Artistic Students

What should I say, I really enjoyed reading it at first, and felt that there was hope of becoming a god book, but when I saw the part about Xu Yuexun, I felt a little uncomfortable. Furthermore, what I said to the Chinese teacher made me gradually doubt the author's orderliness. Then the conversation with Josefina made me very uncomfortable. And the part about choosing a singer, traps, and never seeing each other again, it felt very, very childish. So I read it lazily, gave up, and stopped reading the rest of the plot. Also, I have a subscription to this book. I don't mean to blackmail you or anything, I'm just a pure reader. If I feel hurt in any way, I'm sorry.

Although it is no coincidence that it was not a book, The Old Man and the Sea was published too early. Although it is a short story, it is difficult to follow up on the vicissitudes of life. The height is too high, how to go up? ? ?

The writing is too watery! First of all, the author wanted to write a refreshing story about rebirth, but he failed to do several things: 1. The age was chosen too young. If the age is junior high school and high school, then a large part of your audience will be junior high school and high school students. It cannot win the hearts of real book readers, because the majority of people who read books are people from high school, college and society. 2. If the protagonist is too young and you are too outrageous, it will be too explicit and artificial. Reading experience is too bad 3. Author, you should act according to your ability. You know what your writing style is like. If your writing skills are not up to par, you should use your strengths and avoid weaknesses, and make up for it with new ideas in subject matter and ideas.

I thought this persimmon was very soft, haha

Li Kuang is an old bird, right? The writing style is so luxurious and sharp, and the previous parts are already very well written. If the quality does not drop, it will definitely be a sacred book in the time travel and entertainment series. Come on Li Kuang, I will always follow you and support you.

Indeed, Rongruo's poem "Magnolia" is indeed consistent with the format of the poem. If it were published in the name of Gu Yang, it would not be an exaggeration to say it was poetry. But it appears in the text. That poem by Nalan Xingde. I once saw in another urban article that the person also wrote a poem about Rong Ruo's magnolia flowers. I want to say something here. Rongruo's sentence "If life is just like the first time we met" comes from "Magnolia?" There is no doubt that the poem "The Ancient Jue Jue Ci Cambodian Friends" is the poem. As for the brand Magnolia, the words are the same as those in seven-character rhymed poetry. So a lot of people admit their mistakes. Of course, I'm not complaining, I just want to say something to prevent some people from being misled. I think the phrase "If life is just like the first time we met" is a poem. Also, please do your best to update.

Not kitsch, not arrogant, well written!

Let me make it clear at the beginning that I am not trying to criticize this heroine. I personally like her very much. What I want to say here is the author's flaws in this character's setting. According to the protagonist, Xu Yuexun is an innocent girl. The male protagonist tells us all about her life story when we meet her for the second time. She also doesn't know the skills necessary for a killer: acting skills that can kill all first-class actors in an instant and a certain amount of intelligence and scheming. Of course, the character setting in the article is very convenient for the male protagonist to hook up with, and it is very loving for all book lovers and soft girls. But for Xu Yuexun's identity, this is a big flaw. Xu Yuexun was born into a family of killers. Of course, the killers here should be more accurately said to be agents who perform the country's secret assassination missions. Putting aside the fact that the agents are not trained and brainwashed by the state but inherited by the family. Even if Xu Yuexun has never killed anyone, she should possess some of the necessary qualities of an agent and a killer. Please, Sister Xu was raised as a killer from a young age. Does the family of killers only teach them fighting and shooting when training killers? Don't those psychological qualities and thinking patterns need to be cultivated from an early age? How did the members of this family of killers pass down the family? Do they have the aura of the protagonist, or do the task targets and their bodyguards both have IQs of 9 when performing tasks? ! ! Of course, it can also be explained that her family doted on her and did not want her to be a killer, so she deliberately isolated her from these dark sides. However, note that the author said that her mother supported her becoming a killer, but this mother did not pay attention to her training. Is this the stepmother of the legendary Snow White? Ahem, it's a very important thing here, so I'll say it again. I'm not criticizing Xu, but I'm complaining about the inconsistency between identity and character settings. Of course, a pure and beautiful girl like Xu Meizi cannot come from today's materialistic society. She can come from a scholarly family, but of course she must be involved in martial arts. Ordinary martial arts families can also be used. If they are from a killer family, then I think Huang Rong or Huan Huan have better characters. This is a character analysis. It is not intended to be sensational, but to express my feelings. I would like to ask the author to pay more attention when writing the book. At the same time, I also wish Li Kuangda to make more progress in writing the book and achieve better and better results. Subscribed.

I was originally looking at a book that was so fresh and refreshing, but a female killer suddenly appeared and taught me the six moves... This style has completely dropped, and it is really a failure.

He is obviously soft on everyone and 70% soft on women, so don't write it in a cool and coaxing way. His psychological activities and actual actions are not consistent at all. The male protagonist imagines that he is calm and calm, but what about the reality? If you want to write about a stallion, just write it openly and honestly. The author seems to want to write about looking down on people, but in fact, he does not dare to offend people. He hopes that the plot will be carefully considered.

The first thing that emerged was Nalan Rongruo

China is so awesome and they still need to take the English test?

While thinking that if you become famous in the future, you will be suspected by others if you become famous suddenly, and on the other hand, you keep pretending to be a pig, it is really speechless. The reason why others doubt you is that you have always been mediocre, and suddenly you become awesome, which is unreasonable. For normal people, unless they treat their expertise as a hobby and never want to show it, it is okay to be low-key; otherwise, like the protagonist, who deliberately keeps a low profile at ordinary times and prepares to write songs and sing to become famous in the future, it is really annoying. Deliberately pretending to be a pig is simply a psychological distortion... In a word, hypocritical.

After reading Chapter 65, the author greatly missed the plot of Pigfoot's own original novel. Don't you think this setting is painful? Kill the reader's resonance and sense of YY. You must know that the G-spot mentioned in the rebirth YY article is just a copy of the word. If Pigfoot created a novel that does not exist in reality, Then you will lose your sense of resonance with readers. For example, Pig's Feet created an original book called "The Story of a Melancholic Literary Youth." It then became a phenomenon-level book. Readers don't see the so-called YY resonance. I said writing about reborn authors is great, why don't we do it without originality, and just copy from red books or industries related to entertainment! Stop being troublesome, Reborn Pig's Knuckle Original, there is no sense of YY, no red book copying, no sense of resonance, no sense of resonance, and then there are no clicks, no recommendations, no monthly tickets, no money to make, and in the end, if you don't pounce, who will? ? 🔪

A female killer appeared out of nowhere and messed up the tone of the novel. I felt that the author created this woman because of the song "In My Singing Voice". Every time I see Xu Yuexun appear, I feel uncomfortable. I feel like I am not from the same world. If you want to write entertainment articles, just write entertainment articles. Why do you do these messy ancient martial arts, killers and the like? 😭

As the saying goes, a literary life is a life that integrates culture and art. I have little talent and little knowledge. I hope all readers can help me. For example, some foreign music, rock music, sad music, or piano dance music, symphony, etc., As well as some domestic works, no matter how powerful Li Kuang is, he is just one person. I hope that all book friends can give me more support, so that literature and art will have a broader future.

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😁Is it easy for me to reach out and not hit the smiling person? A swaddling baby with a legendary life experience, but wandering around in a small village. In this colorful and strange continent, the little manzi began his journey of growth step by step...[Url=F3qmeq]

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My husband's novel disorder has been bothering him for many years, and no matter how much medicine he has taken, he is not getting better. By chance, his comrade recommended "The Great Emperor" to us. He said that after watching it, his wife recovered from a cerebral thrombosis that he had suffered for three years, so I asked him to give it a try twice. My wife was able to walk around after a week of treatment! [Url=MbY7Rv]

Why does it remind me of a certain nickname from before...

Like the title, if the author wants to make it more distinctive, don't have too many female protagonists, otherwise it will lose its characteristics!

It feels like a cartoon, haha

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In fact, it's not bad. The author should keep working hard, come on!

In the past, it was possible to continue watching, but now, it's difficult

Why doesn't the main character sing? It's a bit too pretentious. If he is a lyrical singer, he can sing a lot, such as fairy tales, those years, etc.

Blue and white porcelain is really nice to hear. When it comes to Jiangnan scenery, it is the image of blue and white porcelain. Jay Chou's Chinese-style songs are about to shine! The sky is blue and the misty rain is waiting And I'm waiting for you Smoke rises from the kitchen Thousands of miles across the river ~

I want to know, are there really clubs in high school...