Eldest Daughter

The story is pretty good, but the writing style is a bit poor in readability.

There are too many repeated chapters. Although it is finished, I still hope the author can revise it. It is an uncomfortable mess.

The writing is unsatisfactory and I can't stand it. The beginning gives me the impression that it's just trying to be mysterious, and I feel like I'm so strong and powerful after reviving my life. What's the result of a pack of croton powder? I lost my confidence immediately and gave up.

To be honest, to enjoy glory and wealth, one must also be aware of failure. Who doesn't know that accompanying a king is like accompanying a tiger? Since you have chosen this path, you will gain or lose your life. It is impossible to get reward without any effort and risk.

I came here after seeing the powerful lady! Compared to Quan Guijiao, the writing style of this book is a bit immature! Compulsively reading! Of course, it is precisely because of comparison that we can see that the author has really made great progress! Now looking forward to the author's new book, My Wife Is Here! Book friends, the author's previous book "Powerful Lady" is very good and highly recommended.

Why do all the characters in it have a sense of intellectual deficiencies but pretend to be profound. Let's not talk about how Mr. Shen believed that the person who revealed the information to Ruliu Chu must be one of his own. Why did he not find out that such a secret existence as Ruliu Chu was known to a stranger? Funny, right? Also, a prince dies and a beloved concubine has a miscarriage, all of which happened after the Minister of War was changed. Doesn't anyone think it's suspicious? Why doesn't the emperor check it? Isn't this too ambitious? Even if you can find out what happened in the palace, why can't you find out that Mrs. Chen was drugged? Shouldn't it be the other way around? After reading Chapter 70, the overall feeling is okay, but the layout and techniques inside are really childish and unreflective. There is always a feeling of being intellectually subdued, and there is really no motivation to read...

Judging from the description at the beginning, the heroine's family really deserves it. She has no political acumen. She is a king and a tiger. She has great achievements and shocks the master. She is suspected of having a relative in power. She doesn't know how to keep a low profile and retire after her achievements. The heroine still complains about injustice? You really can't expect too much from female authors in this regard.

I have collected this book for a long time, but I haven't read it until I got tired of reading Mary Suwen. I just finished it recently. Overall, it's good. I personally feel that the development of the storyline is quite realistic. I never thought that rebirth can make a person wise and wise, and predict the enemy's opportunities in everything. Due to changes in the present, the consequences will naturally change, and this change is uncontrollable, so there is a saying that the future has infinite possibilities. This is a point that makes me speechless when I read other rebirth novels (except for Lord Zhizhi's novel 😁, I guess I haven't read enough of them), female Although the main character does not have a Mary Sue, and there are not many golden fingers, the descriptions in some places are still not rigorous enough. For example, the development of the spider is too simple, making people wonder how a little servant suddenly became so powerful, how the people in the spider became so capable, etc. Secondly, the changes in the two dynasties are also in line with the historical trend. Generally speaking, it is good. I recommend that those who don't like Mary Suwen should read it.

I just started writing about the five princes setting up a trap. It felt really childish. If you don't have the ability and writing power to fight in politics, you shouldn't write it well. Forcibly writing this kind of heirloom with the mentality of house fighting seems stupid and childish. I hope the author can improve his writing skills and, most importantly, broaden his horizons. Don't make it like a village election. It's too childish.

This book is well written and worth reading. Full of positive energy!

The narration is too poor, extremely long-winded, with no ups and downs, just a running account, the perspectives change back and forth, and the language is boring.

The ending is too hasty. Will you continue with the next book?

What happened to the starting point? You also have to pay to watch the closing remarks!

This comes and goes The author should consider changing this habit

It's a bit long-winded and the male protagonist is not outstanding. It only became good after reading more than 100 chapters. It's a bit of a Machiavellian story and the emotional line is average.

I am a man who was sent here by the short video of the movie version. I have not watched the movie version, so I specially watched the original work first! Hey-hey! I have read too many other novels, so change your taste and read Gong Douwen!

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After reading Chapter 16, I have two questions: 1. Why did the great-uncle that the heroine said could save the whole family passed away inexplicably, and the Shen family didn't observe filial piety for him? 2. Why did Chen Wanrou, the granddaughter of the Minister of War, so easily believe that her maid, Hong Xiu, had any intention of paying her back? In the midst of a book shortage, I read this book only after reading the book recommendation. I am very disappointed so far! I hope the more I write in the future, the better it will be!