Immortal Master

The heroine is really unpleasant, I can't stand it anymore

I came to the conclusion after reading Chapter 85 that the female protagonist is cheap, a troublemaker, and a nemesis born to defeat her mother, masters, sects, and lovers. The author's writing is good👍, but the female protagonist has no characteristics and no ability... I've already bought it all, so I'd better read it, it's a short story anyway

This novel is very good in terms of plot setting and writing style. It is not difficult to find that the author has profound basic writing skills.

The heroine is really speechless. She has suffered for nearly ten years, does things without thinking, and does not consider other people's feelings. In short, there is nothing to say. The author's writing style is not bad, and he could consider changing the style of the heroine, which would probably lead to a wider audience.

Even the supporting characters must go to great lengths to write out their characteristics. Personally, I think the author has done a pretty good job in this regard.

I really like the plot written by Rice Ball! I wish I had rice balls updated ten times a day 🥺

Can't you make more updates? It's so frustrating to wait😭😭😭😭

Good book, no need to explain, I will support you to the end, don't be a eunuch! ! ! 🌹😄😄

The article is delicately conceived yet unrestrained, the writing is realistic yet equally gorgeous; the plots are interlocking and enchanting, with a coherent flow, and the emotional expressions are clear, implicit, and accurate; the characters are vivid and lively on the page, and they feel ready to come out, as if they are standing in front of the readers, and their movements leave a deep impression on people. I have collected and read your masterpiece and fully support you! I wish you success and immediate success! 😄😄

I want to say that this novel is so to my liking. Dad, does your family know that you wrote such a beautiful novel? !

What is remarkable about this book is its portrayal of characters. In the author's writing, every action of everyone is motivated by their own interests and has clear and reasonable reasons, which makes readers feel very natural. The author is obviously a sophisticated, intelligent and sophisticated person. He has an accurate grasp of the character's personality and psychological transformation, and is good at portraying the character's personality from some particularly small details. Come on!

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Sharp, sharp, I can see it all derle😁😁

How many lonely nights have I spent relying on the author's book to survive! I am looking forward to it more and more, author, please come on!

The entire structure of the author's novel is easy to understand, concise, and attractive. What must be explained has been explained. The details that expand the article are also vividly written. The plot is tense and relaxed, the writing is smooth, and the scenes are grand. It is really a powerful force in the Internet literary world. I applaud and wish it a great sale!

Before I knew it, I had already written so much of this book. At that time, I was still wondering if the author could persevere, but now I am just waiting to celebrate.

This book gave me a completely different feeling than any other book on the same subject. It's really great! Give it another silent thumbs up~

It's very well written, but it's too bad.

As the story develops, the plot unfolds bit by bit, and the previous foreshadowing gradually emerges. The novel is very interesting and is expected to be a masterpiece.

But there is no way to start, because it speaks what is in my heart, I can only feel sad and keep everything silent. I hope my silence can create a calm for you, let your thoughts fly freely, and bring me a little touch.

Okay, this is the protagonist. Unlike some disgusting books, the protagonist is either tortured in one way or another.

Okay, this is the protagonist. Unlike some disgusting books, the protagonist is either tortured in one way or another.

Great book! Already collected! Mutual encouragement!

Damn it, this male lead should be replaced.

The writing was okay at the beginning, but it didn't work in the middle. Then it became even worse in the later stages. It was a bad ending. I didn't feel how powerful this destiny master was. I felt that this thing was of no use. The little butterfly was of no use either.

This ending is really too hasty. Since the emotions have been so strong in the past, I think the ending should be a little more satisfying no matter how hasty it is. I really can't accept it.

Read the author, I despise you, I despise you for being so slow, I didn't finish reading until I was satisfied 😵😵😵😵