Heroes and Dungeons

After reading some, I never saw the "xia" and "the way of chivalry" written by the author. Maybe the "xia" in the author's eyes is martial arts novels plus martial arts! It's so nonsense, the title of this book is in vain!

The idea of ​​integrating martial arts into the Western Fantasy online game is quite pleasing. It has a wide audience and the title of the book is attractive, so I read it. But after reading a few chapters, I felt like it was getting worse. The protagonist's golden finger was opened too much. If the basic internal strength is set to ignore all defenses, it is already quite strong. It can also cancel the ** effect at any time, absorb damage, and increase attack power. Meditation recovery can also be used in battle. This is already destroying the balance, but this is only the basic internal strength. . . It became more and more outrageous after that. I read a few chapters by the name of the martial arts, and every martial arts was like a god. Recently, a Lingxi Finger came out, which is immune to damage for 10 seconds and can bounce back various ** effects. This is too invincible. To sum up, the protagonist is now the template of the developer's father. Apart from another martial arts character deliberately created, he is invincible. Is it still interesting to read a novel like this? It was enjoyable to watch at first, but then it became boring, and the typical golden fingers turned into golden thighs.

I just saw a place in the third chapter where it says that you need 9 points of intelligence to learn the Mage's Hand. The protagonist only has 5 points, and you need to level 10 to add an attribute point. So what should be added to the first 9 levels? I think it is necessary to add blood and magic, that is, to increase the player's blood and magic. Otherwise, if you upgrade to level 9 and add nothing, what difference does it make if the eyes are not upgraded? But the third level There is a sentence in the chapter that states that the protagonist can only use Mage's Hand twice at level 9. You must know that there are only 13 points at a time, which means that the protagonist cannot exceed 39 points of mana. The protagonist chooses the mage profession. I think at least 10 points of mana should be added to each level. Level 9 also has 90 points, and there is also mana at level 0. I can't figure out why I can only use Mage's Hand twice, 🥺

? ? I read Chapter 2, what is Alpha? ? ? Are you sick? ? Even Lao Wang is better than this...

Isn't this what Brother Yu is wearing? Why is the author shown to be Brother Yu? Alas~ Scratching my head, it seems that there is nothing wrong with me. . .

This is my first time writing an article, and I know that I must have many shortcomings. There will be some logical inaccuracies, some sentences that are not refined enough, and there will definitely be deficiencies in the characterization, and I don't know how to grasp the reader's mind... When I wrote 30,000 words before, I automatically applied for a visa, but unfortunately it didn't pass. I really want to know where I am lacking and where I can improve. If you can see this advertisement, I hope you can help me, read my book, and tell me where I am lacking. I will treat you with sincerity. Book title: The end of life Thank you!

Isn't it cold and lightning? Generally speaking, the cold magical aura in DND is white. Lightning is usually blue or red.

Isn't Qing Gong 1 second for internal strength? When I just changed jobs, I could get 4 back for 1 second (written in Chapter 20). After learning internal strength, I can get more strength.

When Gu Yuan Gong was at level 6, the internal force damage ratio was 1:2.2. Later, when the level of Gu Yuan Gong was higher, why did it become 1:1.8 Again?

This chapter should be three. The previous chapter should be four.

Please pay attention. Recently, the author from the God's perspective has complained too much. It seems so inconsistent.

The main character feels too bad, but everything else is okay

Did the protagonist forget to upgrade his inner strength? XD After I came out, I felt like I had completely forgotten about it.

Since we are talking about a game that is close to reality, the forging process should be semi-intelligent. For example, if a person makes a weapon system and gives attributes, then the forger should be able to change the appearance of the weapon (just the appearance). In that case, weapons with the same name but different styles should be very popular with everyone. A small suggestion, I hope you will think about it.

Jumpy thinking is messy. . .

In the early stage, what skills can be compared with spells in the later stage? The Meteor Explosion Banshee is simply incomparable, let alone the legendary spells. Do we need to use those cultivators with the appearance of martial arts?

I don't know if any old people feel this way.

I was a bit reluctant to continue reading, but when I saw the ridiculous setting in Chapter 2, I was speechless... After level 60, you can only die 10 times... I don't know how long it will take to reach level 60... If it takes several years like Legend (it's still cheating), then this game should be closed down as soon as possible... Even if it's a broken mobile game, you still know that you can't randomly modify the player's game data. If you die 10 times and delete your account, to put it nicely is to be careful not to die. To put it badly, the game company has to build a memorial arch after committing suicide... In fact, this kind of setting to die 10 times is the same thing as deleting game data for no reason. It seems that this setting is more deceptive than venture capital. Either it is like the infinite flow, life is only once, or it is infinite rebirth. What does it mean for you to be neither good nor bad? There is no prop that can increase the number of life rebirths. Don't tell me that it is. You didn't write it in the article. How do I know if it is there? If it is not written, it means it is not. Doesn't the author know about such a simple thing? Playing the game to the end is not just PK, otherwise what else would there be? Let's talk about real-life games. Whether it's Yamaguchi Mountain or Sword and Soul, you can only die 10 times at an advanced level. Even the most popular game in the world can only become a scummy game in the end... After passing the dungeon, the group will be wiped out... Do you think the setting of dying 10 times is awesome? In fact, you haven't thought about the impact of dying 10 times at all, right? Is there anything else I need to complain about... I'm not sure, I just know that I won't have to go to work tomorrow... I'm going to sleep buddy, sincerely, die 10 times, don't talk too much, okay? Either it's like a game point, or it's like unlimited streaming, and it's dead when it's dead... Hanging me up and down... My passion is hard to extinguish! !

Haha~ I can only hehe. I have all the skills to directly fight invincibly. I really don't know how to express it other than hehe.

Will there be no more updates after Sanjiang is over? Author, where is your moral integrity? !

When I read Chapter 21, I was really annoyed. Who knows what your sister's code is? Will you die if you use rice or something? Are you writing for Chinese people or European and American people? ? ?