Dimensional Swordsman

The amount of work is too large. Anyway, this is not a big mistake. If anyone minds... Then the author will talk about it when he has time. Well, the mistake is that the asteroid belt is not between Earth and Mars, the asteroid belt is between Mars and Jupiter. Hey, it seems that primary school students are not suitable for writing science fiction novels. I hope readers will not take it off😄😄😄😄

Sorry, I took a few days off because I had something to do, but it was also due to laziness. In fact, I can update when I find the time. The plot on the earth will end as soon as possible, probably about 30,000 words...

The protagonist is tentatively named Zhong Bei, or he may be a character who appears later. In fact, by the time this book is written, the background setting is basically clear. For the author, who is a handicapped person without an outline, it is really not a simple process. Therefore, plot progression will begin one by one in the future, and the connections between each plot will not be too close. After all, this worldview is quite broad and there are many areas that need to be taken care of. I am the author. If you have any questions or different opinions, you can reply here. I will read it every day.

I have finished writing this book. Hey, I don't know if there are any other works, but I really like them. If there is any, please let me know if you can download it! Please reply!

It feels a bit long-winded, so I try to speed up the pace. If the plot of the fourth volume were expanded and written, it would probably be hundreds of thousands of words. There will be many more plots in the next volume, including several kinds of universe apocalypse, which will also be written one by one.

It's so well written, please keep working hard and don't give up!

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The language is very fluent, and the language skills are still quite good. The plot also has ups and downs and conflicts, and it also grasps a clue. These are all worthy of recognition! But there are still problems, which can be summarized as follows: the plot is weak, the strength system is unclear, and the background of the early world is blurred, etc. Let's start with the vague background of the world. We want readers to have a rough idea of ​​what the Earth was like ten years ago and how many years ago it was. Ten years ago, the dimension exploded and changes occurred. We all need to know what the situation was like, how humans faced and resisted, how and why they became strong, etc. Secondly, the strength system is not clear. The strength system is a division of forces whether warriors are strong or not. For example, martial arts is divided into first-rate, second-rate, and third-rate. If you can explain each level of your strength system with your own opinions and understanding, then you will better demonstrate your own characteristics. Thirdly, the plot is weak and developed too quickly. The plot of your opening chapter is probably like this. The protagonist has been practicing hard for ten years and wants to enter the dimension and save his parents. In the middle, there are battles with the family that framed the parents and enemies, and finding the magic weapon left by the father, etc. These are your plots. If you can add some of the protagonist's continuous efforts to increase his strength, plots of friends and brothers or following the protagonist or the protagonist helping others, the friendship between men and women, opportunities to recruit powerful forces, etc., The novel will be fuller, instead of being too thin at first glance. There will be no other highlights except revenge and meeting the mother. Fourth, the golden finger is still needed, otherwise the protagonist's sense of opportunity and ability to change his destiny and strong sense of expectation will not be reflected! For your novel, the sword that the father left behind is not a qualified golden finger. It is at best a powerful weapon (a temporary sharp weapon), so it is best to add opportunities and give the protagonist another mysterious, imposing and growable golden finger!

Dear author, you have a typo in the first chapter. The silver eagle is the warrior of our Longxing Kingdom and the 80 million protector of our earth. Why 80 million? There are only thirty million warriors. Shouldn't it be 800,000 for those with medals? .