd. After reading the first three chapters, I think the setting is good. Unfortunately, after 20 photos, I was at a loss. What are these? There is absolutely no rhythm of using earthly works to crush other worlds. It means no more love.

What happened to the author? Something happened or are you preparing to be a eunuch?

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The hierarchy implemented according to your settings is no different from the three-level Zhongzheng system in the Wei and Jin Dynasties. The harsh environment brought about by this system is absolutely repressive for lower-level personnel.