Go Back in Time and Be a Literary Giant

Why do I feel that this protagonist is so childish, how old does he feel? Why is my heart so immature and why do I have so many inner dramas?

Personally, I think the point of this type of work is to find pleasure in plagiarism, rather than the author's emotional and heart-wrenching creation of a masterpiece. For example, around the 20th chapter of the author, an uncle with a 30-year-old soul makes heartbreaking gestures to a 13- or 4-year-old little girl, suffering from the loss of his love, and then goes home to compose a famous song. It feels like he can't bring it in. In fact, we all know that pig's feet are just plagiarism. Even if the author wants to say that he added his own things to the work, it is still plagiarism.

I'm done with it, I have nothing to say, so I'm going to leave.

Please keep it up, the author. This book is so beautiful and touching! 🤭🤭🤭

Come on, it has the potential to be a masterpiece, as long as you don't die as an eunuch, the dragon clan in this book also asks Xia Ya, and Eri Yi don't die.

I always feel that many places are "making a fuss out of a molehill" and the techniques are too "exaggerated" and divorced from reality. Although it is a novel, it is not good or bad. To give some examples, take chapters 287 and 288: ① "At this moment, their indulgence is not only the beauty of this music, but also their praise of Ye Li and their hatred of the love song prince!" Hate? It's not such an exaggeration, right? ② "The people in the audience couldn't help but think of this, and their eyes became cold. I didn't expect the prince of love songs to be so cunning!" The people in the audience... Were cold... Let the readers appreciate it for themselves. This exaggeration is too much. It can be used in music, but it feels too biased when used on characters. ③"For a moment, everyone couldn't help but shake their heads, feeling that Ye Li was in a pity this time." ④"Hearing this, everyone in the audience couldn't help but lose consciousness, and their faces became expectant." ⑤" Hearing this, everyone in the audience couldn't help but sigh. It seems that Ye Li is still unable to avoid this situation. The suspense of this competition has risen again." ⑥"At this moment, the men in black had obviously thought of this, and couldn't help but narrow their eyes. They felt as if they had found a chance to make a comeback." ⑦"The people in the audience couldn't help but be moved by this song. For a while, they were deeply intoxicated." ⑧"No matter how well the Prince of Love Song performs, there is one biggest shortcoming. If Ye Li suppresses the Prince of Love Song at that point, he will definitely have a strong upper hand and make the Prince of Love Song defeated and convinced." According to the following text, this is just random writing, where is the convincing. ⑨"At this moment, the music of the Prince of Love Songs slowly ended, and many people in the audience paid attention to the Prince of Love Songs, and couldn't help but sigh inwardly, because the music of Prince of Love Songs is really quite good, even in the Chinese forest at the pinnacle of world music, such a voice and music can definitely become the best, and become a hit." This is written specifically to highlight the strength of the Prince of Love Songs. Excessive use of exaggeration will make readers feel a little weird. ⑩ "At this moment, the lights turned on and hit his pale face, which made many people in the audience sigh inwardly. It seems that Ye Li no longer has the fighting spirit to win, doesn't he?" He believed so much before, but suddenly stopped believing it. He believed so much when he didn't listen to it, but suddenly stopped believing it after listening to a song by Prince Love Song. Would a die-hard fan do this? In order to highlight the performance of the protagonist behind, is such an exaggerated approach really good? It's not that you can't use exaggeration, but you use it a little too much. There are many, many places in each chapter. Excessive exaggeration will make people tired of aesthetics, and the more I read it recently, the more unpleasant it becomes... ①① "Everyone couldn't help but feel moved, and was moved by Ye Li's dialogue. Love is not a person, but a thought, isn't it?" I hate "everyone" and "all" every time, which makes me feel sick, but since I keep watching, I can bear it, but there are too many words like this, and it seems that you are just being pretentious for the sake of being pretentious. ①②""How could this happen? "The Prince of Love Songs was completely stunned." And "He felt at a loss in his heart. But at the same time, he immediately regained his energy, because according to this interpretation, Ye Li could only tie with him at most, and it would be difficult to beat him. And this proposition was proposed by Ye Li, so he won this battle! Thinking of defeating Ye Li, he felt hot in his heart. Although it was a narrow victory, he finally managed to win the game." Don't you feel very contradictory? ①③"The Prince of Love Songs was originally standing on the stage. At this moment, for some reason, he couldn't help but stand on the edge of the stage, very close to Ye Li. He originally thought that he was bound to win. When the time comes, he will show this video to QU to prove it. Ye Li has no interest in her, which proves that Ye Li was defeated by him, and in this way, even the whole of China will be conquered by him! And QU will be comforted by him in his arms. "This paragraph, you made me 😅 speechless to the extreme... How to prove it? If it's a draw, does it mean you win? China was conquered by you? Will I fall into your arms because of this? ①④ "The Prince of Love Songs is crazy inside." Dear homework, can you please stop using "crazy" or "crazy" or "crazy" all the time?

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When I read Chapter 33, I was completely confused. Author, do you also watch "CLANNAD"?

It's so shameful that I cried while reading it. Thank you for such a good article, and thank you to the cultural giants in this world. PS: When I saw the introduction, I thought it was a stallion YY type, but I didn't expect it to be so great. Laugh~

Three o'clock or four o'clock? Every time I see these extremely low-level mistakes, I can't help but complain.

Reading Boss Xue Nan's article is like eating ginseng fruit. There are 36,000 pores in the body, and all of them are clear and comfortable! 😁

It's very beautiful 😭 I can only recommend it.

It is very well written. When I saw the chapter about Butterfly Lovers, I shed tears 🌹🌹🌹. I like Dawn of Heroes so much.

I've read Chapter 103, so I'm just going to talk about it casually. Personally, I think this novel is a bit complicated. He also writes books, films, and sings.

It is well written. It is considered a top-notch book in this category. Maybe there are too many books in this category. It would be better if the author could write something different from the same category. Thank you, author.

Thank you very much, author. This book brought me so much emotion that I actually shed tears after reading it.

Hey, I can't get enough of reading one chapter every day 😭 Come on, Xue Nan~~ I have seen some similar books, but none of them are as good as this one. The writing is really good!

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How brilliant were the martial arts between Kang and Qian dynasties? Liang Qichao said yes, but Ye Li couldn't. According to the setting, there are no these two dynasties.

I have read so many time travel novels, and this is the first time I read one that resonates with me, and I feel inexplicably moved.

I only have one word "good" for this novel. This morning I listened to Aaron Kwok's "Forgot What Happened" and watched you write the novel. I cried, moved, and strengthened my heart. The society does not lack perfection, but true love. I cried more than once, so Xue Nan must be responsible! ! Hey, Xue Nan, you are great, and the novels you write are even better. I will continue to follow them, provided that the next ones you write will be as good as the ones you write now. This is our expectation. I have also read Da Wen Hao before. Da Wen Hao's writing is not bad, and I like it very much, but there is nothing in it that moved me very much. I hope these emotions will continue~~ Come on~~ I would like to comment 🌹

To be honest, the book is good, but unfortunately, it is a bit inferior to the author's previous book "Back to the Past and Be a Star". At least it can't slow down my reading speed. I also hope that the author will have time to update the stars. P. S. Don't think that if you change your vest, I won't recognize you. The style of writing, structure, etc., Can be seen through at a glance.