Rebirth of the Entertainment Grandmaster

The author apologizes in advance. I really like this kind of work😊. At the same time, I also like poetry. Regarding Chapter 15 "The Legend of Third Brother to the Present", the author mentioned two poems. It should be two articles. The song "If Life Is Only Like the First Meeting" is not a poem, but a poem. The word card is magnolia flower order, and the title is "Ancient Jue Ci".

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😁I haven't seen such a good book for a long time. I feel sorry for the author if I don't reward it😁

Chapter 59 What happened? Are you here to make me cry? I don't know if watching it will remind me of my grandparents who passed away many years ago. Xiaoer, Xiaoer... I really want to play you until I die! Chapter 59... You can become a god.

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Don't worry, the author. I'll give you a reward as soon as your salary is paid this month. The author's bacteria come on↖(^ω^)↗🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

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By the way, with the lyrics of that song, is it really manly for a girl to sing to a girl? ! So speechless! ! I won't talk about the story of Tian Long Ba Bu. There are too many people talking about it. I won't talk about the protagonist's character either. It's quite vulgar and hard to watch!

After reading a few chapters, I have some questions. Regarding copying books with pig's feet, if you can memorize a lot of poems, that's no problem. If you can memorize a lot of music scores, it's okay to write one. If you say you can memorize Tianlong Babu, can you still rely on the music? I hope the author can fill in this BUG in the future. In addition, the details sometimes look quite unpleasant. Sometimes the pig's feet look like 2B. I guess it's because the author is not old, or it's a problem with his writing skills. This subject is very popular now, I hope he can write it well.

Most of the books written by the protagonist of this book are commercial works, and none of them are pure literature and art! How to make him a real great master and writer!

1. If the author could refine those long-winded dialogues. Speed ​​up the plot. It will look better! I estimate that by cutting out the nonsense, the word count of the novel can be reduced by half. 😁 2. The protagonist's name is too confusing. Outsiders call him Ye Tang, and family members call him Tang Ye. And why do we need so many pen names and online names to post poems and songs? You use too many online names to publish different good poems and lyrics, which I think is very annoying! What a waste of the good works of the earth's poets! What are you planning? 🥺 3. The background is wonderful! It's simply a divine setting! 4. The recommended music is all very nice! ~ 🤭🌹

Do you think swiping a card to donate is the same as throwing coins on a bus? No reminder when paying 200,000? Also, as this is written by the great master of entertainment, I think your content is crooked. The era background is wrong, the social sentiments are far-fetched, and a large number of poems are misappropriated. The protagonist might as well have traveled to ancient times. Rice porridge is not that easy to make. It tastes bad and not as good as a bowl of white rice porridge. Anyway, it feels weird, and the problem lies in the poetry.

If you have nothing to do, you can come and brag. (Three. Six. Seven. Six. Seven. Zero. Nine. Two. Zero)

According to the background of the author's writing, it should not be modern Chinese. The current northern Chinese is the product of the nomadic people who occupied the Central Plains in history and learned the language of the local Han people. The pronunciation characteristics of the Hu language were merged with the pronunciation of ancient Chinese. Your culture comes directly from the Tang Dynasty, and the Mandarin used should still be Yayan? The pronunciation is somewhat similar to the current Fujian and Guangdong, so singing "My Deskmate You" according to this should not sound good, right? In this way, poems and songs should be plagiarized in two languages, that is, the protagonist also needs to create Mandarin and then popularize it, but it should be difficult, using Mandarin to castrate ancient Chinese, haha 😃

For example, The Eight Parts of the Dragon is about things that happened between the fifth year of Yuanyou and the ninth year of Yuanyou/the first year of Shaosheng, Zhezong of the Northern Song Dynasty. However, the background set by the author is that there have been no other dynasties in the other world since the Tang Dynasty. I really admire the protagonist for putting the Eight Parts of the Dragon without any changes. He really has common sense... There are many similar ones, which make people look very uncomfortable. The author must not be very old himself, right?

But the protagonist's character is too wretched. How should I put it? No grace. In fact, it's okay if the protagonist has no grace. The point is that the title of the novel is called The Grand Master, which is inappropriate. The author may want to make the protagonist a little person, and then rely on the memories in his head to slap him in the face. But if the opponent is arrogant, that's fine. The problem is that the author has written the current opponents very well, which makes the protagonist look like a villain. In fact, sometimes it's good to defeat your opponent in an upright manner. I remember watching an episode. The protagonist doesn't use all kinds of weapons and magical powers. He just hits people with his fist and asks: Do you accept it or not? It feels so good.