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Throughout the story, from the male protagonist to the second male, third male, and fourth male, every protagonist of the original story has a relationship, but they have no strong influence and are classified as shadow protagonists. The plot has not changed and the relationship between the characters has not changed. It is just a third party making a friendly guest appearance. You should pick up your own girls, learn the martial arts you should fight, and fight the monsters you should fight.

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Everyone who wants to write a story must have a different inner world from everyone else. What makes a writer insist on coding and write a story of millions of words? It's not boring, nor is it for the royalties, it's a hobby, it's the joy of sharing stories from your heart with readers! Especially for friends who are also newcomers, coding is relatively slow and their popularity is low. A compliment from a reader will make a newcomer extremely happy. Where there is praise, there will be criticism. Whether you are a master or a novice, you may or may not support your work. It is impossible to satisfy everyone. I guess you, the author, have also struggled with whether to describe a scene from sound to scene, or from scene to sound. When you write about some funny parts, do you think the readers will laugh? You think your writing is outstanding, but readers don't seem to notice it, so you are disappointed. I hope a reader can read your article carefully and analyze it carefully! Writing can improve one's own knowledge, enable people to understand things, and pay attention to the small details in life. Each person's personality characteristics can be exaggerated and written into the story. Although the author created a world, many events still have to be compared to the world we live in. Everyone's writing has its own sharpness, and everyone's story has its own merits, so you can see your own shortcomings in every article. Commenting on other people's articles not only provides support to the author, but also improves my own writing level and allows me to see my own shortcomings, so I will continue to read other people's works to improve myself. Having said so much, I hope the author will continue to write for his original hobby! Put aside the fame or not, just for the original hobby! Come on! 🌹🌹

The protagonist doesn't do anything serious for a day! Very cowardly!

I was persuaded to quit. My writing was a mess. I couldn't connect the previous paragraph to the next paragraph. I didn't know what I was writing. No wonder no one is watching. After reading about ten chapters, there is no difference between having a protagonist and not having one. After beating him, he gave the scriptures to Xiaoxiangzi and the others and took them away. Xiao Yuanshan beat Murong Bo away. Can't you just tell Xiao Yuanshan that you are his son's sworn brother, and then tell him that Murong Bo is the culprit behind the scenes? Since you feel sad if Xuan Bei dies later, then if Murong Bo is beaten to death by Xiao Yuanshan, will Xuan Bei not die? Moreover, the timeline is messy. Xiao Yuanshan and Murong Bocai met, and Murong Bocai gave the seventy-two stunts to Jiumozhi. So we had to wait more than ten years before Xuanbei was killed? Moreover, Jiumozhi didn't know that Murong Bo faked his death, so why would he help him kill Xuan Bei. Chen Youliang is a lay disciple and Yuan Zhen's disciple. He always talks faster than the abbot and the chief, and he comes out to find fault with the protagonist several times. Moreover, when the abbot faced Chen Youliang's accusation, he had to find excuses to excuse the protagonist? Chen Youliang is the Supreme Elder of TM Shaolin Temple, right? Why is he so shameless? Please read the original work before writing it. It's so erroneous and illogical that it makes me feel numb.

Will the author not grow old? I feel that the author is a bit nosy, Yi Tian opens the chapter, Zhang Cuishan and his wife are immortal. Zhang Wuji, it's better to follow Yitian's plot at the beginning of the following plot adventure, and only participate in the plot at the beginning

The author wrote these chapters and felt that Yang Kang would have sex with the protagonist YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Won't you see the end of a beautiful boy's love affair? 😰😰😰

The setting of Murong Bo's disguise as Xiao Yuanshan is unreasonable. If Murong Bo had such good disguise skills, he would not have remained anonymous for so long. Decades are enough for him to thoroughly understand all the details of a person's life. As long as he disguises himself as a high official of the imperial court, the world will be in chaos, and his goal will be easier to achieve.

It's hard to surpass classics, not to mention many classic novels put in one bowl. It's too messy. The backgrounds of the Song, Yuan, and Ming dynasties are messy, too messy.

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Is this... A sign of wanting to take Sister Hong as my wife?

😅😅😅😅😅 I really like martial arts books... But no matter how I read, I couldn't get into it. I felt that the characters in the novel did not fit in, and it was a bit superficial. I have consumed too much of the original work and am indifferent.

Let's talk about the heroine issue first. It feels like there is no heroine. There is no mention of Cheng Ying and the protagonist's marriage. The heroine has not appeared a few times and Gongsun Lu'e has only mentioned it briefly. The plot always ends happily and satisfactorily or it just follows the original plot. There is another question: from Tianlong in the Northern Song Dynasty to Yitian in the late Yuan Dynasty, the appearance has not changed for more than 200 years. I wonder if Gongsun Lue and Cheng Ying will appear in the next role, and which heroine will be taken over. The plots written by the author always make people feel serious and dull, and they lack some small selling points of funny elements. They have more jokes, such as changing some classic passages from the original text, and using them all on the protagonist. Although it is not very brilliant, at least the article has been modified without any flaws.

To be honest, the protagonist's chivalrous spirit reminds me of Li **. It is said that Wang Yuyan is Duan Yu's marriage. In fact, it is just that the protagonist's thoughts are still stuck in the book, or he cares too much about his brother's feelings. But at the time, Wang Yuyan did not like Duan Yu. The male protagonist's constant love of mandarin ducks made me unhappy. Actually, it's just talk. After all, it's rare to see such a kind-hearted male protagonist, and I'm a little unaccustomed to it...

Why is it that the protagonist is still the same up to now? From Tianlong, who was considered a teenager to Shendiao, he should be at least in his 30s. Moreover, as one of the greatest masters in the world (who seems to be the best in the world), not many people know him. I have taught Li Mochou a lesson several times, but Li Mochou still has the courage to take action. Does Li Mochou not remember to fight or something? Besides, Guo Fu's father is considered half of the protagonist's apprentice. He doesn't even know who the protagonist is. At least he mentioned his appearance and figure.

Alas, martial arts is too cold. I wonder why my brother chose to write about martial arts?

When I first saw this book, I was attracted by its Jin Yong heroic setting. There are many, if not many, martial arts fans of this genre, but this is the only one that is still being updated continuously. The main story trend at the beginning is based on Tianlong, with some characters from other stories interspersed. The story up to now is still dominated by the story of the vulture, with characters from other stories interspersed intermittently. Personally, it seems that it is not advisable to interpret the story in the style of Jin Yong's heroes fighting, with a certain person as the main character, and a certain person as an embellishment. This is because we know that when there are more people in a world who should not appear, and the characters in several worlds overlap and intersect, the resulting butterfly effect will only make the original story specious. The result may remain the same, but the process in the middle will undergo various changes. Of course, the protagonist seems to have intervened in the direction and ending of many stories as a time-traveling bystander. However, the cause and effect of the superposition of several worlds does not seem to reflect much, and a lot of the fun of "Guan Gong vs. Qin Qiong" is missing. Furthermore, I personally don't think it's appropriate to use Tianlong as the starting point of the story. The protagonist is watching the world from outside the story as a person who has traveled through time, but at the same time he is involved in it, training and growing along with the story. But a problem arises. Generally speaking, as the main story of the novel progresses, the characters who appear later have more advanced martial arts or mental skills. For example, in Tianlong, the protagonist's martial arts are on par with the level of the three protagonists of Tianlong/the four masters of Tianlong (Murong Bo, Xiao Yuanshan, Jiumozhi, Xiao Feng). An obvious example is that Qiao Feng is the leader of the Beggar Clan, and Hong Qigong is the honorary leader. Both of them have reached the peak of the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms. However, in actual combat, Hong Qigong will definitely not be able to defeat Qiao Feng. His honorary leader status is mostly due to his chivalry and personal integrity. In this way, a problem arises. The protagonist's martial arts skills are no less than Qiao Feng in the later stage of the Tianlong story line. However, Zhou Botong, who appears now, was no match for Hong Qigong before he learned Jiuyin. Ouyang Feng, Huang Yaoshi and others are also on par with Hong Qigong. The protagonist has already tied with the three protagonists of Tianlong/the four talents of Tianlong in the front. The four talents of Huashan and even Zhou Botong appear later. The protagonist is still helpless. Does this mean that the four talents of Huashan are more powerful than the three protagonists of Tianlong? Or maybe the protagonist is going back as he learns martial arts? If it is difficult to arrange the appearance of the characters when writing about Jin Yong's heroic themes, we can actually distribute them in parallel according to the power of the main characters in each book. This will avoid Jin Yong's heroic themes and still follow a single story line. Just give a few examples. Tianlong, Shooting Condor, Shendiao, Yitian, the national-level forces of the Southern Song Dynasty, Jin Kingdom, Mongolia, Xixia, and Tubo can actually be put together completely at the same time. Mongolia has not yet appeared during the Tianlong period, but Tianlong has no involvement in the Northeast region at all, so in In the early stage of the story, it is directly arranged that Mongolia has established a country in the northeast, which has no impact at all; the next level at the national level is the martial arts forces. Mingjiao/Shaolin, etc., Which have an orderly inheritance, can directly merge the characters, and sects such as Quanzhen, Kunlun, and Wudang can also be directly set to coexist at the same time. After the upper-level forces are planned and distributed, the characters belonging to these forces can make their own reasonable fabrications and intervention changes based on the grievances and grievances of their respective forces, as well as the storyline of the original work. It is completely possible for the stories of several original works to proceed in parallel at the same time, rather than transitioning one by one. For example, Jiumozhi went to Tianlong Temple to force the Six Meridians Divine Sword. The Tianlong Monk wanted to form a Six Meridians Divine Sword Formation to fight against the enemy. He originally wanted to invite Yideng to make up the number, but Yideng was unable to come at this time to save Huang Rong's vitality, so he had to ask Baoding Emperor to come. And because of this, Yideng did not learn the Six Meridians Divine Sword in the end. What if one of them, Yideng, is Duan Yu's great-grandson and appears at the same time? It is completely possible to make up a story that Yi Deng and Duan Yu are not from the same family line, but are three generations younger than Yi Deng. Even though Yi Deng is older than Duan Yu, he is still called his great-uncle. Since they are not from the same family line, it can be arranged that Yi Deng is just the prince, not the emperor, and Ying Gu is just the princess, not the imperial concubine. She met Zhou Botong in the palace all because she entered the palace and met the queen/