Global Disaster

It's just that the description of the scenes is not detailed enough, the sense of immersion is relatively poor, and the plot settings are sometimes very abrupt, and the character dialogue is very uncoordinated. For example, the description of the strange atmosphere in the prelude to the disaster at the beginning is relatively unconventional. Under normal circumstances, the news will be blocked and important places will be under control. In severe cases, the whole city may be under martial law. The media press conference will certainly not cause panic news. (There will definitely be some online news, but it will only cause suspicion, because the content is controlled.) The incident of Qingyu described in Chapter 2 is even more impossible. The protagonist learned from the young policeman that hundreds of incidents of disappearance, injury, death, etc. Have occurred. Are all the villagers fools? Knowing the danger but still running into the mountains? Don't tell your children not to run into the river? It felt like the plot of being bitten to death by a herring was deliberately set up to let the protagonist know about it. (Sweat, let's not forget that there must be a hush-hush order within the agency when something like this happens. How could the protagonist casually let out inside information, and also specifically described the market as being very lively? If an incident occurred in a small town in which hundreds of people were killed and injured, and the army and police had not yet intervened in the state of martial law, the residents of the town would If the people are not in a state of panic, then I really can't understand it. A few years ago, there was a murder in my hometown, and it became a big deal. You know, the smaller the place, the faster the news spreads. Maybe the people in the protagonist's hometown are crazy and heartless people.) Chapter 3 to the beginning of Chapter 4 are even more hilarious. The protagonist has experienced the army killing the monster spider, and he will definitely feel a little uneasy, frightened, and anxious, and then prepare, understand, and look up information. However, when I read Chapter 4, the protagonist was chatting and laughing heartlessly while going to dinner with his colleagues. Then there were cases where people died from mosquito bites and rats gnawed people. This description is contradictory. If it has reached this point, the citizens are not panicked and anxious all day long. They can still go to work, chat and laugh, and meet up for dinner with peace of mind. (I feel like the events that the author arranges for the protagonist are all very sudden. He keeps letting him experience and witness such events, and then keeps describing him living a normal daily life. Isn't this nonsense?) At one moment, he describes mosquito plagues and rat infestations. After a while, he described eating normally at work, which was very contradictory. In fact, I just want to say that the author describes the feeling of progress that is sometimes fast and sometimes slow. On the one hand, the scary monsters appear too quickly, but on the other hand, it keeps describing normal life. No matter what it is, the development of events is gradual and there are signs. It must be sporadic and a little bit, to a full-blown explosion. But it seems that the protagonist described by the author is like winning the lottery, and he can encounter it every time. If the probability is so high, it means it is very serious (it is impossible to go to work normally and go to dinner while joking). Also, the protagonist described by the author witnesses the scene of the army exterminating spiders, which is very nonsense. The army must have set up a cordon on the far periphery, guarding passing vehicles, and the news of the blockade was exposed. It is impossible for a stray bullet to hit the protagonist's vehicle. The author set up the unreasonable situation entirely because of the setting (and I don't know what this setting wants to bring to the protagonist. When I go back, I will still have a heartless meal with my colleagues, chat and spank, and help the beautiful woman). The subject matter is novel and good, but the setting of the plot is uncoordinated. For example, if there is an incident about a monster eating people circulating on the Internet, you will definitely sneer at it after reading it. With a skeptical attitude, you will internally ridicule someone for spreading rumors behind his back. But what would you do if you experienced this twice? Will you maintain your normal life? Will you remain mentally normal? Will it make you feel uneasy? Will you learn the truth? Will you prepare a way out? And if this kind of incident has become widely known, will there be a solemn atmosphere in the whole city? But why does the author describe a world where a town with hundreds of casualties not only has no martial law, no solemnity, no panic, no uneasiness, and no flight, but also describes a lively market and a lot of hunting animals?

Like the title, will the author let the protagonist work for the government forever? What about the promised end of the world? Aren't the last days about struggle and the collapse of order? The feeling of watching it now is that of a sudden disaster. Under the leadership of the government, human beings slowly recovered. There are very few descriptions of human nature, and they are all mentioned in one stroke. Although the first part is exciting, the second part is a bit boring. Personally, I feel that if the protagonist of a post-apocalyptic novel messes with the government, there will be no sense of watching at all, and there are no careerists? Wouldn't someone's ambitions expand after they evolve extraordinary abilities? Don't you think of yourself as a new human being? Just like Magneto. I feel that it is better to let the forces be more chaotic and not have the government dominate.

Otherwise, how can we say it is the end of the world? It is about to become an upgrade for the government to fight monsters. If you lose the sense of fun, you won't have much to see. Suggestions.

The author's writing skills are quite high. There are very few descriptions or long descriptions, and almost no rendering of environmental scenes, but the storyline and the psychology of the characters are vividly portrayed.

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This type of book is pretty good, and it seems like there aren't many people writing it, so I hope the author doesn't have too many similar plots. We will work hard to write stories of our own style and hope that a good book will be presented to us. Come on!

🤭🤭🤭Written so well

I finally found a science fiction novel that is not novice and has a very good plot. I just don't know if the protagonist's abilities are other than melee combat. If he only has melee abilities, it would be a bit monotonous, but! ! ! It's really great. I hope the author can update it soon. Good books are rare! ! !

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I really like it. Come on, give the protagonist some special abilities.

Although I haven't seen it. . . 😅

This book should have been published in Sanjiang a long time ago, MD, I was so happy reading it!

When will the author become a KKK member? 2K words is so little

Monday is a more critical day. I think the author can appropriately adjust the updates for next Monday. If lists such as category clicks can stay on the homepage for a little longer, it will still be helpful to increase the popularity.

Chapter 16: If I were me, I would cut off the flesh one by one. Death is too easy. The girl is in so much pain that the protagonist actually lets them die in the most comfortable way.

You have no specific explanation for the huge energy consumption after biological giantization. Moreover, given the relatively low global average oxygen content today, once organisms begin to enlarge on a large scale, the completion of evolution will mean their death. In fact, strictly speaking, this is mutation rather than evolution. We cannot generalize everything to genes or any theory of evolution. . Not to deny it, but to hope that the author will refine these concepts and then use your imagination. . Write out your fantasies. . This is science fiction. The discovery of new elements is a very good imagination, but combined with the fact that the elements that have not yet been discovered are extremely radioactive substances, they will decay into other elements in a few microseconds in the laboratory. . . In fact, the idea of ​​new elements is quite good, but the subject matter used to write about you is a bit too sci-fi and cliché. . . Therefore, it is recommended that the author come up with a new structure, such as finding out some unclear relationships based on the periodic table of elements, and then use their imagination. . . . I believe you can do better I know I shouldn't take novels too seriously, but I can't help myself when I read a good book. In fact, there is a lot mentioned above, but it is actually just one sentence. . There is too little real technological content and I hope it can be increased. Most people who read science fiction will know the names of current technologies, so try to be a little more high-end.

As title. If you have students who want to play a role in this book, you can reply below with the names of the characters you come up with, and Huaying will give priority to using these names. It can be a decent person or a villain. Ordinary people can be evolvers. The evolvers are arranged according to the direction of the plot. Of course, you can also become an evolved creature or a mutated creature. As long as you name the creature, its appearance, and abilities, everything is soeaey. Extremely awesome evolved creatures and mutated creatures can only appear in the later stages.