Canglangxing

It could have been a book that can confer gods, but many sensitive people don't want to read this kind of book. As the saying goes, the heartless will always suffer from infatuation, and the most loving person has no things to do.

This is what I wrote at the beginning, why should I introduce the protagonist's extraordinaryness so deliberately? It's too deliberate.

Good book, but the male protagonist is too miserable

Damn, when I first saw the title, I thought it was about robbing a bank.

Very good, the description of human nature is okay. Indiscriminate stallion novels feel very fake. The author has grasped this point well and will continue to work hard to tap the potential in this area. From martial arts to ghosts. Are there any immortal heroes in the back? This one is pretty good. But characters related to the protagonist should not die casually. Even if they die, they must declare that they will be resurrected, otherwise a large number of readers will be lost. Online novels can be a little careful, but they must be worked hard to achieve.

The book is really good. Although I only read a few chapters, I didn't dare to read it until I read the rest. From the few chapters I read, I can see that this book is abusive, and it's not an ordinary abuse. It's very abusive. I don't dare to read it, even though I know it is a good book.

This name almost sounds like a bank robbery😅😅😅

One of the features: the suspenseful beginning of the flashback, which directly throws the mature protagonist into unexpected events. The first episode of Desert Trading is very attractive with suspense and unexpected events at the beginning. The protagonist trades with people and uses the method of burning goods to force the buyer to trade at the original price. In the second chapter, he fights with his companions. All his actions are very unique and make people want to know who this person is. , Forcing the beauty Yang Qionghua to break into the hero gate alone and annihilate the White Lotus Sect. This protagonist, who has strong martial arts, smart mind, and arrogant personality, has a bright and heroic appearance but has an unknown and sad past, so that he will fall out whenever others mention that woman. This flashback-style beginning directly cuts into the mature stage of the story's development, and even directly cuts into the ongoing emergency. Rather than the interesting and vividness of the story, I feel more of the suspense caused by the restriction of information. If we follow the normal narration pattern from the beginning of the story, this sense of mystery will be reduced a lot, because readers starting from the beginning already know a lot about the characters, and the information will not be completely opaque. However, since the mature protagonist is suddenly thrown out in an unexpected incident when he appears, this inexplicable entry mode actually abandons the gradual establishment of the reader's early identification with the protagonist at the beginning. Therefore, in terms of substitution and identification, it is disadvantageous compared to the writing method of writing a growing and weak protagonist from the beginning. Feature two: the introduction of wit-fighting elements. The intrigue and battle of wits are good. The book's general battle of wits and fighting mode are very obvious in the scene of rescuing Zhan Mubai. The protagonist, who made a deal with Yang Qionghua, the daughter of Governor Yang Bo of Xuanda, entered the heavily guarded Hero Gate and launched an operation to rescue Zhan Mubai, the leader of the Huashan Sect. The rescue operation was full of twists and turns, and the protagonist and the Hero Gate battled wits and courage. The protagonist successively defeated four guardian-level masters of Zhufeng Canglang and the Right Envoy of Light Zhang Lie. However, he was attacked by the Left Envoy of Light Huang Zongwei who pretended to be the prisoner Zhan Mubai that he wanted to rescue. The restrained protagonist used the little prince to threaten him, and then In a desperate counterattack, it turns out that the protagonist used the skill of moving acupuncture points to seal scriptures to pretend to be restrained, and took the opportunity to sneak attack and injure the left envoy Huang Zongwei with a heavy weight, and then use the future of the Hero Sect to reach a temporary reconciliation with the sect leader He Lianba. In this battle, the protagonist defeated the three top masters of the Hero Sect and successfully rescued Zhan Mubai, showing his scheming and martial arts skills. The opposing sides see through, see through, overwhelm, counter-overwhelm, fall into crisis, and the crisis reverses. The balance of victory swings between the protagonist, Huang Lunwei, the left envoy of the Hero Sect, and He Lianba, the leader of the Hero Sect. No one can know which side will win until the last moment. This kind of battle of wits takes turns. Although the pattern has the flavor of Gu Long's novels, it can also be said to be a major innovation. When done well, it can completely break the reader's prediction of the plot, control the reader's emotions at once, and allow the reader's autonomy to be temporarily controlled by the author. This is something that a regular plot does not have. Feature Three: Gradually rise from martial arts battles to struggles at the court level. This pattern of gradually rising from martial arts battles to court-level struggles can be seen in "******". The government courts in the country use informant networks, martial arts tea parties, celebrities in the world, etc. To control a person who succumbs to his lustful power through explicit or covert means. In Jianghu society, this model is also relatively obvious in this book. For example, the Hero Gate outside the Great Wall in the book was built by Helianba, the general of the Mongolian Tatar tribe. The purpose was to penetrate Mongolian influence into the Central Plains through martial arts hegemony. All parties in the court also Supporting the representatives of one's own forces in the arena, Yan Song is the supporter behind the demon sect. "Since more than ten years ago, various forces in the DPRK and China have supported the good and evil factions in the arena as their spokespersons in the arena. Yan Song and his son have been colluding with the demon sect. Over the years, Later, with the expansion of the power of the Yan Party, the power of the Demon Cult has also been steadily increasing, and now it has occupied half of the entire Jiangnan area." What the protagonist does is "he wants to form a new sect, recruit like-minded people, and start to attack Yan Song's forces in the world." Although the story has not yet entered the struggle at the court level, from the struggle in the martial arts outside the Great Wall, we can already vaguely see the competition between the various court forces hidden behind it.

I see that the protagonist has been showing off now

Damn it, except for the names of a few pig's feet in this book, the names are pretty normal. Others are poisonous. Forget it, even the homophonic names of the Condor figures. Darklin and Pi Yanping are all here.

2.1.9.2.6.3.4.1.0, There is interaction and communication.

This is indeed a good book and good martial arts, but the styles and forms of novels on the Internet are so diverse now that few people can bother to read traditional martial arts. I have read it twice before but failed to finish it. I came back this time and hope to finish it!

I discovered this novel very early. After reading dozens of pictures, I feel that the author is still good. Unfortunately, it is about traditional martial arts and I have no desire to read it. However, the author's writing style is still very good. When the author's next book is changed and the subject is changed, it will definitely become popular.

Not bad, not bad, self-recommended, Samsara Eye of All Heavens, multiple female protagonists, and has now entered the world of Inuyasha. There are some pictures to see

First of all, the author has a solid foundation in writing skills. He came from the Northern Prefecture of the Eastern Jin Dynasty. I admire the author's historical background. I skipped through more than a thousand chapters from the beginning. The logic is clear, the wording is exquisite, and the characters are vividly portrayed. I have to say that there are flaws. I think the marriage in the Ming Dynasty is a bit strange. The three of Li Muxu really shocked me.

Only then did I realize that it had been several months since the ending, and what the author said he would finish next month turned out to be true. . After a quick glance at the ending, I felt that I finally had no regrets. During the days when I abandoned the book, I sometimes thought about whether it would be too hasty to abandon the book when it was about to end. What if the author made a perfect reversal in the ending, and I would fall into the darkness before dawn again. In the end, author, you still did not disappoint me. I like this ending. It can be said to be a perfect ending for this novel that became more and more off-topic in the later period. Finally, I want to say that I am actually here to advertise, Sasha West Wind. Traditional martial arts has no system or time travel, nor does it end up referring to the gods and demons of the ancient times. It is just a niche work that adheres to traditional martial arts. Book lovers who are not interested in reading may wish to go and take a look.

I don't know if it's good or not. I've read ten chapters and don't know what to write? It feels very abrupt! Don't they all talk about the three golden chapters?

Why did he inexplicably jump to the second place in martial arts?

It's very interesting. I feel like it's a great martial arts novel. It's a real martial arts novel.

I'm not afraid of being tortured, but I'm afraid it will be very annoying if the plot continues to grind after hundreds of scenes. Things like Dark Age of Blood and Snow Swordsman are pretty good.

What's the matter with missing a chapter?

First encounter: In 2010, I started writing a 1-million-word book called "Infernal Witches". There was no outline at the time, but it later collapsed. Relying on each other: From 2013 to 2016, I wrote the 5.29 Million-word version of "Nine Heavens Immortal Tomb" and two martial arts fan novels. I can no longer find "Duan Yu of Tianlong" with 2 million words and "The Swordsman Free in the World of Martial Arts" with 1.2 Million words. Although it was rough, it helped me get through the difficult graduation period (I wrote at home after graduation in June 2014 until May 2016. I couldn't find a suitable job at that time, so I spent two years fishing and writing articles). We met again: Although I was not good at writing at the time, I read articles quickly, took the civil service exam, and became busy until October 2018 when I wrote another book "Blood Blade Master" with 1.08 Million words. Then it stopped again. Chengfengqi: Now, I want to regain my dream and weave a splendid fairy dream, so I have this book "The Legend of Zhu Xian on the Ancient Stele". In total, I have written more than 10 million words. In addition, I have gained some experience in the world in recent years. I believe this book will be wonderful.

It's so cruel. I just finished watching it and shed two tons of eyes.

It was so exciting and painful to read at the time that I was tortured. After many years, I came back to look for it on a whim. I didn't expect to find it. I was a little emotional. My brother, your book is also unique in martial arts.

This book is so well written. I haven't seen a martial arts novel like this in a long time. What kind of stuff is on the ranking list? It has to be an old book to be interesting.

The core of the whole story is the love between children. Without love, the plot cannot progress and conflicts cannot develop. It is a pity that the writing and plot are so good. As soon as you meet the little junior sister, love and intelligence will immediately fall. Everything must serve love. . . .

It's too strenuous to look at, Wen Chu Cre Novel

It's hard to write reviews of traditional martial arts. In today's era of intense scrutiny of the past and intense speculation, there are natural obstacles to the way out for traditional martial arts. In addition, traditional martial arts once had great glory. I believe that most people here grew up reading classic martial arts books one after another. There are mountains in front and dangers behind. This is the current situation of traditional martial arts. The way out for traditional martial arts also needs to be practiced bit by bit. This book "Cang Lang Xing" reminds me of "The Deer and the Cauldron" in terms of the thoughts revealed by the author. "The Deer and the Cauldron" is also combined with the contemporary situation in the book. Of course, from the current perspective, this is just a taste. So I'm thinking about whether the protagonist of this book can be the person in the shadow of history, and I'm really looking forward to it. After reading the whole article, I feel satisfied and regretful. Speaking of writing skills, if you don't have three-thirds of it, how can you dare to go to Liangshan? The writing style is also very good, simple and elegant, and brilliant. But there are two things I have to say. The first is the creation of the protagonist. The impression the protagonist gives me now is still superficial, even a bit excessive. Is it because the author rarely describes psychological activities in order to maintain a certain level of suspense? From the coldness of the opening chapter to the depth of the church members, and even the repeated performance of "teasing" women. It's hard to give me a definite picture. When it comes to character creation in martial arts novels, there are only six words: "great, upright, and noble." In the original online novels separated by a wall, in recent years, protagonists with various characteristics have become commonplace, full of the flavor of the times. The second point is about the design of the plot and scenes. In my impression, both places are relatively tedious to read. First, the protagonist meets an old friend, almost the same small scene is written over and over again in two or three chapters. Can the design be more clever here? The other is that the protagonist is taken into the woods by two minions, which takes up most of the chapter. I saw this and read it again, but I still didn't see the connotation. Later, I thought that the author must have entered a misunderstanding. In order to be vivid and detailed, I did not hesitate to use pen and ink to render the pictures in my mind. In fact, when it comes to writing, we must first establish the meaning of the text, with words and sentences as the flesh and blood, and paragraphs as the skeleton. There is nothing that must be written or not written. When writing an article, only use eight words: the pen and ink turn into a dragon, and the text is the finishing touch.

In the Cuckold King novel, the protagonist keeps cuckolding others, which is so disgusting.

The author made the Liang Yi Sword so awesome that the two of them were invincible when using it, and the junior sister could use it alone to the level of a top master. The Liang Yi Sword was set up as just one of Wudang's secret arts, but its actual effect is much more powerful than the Eighteen Palms of Subduing the Dragon.