The Sword Is Heard All over the World

New book for newcomers! The beginning may not be attractive enough! But I believe it will get better and better in the future! Book friends please support and click to collect! Immu will not let you down!

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Thank you Bayern Hornet, lty001, Feiwofei, me and my book friends for the reward! In order to make it easier for everyone to read, I won't post it in the main text! I will always work hard to create and repay everyone!

First of all, let me introduce myself. I am also an author. I spent more than two hours reading a large book in a hurry, but I didn't read it very carefully. (We are all authors. We have to conceive and rush to finish the manuscript. I really can't read it slowly like a reader. I'm sorry!) After reading it, I really admire DaDa's learning ability. I can clearly find that the quality of the work gradually improves with the number of chapters. DaDa, you are very talented. I believe that you are a good learner. The plot of your work is very compact, and the main line and skeleton are also very clear. As a fellow author, I would like to share some suggestions. Most of the chapters in this book are written in narrative form, with less psychological description and environmental description. In fact, the length of this aspect does not need to be large, and the pen and ink does not need to be too heavy, but it is essential, because it can adjust the rhythm of the work, make the article appear relaxed and relaxed, and at the same time, it can also portray the character of the characters. Soybean meal and Changsheng are both good at using environmental description and psychological description. If you find my words useful, you can practice more in this area. Also, please add a friend. I welcome your corrections to my work "Ambiguous Music World". My autumn number: bar. I was in the second group at some point.

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Many of the books I have read are within the scope of good books. Only this book can give me new feelings and new desires every day. It always makes you look forward to its follow-up. It reminds you from time to time to urge the author to update quickly, otherwise how can you see what you want to see! It seems like I want to urge the author to update as soon as I read it every day! This is the kind of enjoyment this book brings to me! When you see the new part, you will be deeply attracted and moved by what he has to say. This is the same book. It is such a wonderful book. I can tell you the truth, I really like this book.

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This book gave me a completely different feeling than any other book on the same subject. It's really great! Give it another silent thumbs up~

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As a new writer, you need to understand one thing: when creating characters, you should show your distinctive character and extraordinary speaking background, so that the characters you create can be active on the paper. I really like the male protagonist created by the author now, and I quite admire the author's skill in creating characters.

I don't know how to write book reviews, and even if I do, I can't write anything constructive. All I know is that your book is right up my alley. I like to watch. I support it. I was happy to see it. I vote.

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