Rebirth of the Novel Master

The writing of the female protagonist is so bad. Hu Xiaomi is just a scumbag in real life. She confessed to the male protagonist and asked him to become her boyfriend, but later she refused to admit that she was the male protagonist in front of another man. What does this mean? The most irritating thing is that the male protagonist actually becomes a licker and sticks to it himself. How can such a male and female protagonist make readers feel involved?

I feel like vomiting when I see a copycat from another world!

If Liu's relationship with Hu and Yang (I dare not say love) is to set up foreshadowing for Yitian, it means that the author has a good sense, but the skill of laying out hidden lines is not enough. Piaomiao Peak, which appeared at the beginning of Tianlong, was only unfolded in the fourth book, but no one felt sudden, only suddenly, it turned out to be like this!

The empty streets should mean that everyone has gone out, right?

Don't comment on previous books with your current perspective. You should have known that in those days, no matter what book you read, it would be amazing at first glance. Now that you have read too much of all genres and are tired of it, you will definitely feel that the previous books are not pleasing to your eyes.

I couldn't stand it after reading the beginning. One thing I couldn't accept is that a junior high school student writes martial arts. You have to copy something reasonable. No matter how awesome a junior high school student is, you don't have much experience. Can a genius write this kind of novel? I believe that a genius can learn mathematics and physics in elementary school. No matter how talented you are in literature and novels, you have to go through a process of accumulation. How old are the winners of so many Nobel Prizes in Literature? You should at least write in the third year of high school. College is the most suitable. I really can't stand this book.

The emotional drama in this book is poisonous, really poisonous. In just a dozen chapters, the male protagonist is 14 or 15 years old in junior high school, and there is an editor named Hu Xiaomi who is studying in college and asks the male protagonist to be his boyfriend. It's really too poisonous, the editor is trying to steal the author! Rabbits just eat grass on the edge of their nests. If you don't eat it, you won't eat it. The emotional scenes that follow are even more unbearable. It is recommended to skip the emotional scenes and read it. It is really a book shortage and there are no good books to read.

As a student with no financial resources, I am sorry that I cannot express my feelings in the form of subscriptions, rewards, etc. I came across the book review section by chance, and I had to express my thoughts on some of the posts. Personally, I prefer novels with this type of writing theme, and I have read a lot of novels, but most of these novels have some mindless elements. To be honest, I really can't understand why I feel alienated in a completely unfamiliar world. The protagonists of these articles always seem to have a game-playing attitude. No matter how many meaningful articles they publish, they will always have the same mentality as the original diaosi, or they may have gone from being an otaku who only reads novels to becoming a great literary master without any connection. They are not really alive. The meaning of their existence is to make themselves the carrier of "coolness", whether it is logical or not. In this article, the protagonist is alive, and his opponents are not mentally retarded (although they did not cause particularly great damage to the protagonist). His mentality is also that of an ordinary person who loves literature and suddenly comes to a strange world. Although the tone of the article is still that the protagonist is invincible and encounters Any difficulty can be turned into safety and achieve both fame and fortune. However, the protagonist has a kind of indifference to fame and fortune that is not trapped by the world (this is one of the reasons why I love this novel the most). He also has unsatisfactory relationships when he is in love. He has a deep affection that the male protagonist in the harem does not have. He is a living person. So please shut up those who say the characterization is poor. To use a sentence that has been overused - if the author can't do it, you do it. As for the choice of the heroine, I personally like Hu Xiaomi very much, but according to the author's plot arrangement, even if the protagonist has a dedicated attribute, the two of them cannot develop. Love must have a foundation. As the author said, everything between the two is based on novels. They lack mutual understanding in reality, and their love is just a castle in the air. As for the heroine Yang Lilu, the author also carefully portrayed her gentle and delicate parts (such as the plot of taking care of potted plants), making this character very interesting. I'm very disappointed with the update. Emotionally, I always want to ask the author to update more, but rationally I tell myself that if I update more articles a day like other articles, the quality of the article will definitely be affected. Furthermore... If the author doesn't update more, it's none of your business. People are not obligated to update more than once a day. But in any case, I still want to make a somewhat selfish suggestion: If there is nothing important in reality and it has no impact on the quality of the article, can I occasionally have two updates on that day as a surprise?

To be honest, the Harry Potter series is really not good-looking, even if it is blown up to the sky, it is not good-looking, and the magic has no special features. Compared with Eastern Taoism, it can be said to lack imagination. Naruto can defeat ten Harry Potters. In fact, in terms of culture, some things in traditional culture stabilize what is now called culture.

He is a hypocrite who talks about how he is deeply in love with the heroine and then flirts with other women. The two bitches are flirting with each other throughout the story. They are so disgusting that they make you want to vomit.

Books like Wenzhao Gong are really not interesting. You know the ending when you read the beginning. You are a copyist, so why are you pretending to be a high-ranking intellectual youth?

I won't say anything else. Now that I have read more than twenty chapters, I am fascinated by this novel. When the protagonist first wrote something, didn't he also promote that Liu Jingting and Gu Yongsheng were the same person? And for this reason, he used the name Gu Yongsheng to confront the waiter in the shop. When writing the second martial arts, he didn't want others to know that the two were the same person, as if the previous plot had never happened? ? ?

Junior high school students write about Jin Yong, and there are also high school entrance examinations, which are excellent.

This woman is enough at the beginning

I have read so many poisonous articles, this is the first one that poisoned me to death

The heroine Yang poisoned me to death. I'm already dead. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh

It's okay if you set it to seventeen years old, fourteen years old, those who are late in development haven't developed yet.

How would you respond if a girl you've only met once gets angry at you? If you see it, please reply. The protagonist is a licking dog, as if he has never seen a woman before. My words won't make him look good. If he has a bad temper, he will scold him on the spot. When reading novels, the emphasis is on the word "pleasant". The publishing house (or magazine) had its own internal problems that dragged the protagonist into copying someone else's. The protagonist is a licking dog, as if he has never seen a woman before The age issue is that it is simply too inconsistent to be young and old 😆 Are you fined if you don't buy something from his store? Are you sure this brainless guy is the director? Believe it or not, I will prevent you from reincarnation forever. This is what the teacher said to the protagonist.

What a sand dollar. A minor writes a book. Hahaha xswl. Find one in real life.

All the supporting characters are clever, and the main character is pretentious. It is extremely poisonous. Please be careful, all readers.

I don't quite understand, but all the novels are just copied completely? The author also knows that many things are not well written. The writing is so bad that it is unfinished. Why do you insist on following the original author's bad ending at all? . What kind of plot? Is it inevitable? Of course not, the protagonist won't change.

It's only been ten chapters and I can't stand it any longer. Is it because my poison resistance is too low...

I read the beginning, the pure beginning, the first page. The words of the dean, it directly brought me to the bitter cold of Siberia. It is pure elementary school student writing style... If you can persuade me to give up on the novel at this beginning, don't say it anymore, it's too disgusting.

Brothers, this is a novel written 10 years ago. Can you believe it?

Isn't this suitable for writing emotional lines, and why do they all start from martial arts? I'm a little curious. Almost every copybook I see starts from Internet novels and martial arts.

300G is not much. There are almost a few books with more than a thousand chapters. Might as well say, so the novels on the website are saved simultaneously. Whether new or old

I've only read a few chapters and I feel like the emotional line is really uncomfortable and I can't stand it anymore.

A mess, a bunch of nonsense, forced wisdom

I regret not reading the book review series! I saw a female editor at a major magazine (35% market share) who was 17 years old! They also keep questioning the protagonist who is 15 years old (a junior high school student) for writing a novel at such a young age 😥

The protagonist has neither power nor power; he looks like a man with all the glory, but he is nothing but a duckweed in the water. An author, or a writer. It is impossible to conquer the world with one novel. This has always been the case throughout the ages. You wrote Dream of Red Mansions, and it still has mixed reviews, not to mention martial arts fantasy. As for world famous books... It's even more impossible. Many people can read online articles, but they may not be able to read classics. It's not because they don't have enough cultural accomplishment, but because they can't calm down. Since this novel has gone beyond reality, but it insists on using realistic means to solve the problem, it is over the top. … Good luck. I'm just a reader... Don't get me wrong.