Rebirth of Zongheng Entertainment Circle

I won't comment. Not so good anyway

It's not very good to start your life and fall in love right away when you feel like you haven't achieved anything yet. It looks very unpleasant and seems to be a bit off-topic. It is recommended that you first achieve certain achievements and become famous before you start your life properly. Starting dating too early seems weird... Well, or it may give people a feeling of not doing their job properly. Another point is that when writing, you should consider the age and corresponding personality of the protagonist. I hope you can write more maturely... That's it!

I just want to say that it's okay to pretend to be awesome, but you should at least pretend to be awesome for 500 yuan! Why do you think the handle is worth 30 yuan?

I'm almost done touching you. If you don't stop later, a burst of lightning will kill you! The author is great