The Golden Badge of the Martial World

🤭The writing is very good. I still want to read it. I support you.

Look at this, Rhythm Song Qingshu can also become a hero.

Throughout the story, from the male protagonist to the second male, third male, and fourth male, every protagonist of the original story has a relationship, but they have no strong influence and are classified as shadow protagonists. The plot has not changed and the relationship between the characters has not changed. It is just a third party making a friendly guest appearance. You should pick up your own girls, learn the martial arts you should fight, and fight the monsters you should fight.

I was persuaded to quit. My writing was a mess. I couldn't connect the previous paragraph to the next paragraph. I didn't know what I was writing. No wonder no one is watching. After reading about ten chapters, there is no difference between having a protagonist and not having one. After beating him, he gave the scriptures to Xiaoxiangzi and the others and took them away. Xiao Yuanshan beat Murong Bo away. Can't you just tell Xiao Yuanshan that you are his son's sworn brother, and then tell him that Murong Bo is the culprit behind the scenes? Since you feel sad if Xuan Bei dies later, then if Murong Bo is beaten to death by Xiao Yuanshan, will Xuan Bei not die? Moreover, the timeline is messy. Xiao Yuanshan and Murong Bocai met, and Murong Bocai gave the seventy-two stunts to Jiumozhi. So we had to wait more than ten years before Xuanbei was killed? Moreover, Jiumozhi didn't know that Murong Bo faked his death, so why would he help him kill Xuan Bei. Chen Youliang is a lay disciple and Yuan Zhen's disciple. He always talks faster than the abbot and the chief, and he comes out to find fault with the protagonist several times. Moreover, when the abbot faced Chen Youliang's accusation, he had to find excuses to excuse the protagonist? Chen Youliang is the Supreme Elder of TM Shaolin Temple, right? Why is he so shameless? Please read the original work before writing it. It's so erroneous and illogical that it makes me feel numb.

The protagonist doesn't do anything serious for a day! Very cowardly!

Everyone who wants to write a story must have a different inner world from everyone else. What makes a writer insist on coding and write a story of millions of words? It's not boring, nor is it for the royalties, it's a hobby, it's the joy of sharing stories from your heart with readers! Especially for friends who are also newcomers, coding is relatively slow and their popularity is low. A compliment from a reader will make a newcomer extremely happy. Where there is praise, there will be criticism. Whether you are a master or a novice, you may or may not support your work. It is impossible to satisfy everyone. I guess you, the author, have also struggled with whether to describe a scene from sound to scene, or from scene to sound. When you write about some funny parts, do you think the readers will laugh? You think your writing is outstanding, but readers don't seem to notice it, so you are disappointed. I hope a reader can read your article carefully and analyze it carefully! Writing can improve one's own knowledge, enable people to understand things, and pay attention to the small details in life. Each person's personality characteristics can be exaggerated and written into the story. Although the author created a world, many events still have to be compared to the world we live in. Everyone's writing has its own sharpness, and everyone's story has its own merits, so you can see your own shortcomings in every article. Commenting on other people's articles not only provides support to the author, but also improves my own writing level and allows me to see my own shortcomings, so I will continue to read other people's works to improve myself. Having said so much, I hope the author will continue to write for his original hobby! Put aside the fame or not, just for the original hobby! Come on! 🌹🌹

Let's talk about the heroine issue first. It feels like there is no heroine. There is no mention of Cheng Ying and the protagonist's marriage. The heroine has not appeared a few times and Gongsun Lu'e has only mentioned it briefly. The plot always ends happily and satisfactorily or it just follows the original plot. There is another question: from Tianlong in the Northern Song Dynasty to Yitian in the late Yuan Dynasty, the appearance has not changed for more than 200 years. I wonder if Gongsun Lue and Cheng Ying will appear in the next role, and which heroine will be taken over. The plots written by the author always make people feel serious and dull, and they lack some small selling points of funny elements. They have more jokes, such as changing some classic passages from the original text, and using them all on the protagonist. Although it is not very brilliant, at least the article has been modified without any flaws.

Will the author not grow old? I feel that the author is a bit nosy, Yi Tian opens the chapter, Zhang Cuishan and his wife are immortal. Zhang Wuji, it's better to follow Yitian's plot at the beginning of the following plot adventure, and only participate in the plot at the beginning

Why is it that the protagonist is still the same up to now? From Tianlong, who was considered a teenager to Shendiao, he should be at least in his 30s. Moreover, as one of the greatest masters in the world (who seems to be the best in the world), not many people know him. I have taught Li Mochou a lesson several times, but Li Mochou still has the courage to take action. Does Li Mochou not remember to fight or something? Besides, Guo Fu's father is considered half of the protagonist's apprentice. He doesn't even know who the protagonist is. At least he mentioned his appearance and figure.

Is this... A sign of wanting to take Sister Hong as my wife?