Picked up Goddess Wife

The writing style of this book can be considered to be above average at the starting point. Zhang Yu has a clear character and a strong sense of grassroots. You can guess that the author himself is a man who values ​​love and justice. Of course, I maliciously guess that the author is relatively wretched. First, the plot. Asen is already quite experienced in controlling the plot. Damn it, it was not written by an old bird, so I just believed it. The protagonist's verbal description of women after entering the police station, and the unique peaks of women... Cough, cough, can we be so obscene? Second, characters. Except for the name of the heroine Yuan Shanshan, which makes me complain a lot, the arrangement of other characters is average, but the number of appearances of the heroine is somewhat downplayed. This... Third, introduction. Regarding the introduction of this book, I have a problem. The author is Bu, who is suffering from a literary disease. This kind of introduction is too literary. It is a disease among the literary youth and needs to be cured. I think the introduction should be changed to echo the author's obscene temperament, ahem. Secondly, the plot is as smooth as a mountain, especially the Chen Chu part, which is pretty good. Overall, this book is a very special one among Qidian's recent urban literature. It has the potential to become a divine book.

Let me talk about my personal feelings first, everything else is good, but the heroine Yuan Shanshan 😅 is not to be disliked by others. After reading the fifteenth chapter, I always feel that compared to other characters, the heroine is the worst portrayed. Even the high school student who plays the supporting role is better portrayed than the heroine. Maybe it's because there are fewer scenes, maybe it's because of problems such as amnesia, but in short, it feels like a vase, without any obstructions or highlights. Just like the vases placed at home for decoration, they are the same with or without her. Apart from that, the arrangements in other aspects are great. The anger accumulated in the first two chapters is also perfectly released in the third chapter. It looks very exciting! Finally, this kind of writing generally takes the ambiguous route, with the heroine in the palace, and I hope that the heroine can show her goddess side later 😁

Floating by...🌹

This chapter only shows what urban love should be. If the wife can be harmonious with the mistress, she will definitely be struck by lightning. The urban heroine should show that love is unique. Instead of YY novels such as stallion harems, we should write urban novels with a unique love style. A story about a single female protagonist defending her love, resisting temptation with the male protagonist, having a touching love affair with the female protagonist, and growing up together.

Push it up, 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁[fn =4]😁🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

😅But I like it

The writing is very smooth, the story concept is novel and unconventional, and the most important thing is that it looks good, wow!

😁Nima suddenly discovered that the heroine has the same name as the heroine of Gongsuoliancheng😰

🌹🤭 Come on, write well.

I guess I'm overthinking it, but it's true...

Initially, the heroine's name was Yuan Shanshan. People were very upset about this name, so she changed her name to Yuan Ruoqing in the following article. I will correct it one by one where it appears in the previous article. Now some chapters have both names at the same time, and I hope readers will point them out one by one. Thanks!

22, 30, 65, 23, 0 Friends who are willing to accompany me to move forward, I can't thank you enough.

To prove that you and the heroine are real, go and get your marriage certificate. You are not writing the plot, what is good with other women, and let the theme heroine accept the mistress? What would be even more ridiculous would be to deal with the heroine in secret after her parents have dated another woman. From now on, I'll just have sex with the mistress while I'm acting, it's so damn bloody.

Dear, I also write a book, but unfortunately, I am much worse than you. I read what you wrote to the newcomers and was very touched. But there's something I want to say While reading, I discovered that we all reveal too much of our emotions in words. The whole story seems a bit bloated and makes it hard to read. I'm a newbie, and I don't know if what I said is right or wrong. If I divide it into chapters, I might have to delete four or five hundred words out of a thousand.

Great book! Support! 🌹🌹🌹

🌹🌹What about chapter 48? Where did you change it?

It's worth chasing to the end🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

Chapter 0016-Chapter 0020 During the laying stage, the two women who appeared inside will probably be sprayed to death. It's okay, I'm ready. Don't scold our parents, just turn around and throw them in here! On the surface we are not angry at all

I just can't figure out why the protagonist's two brothers are so interested in the protagonist's woman, and even say they would exchange her for a woman. Is this what the brothers said? If it is an H-movie, will the protagonist sooner or later be cuckolded by the protagonist's brother, or be NTRed?