Great Shu Mountain

If you have time, write a side chapter in your new book!

[Fn=2_2][fn=2_3]🤭It's great and updated again. Author, you still have readers!

I promised my book friends a long time ago that I would continue writing Shushan. There was a problem with the starting point system in the middle. I tried to update a few chapters, but unfortunately I still couldn't find the feeling. Now I have opened a new book and am going to write about what happens after Shushan ascends! It can be regarded as a reply to the original agreement!

I have read more than 50 chapters of this book, and I just have a feeling that I am copying it. . I feel that there are many places in this book that are either missing a few sentences or a large paragraph. . . Baffling. . . 😅 Couldn't it be copied from somewhere? It's not a complete copy, right? ? ?

It feels like the fight doesn't have that kind of rhythm. It ends in a few clicks. It's like telling you the result directly. It's like boiled water. It doesn't feel refreshing at all.

I can no longer hold back the passion in my heart and decided to give you 999 likes

Finally overcoming the tribulation! It seems that an awesome life has begun😃

🤫 It's rare to see a new online game about Shushan on the homepage, but after reading ten chapters, it doesn't seem to have the rhythm of an online game. I feel like the protagonist is so awesome, his character is explosive, and he kills everyone. It's so bland, I personally feel it's not as good as Jiulang's [Shushan Feixian]. All in all, a little disappointed.

In a word, the writing and plot are all top-notch. If you think it doesn't look good, feel free to kill me. [Url=rumUZv]

There are indeed too many advertisements. In the future, those who advertise please enter this door, and those outside the door will be obliterated! I hope all my fellow authors can support me. I will update new advertising buildings from time to time.