The History of Agricultural Female Hunters Making a Fortune in Farming

Been watching it these days. I can say that this author is a breath of fresh air. There is no Long Aotian, no tricks, and the plot is thoughtful and detailed. The only drawback is that it is too stiff in some places. But he is a newcomer after all, so there is no problem if he is not experienced enough. The self-improving heroine is very popular, and the world view of this article is far more than the current one. There is much more to write about in the future. Everyone join in and chase together! Here, I would like to give you a few suggestions. No matter which one, they are just for reference. After all, I am not a professional and cannot consider everything fully. ⊙Plot: Although the routine is popular, but after watching it too much, it becomes boring. I hope the author will try not to write in a mainland style and be more innovative. It's hard, so just try your best. ⊙Characters: Grasp the characters. The heroine's current character has been revealed. Every plot and every decision that follows must first be determined based on her character. You can't force development just for the sake of being interesting, exciting, explosive, or just to make up for the word count. This will make readers choke with tears. Each character has established his own point after appearing in a few chapters. Moreover, everyone has their own strengths and weaknesses, and the supporting roles should be more portrayed, otherwise they will be too thin. In this article, except for the female teacher and mother-in-law, the sisters are not very distinctive. Maybe it's because there are too many. ⊙Follow-up: The further you get to the back, the harder it is to grasp the overall situation. Because you have to remember the character of the supporting character who appears, write his behavior, and come up with new plots and maps. At this time, a large number of newcomers' works will collapse and become watery. So I would like to advise the author, when you get stuck in the middle and late stages, don't act too hastily, you can stop. Wait until you think of a good plot before writing. More reversals. It's a little bit of fun, and it's good to have some reasonable ones. Am I feeding myself glass shards? Heavy fog. Because the hydrology is actually worse than not being written (True Fragrance Warning), I took my time. The first step was to create the characters, and the second step was to adapt to the characters and give her a path and a scenery. Furthermore: after just a few chapters, you should see if there are any new points. Being dull for a long time will lead to low quality (those works that focus on delicate emotions are not here, but this article is a self-improvement article after all, with plot as the main focus and emotion as the supplement) When polishing the characters, don't be too perfect. Give her some flaws. But the shortcomings must be grasped properly, and they must not be due to character. Both character and behavior are acceptable. Secondly, let me add one more thing: the supporting characters also occupy a large area. Create a few more supporting characters that are both upbeat, impressive, and vivid. Also, please don't have any clever plot where the male protagonist falls in love at first sight and is completely confused! I would rather not write it than destroy the established character. There are no feelings without reason. Turning details determine success or failure. Gather a few best friends, a few buddies, and a few strangers who appear rarely but are unique, and then focus on writing their own stories with the protagonist. Then, when the semester started, some readers were isolated from the world, such as me, but I came back to order after a short period of time. No matter it's a street fight or a fire, the author must persevere!

I really like this kind of non-CP growth type of writing

The writing is very good, and the ideas are wonderful! The arrangement for the arena competition is relatively new. The characters are vivid and the girls written are so cute! All great. The thinking is also relatively advanced, it's so cool without cp

The heroine's family is like tool people, especially the sisters are like puppets, and the grandfather is disgusting...😠😥

I'm reading Chapter 700. These chapters are really good. I once thought that if I wrote an article, I would write about women who were stabbed by their male family members. This is the history of blood and tears of women. It's a pity that there are no women who write history, or the people in power don't allow women to leave their history. Therefore, our ancestors have made sacrifices from generation to generation and repeated the fate of cunning rabbits and lackeys. It seems that they will never learn well. There are too many women around us who have been washed away from their natural instincts and are content with their status as donkeys.

This is too cute, why do I feel that Qianyue and Xiaoba will become a couple in the end! ! ! !

Clicking on the character, a series of pink colors appeared, and I screamed! Ah! There are no men in the main and supporting roles! Fairy book!

The princess here makes me feel like Princess Taiping at that time. Being tricked by Li Longji. Since then, the status of women has been trampled into the dust.

Author, does the heroine really want to change her surname to Tang? Can you change her name? Otherwise, the name Mantis Spirit (Tang Langjing) reminds people of Calabash Baby and Scorpion Spirit every minute.

This all-female supporting cast is so appealing to me, I'm going to eat it. 😁

I have been following this book for so long, and today I will tell you my feelings. First of all, I read this book because of its subject matter, no CP, and a self-improving heroine, which really appealed to me 😁. After reading the book, I found that the content of the book is very upright, and there are no flaws or flaws (the author is a bit of a talker, doesn't it count (quietly, please) 🤭). Then there is the background of the story, ancient times, supernatural powers, and a female hunter who had a bad life, which felt very novel to me. From the current point of view, the world view is very large, and there is a lot of room for development. There are no routines, and there is no starting point that is full of failures. The level is slowly rising, and the progress is steady. Tell the story happily. Writing style: The writing style may be a bit green, but you won't feel like a novice. You are a new author and there is still a lot of room for improvement. Don't miss it if you pass by, let's catch up together 😃

The author's thinking is novel, but the copywriting is too slow. When I saw the copy, I didn't want to read it anymore, but I was looking for investment and this book was very high on the newcomer list, so I wanted to read it for ten minutes. Who knew? It's very beautiful ♬(ノ゜∇゜)ノ♩ Love it, love it (⑉°з°)-♡ The author has updated it, there are too few

All-female lineup😍😍 I really like the setting.

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It is rare to see someone who is not a virgin and is decisive in killing. Moreover, the world view becomes larger later on, and the discussion of women's rights in a patriarchal society is quite in-depth, which is interesting and interesting.

I have read Chapter 130, and the plot is still quite novel, and my outlook on the story is quite positive so far. It's just that my wife is too wordy. She can express herself clearly in just three sentences, but she has to write several paragraphs. Not happy to see

I watched Zheng Linchu's brainwashing, so Zheng Linchu is full and holding on. Why should I imitate Zhao Min? She doesn't have Zhao Min's temperament and does not have Zhao Min's domineering attitude. She is just a clown. And she is from a wealthy family and she has a sister who is talking to a group of peasant girls. I don't know what kind of trouble she is in. Why is the heroine's family full of women? She shows off her wealth every day and is not afraid of being remembered by thieves.

She really liked it at first, but then she saw that she had to give her family more than sixty taels of silver when she signed the deed of sale. What couldn't she buy with this money? Moreover, it is said that an ordinary woman can be sold as a maid to a wealthy family for only four taels. The heroine pays her to work, right? Moreover, she only signed the contract for a few years, and then she can leave immediately. The maid signed the contract for life, and she had to pay her master more money to redeem herself. The heroine paid for them and paid them a salary. In the end, the dozens of taels of silver were given away for nothing. At this time, the heroine herself only had more than two hundred taels. In addition, when the second sister marries a husband, two fools in their family want to marry, aren't they afraid of giving birth to a fool? In addition, their family is greedy and shameless. What should they do if they become in-laws and come to fight against the autumn wind? The heroine says she is nice to her sister, but in fact, she doesn't care at all

After watching half of it, I stopped reading. The more I watched, the more tired I became. Money really didn't matter, and I had to spend all the money I had. I have no plans for the future at all. I was tired and stopped watching it.

I couldn't stand it anymore, as if someone was saying "na, na, na" in my ear, suggesting that I give up the preaching like a foot wrap. The character who is too self-righteous is also very annoying.

I feel that the heroine has grown up too slowly. She laughs and laughs at counting the money after being betrayed. On the contrary, Zheng Linchu looks like a heroine. All the heroine's actions are for Zheng's plot. Ordinary people know that one bite cannot make you fat, but when the heroine has no money, she still has to spend a huge amount of money to buy team members. The same goes for sweet potatoes. When she has no money, she still buys land to plant them. Normal people shouldn't hunt more and slowly recruit people. Also, after planting more than 2,000 acres of sweet potatoes, they can't sell them and then plant and expand when they have money? I feel like this kind of unreasonable behavior is just for the sake of Zheng's plot.

Where are you? Why aren't you back? Woohoo!

Let's just talk about sweet potatoes. . . Are sweet potatoes the same as sweet potatoes? I grew them every year in my hometown in the countryside, so I am very familiar with them. First of all, they can be stored for a long time. Even if there are bumps, they can be stored as long as the surface of the bumps dries to form a protective film. We all have cellars at home, and the sweet potatoes can be eaten in the cellar after removing some of the water. They can be eaten for a whole year. They are mainly used as pig food. People eat it occasionally, but if they eat too much, they will get heartburn and make them fart. The second is to plant sweet potatoes. Like potatoes, sweet potatoes have many bud openings. You don't need to plant them whole. Cut them into pieces according to the bud openings, and then cover the cuts with soil ash to prevent them from rotting and becoming inflamed. You can still plant them. In this way, one sweet potato seed can cut off many sweet potato seeds and then transplant them.

It's too boring. I've read some. I can write a few chapters or more for a medium-sized thing. I don't have many words at first. It feels like half of it is water. It's too boring. It's like watching an episode of a TV series. The plot doesn't advance much and the progress bar has run out.

It's beautiful. I haven't seen such refreshing writing in a long time.

I like to listen to boys read aloud, how to adjust

The protagonist has to discuss with his family when buying equipment, and he has to raise pigs first, so he bought the equipment first and then said no, and the second brother-in-law, his father, uncle, and the eldest sister all have their own little ideas.

Newcomer, I would like to ask if the heroine left all eight sisters at home to raise children, did the subsequent sisters learn a craft or split up the family? ? Or does the heroine support all her sisters, brothers-in-law, and nephews? ? ?