Rebirth of Daluo Jinxian

A Daluo Jinxian feels that his state of mind is not as high as that of a mortal. It's really **********.

Everyone who wants to write a story must have a different inner world from everyone else. What makes a writer insist on coding and write a story of millions of words? It's not boring, nor is it for the royalties, it's a hobby, it's the joy of sharing stories from your heart with readers! Especially for friends who are also newcomers, coding is relatively slow and their popularity is low. A compliment from a reader will make a newcomer extremely happy. Where there is praise, there will be criticism. Whether you are a master or a novice, you may or may not support your work. It is impossible to satisfy everyone. I guess you, the author, have also struggled with whether to describe a scene from sound to scene, or from scene to sound. When you write about some funny parts, do you think the readers will laugh? You think your writing is outstanding, but readers don't seem to notice it, so you are disappointed. I hope a reader can read your article carefully and analyze it carefully! Writing can improve one's own knowledge, enable people to understand things, and pay attention to the small details in life. Each person's personality characteristics can be exaggerated and written into the story. Although the author created a world, many events still have to be compared to the world we live in. Everyone's writing has its own sharpness, and everyone's story has its own merits, so you can see your own shortcomings in every article. Commenting on other people's articles not only provides support to the author, but also improves my own writing level and allows me to see my own shortcomings, so I will continue to read other people's works to improve myself. Having said so much, I hope the author will continue to write for his original hobby! Put aside the fame or not, just for the original hobby! Come on! 🌹🌹

After reading two chapters, I can't stand it anymore. He is full of foul language, has a villain mentality, is arrogant in gaining power, has no ambitions, and has no brains at all. This is the pig's foot you wrote. How can people take it for granted? It's hard to imagine such a person as myself, low-level!

I really can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 41. I was a Daluo Jinxian in my previous life, but I turned out to be so useless after my reincarnation. Although the rules in different spaces are different, I have the experience of my previous life. Some of the applied moves should be very simple, but I can't apply them only because of my cultivation level. It's a challenge to the limit of my IQ. If the author wants to express that the protagonist started from an ordinary life, he should not let him have the memories of his previous life. As a result, he now looks completely different, as if he only retains a arrogant and face-loving character.

Come on, author, I hope Junding can take off! !

The oath cannot be trusted, he is still a eunuch

It can even be said that he is cold and will not be shaken by external objects. Just look at the previous chapters. He was shaken because a friend and his wife died. Being easily injured by others is too weak. Moreover, it is so difficult that the protagonist who has lived for so many years has no chance to save people when his friends are caught. Is there no way? This is indeed a big flaw.

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The plot of this book was set up in such a way that it was difficult for me to figure it out. The sense of plausibility was really refreshing!

What story will the male protagonist face next? I'm quite curious about the author's settings!

The characters in this book are sometimes too deliberately presented, a bit like a novel for the sake of a novel.

After reading the first few chapters, you can easily find that the writing style of this novel is by no means casual. The further you look back, the more you can appreciate the charm displayed by words.

The story is very twists and turns, quite touching, overall it's good.

Every time the protagonist's emotions break out, they feel particularly contagious and can impress every reader.

I discovered this novel by chance. Although I didn't read the content, I read the comments after it was published. Haha, we are both new authors, so let's work together. Come on. 🌹

Excellent book, excellent writing, give me your full support!

It's a really good book. I hope to become a great god soon and be worshiped by thousands of people! 🌹🌹

The author did make up for some shortcomings in the early stage in the later stage. I hope the author will write better and better. Indeed, the plot is very twists and turns! 🤭🤭🌹🤝

The author has at least persisted so much. I don't think many people support it, so he hasn't given up, right? Come on, author! 🤭🤭🌹🌹🌹

Every growth requires struggle. If you don't work hard, you won't gain anything. Even if the protagonist has a golden finger, it still requires hard work!

Author, don't give up on treatment. Why can't you update three times a day and once a week? Do you still want to become a god? !

As a new writer, you need to understand one thing: when creating characters, you should show your distinctive character and extraordinary speaking background, so that the characters you create can be active on the paper. I really like the male protagonist created by the author now, and I quite admire the author's skill in creating characters.

With the protagonist's strength, even if he discovers something good, it's very troublesome how he can successfully take it for himself.

He said that when reading this book, he always looks forward to the ending. I hope the author can reveal a little bit about it. Thank you~

This book is a good book worth reading. The plot is compact and the plot is exciting. It is much better than some other life dramas that are as bland as boiled water. But no matter what, here's another thumbs up. Secondly, the protagonist's characterization is quite delicate.