Unparalleled Fallen Immortal

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My friend's masterpiece made me think deeply after reading it. Read it carefully and you will gain something. Every time I come here to leave a message, I always pass by in a hurry. I have always wanted to code a unique long review, but unfortunately I have never been able to calm down and code it properly. Very sorry. The mind is hard to settle and thoughts are confused. Now, I finally made up my mind to write a "four-character long review". I believe I have never seen such a four-character long review on the Internet. The following is a four-character long comment. Friends have read it and criticized it. If you feel uncomfortable, you can delete it directly. If you can make a friend smile, I will be very happy. The opening chapter of the masterpiece is like the finishing touch of a dragon, and birds appear on the paper, full of energy. The pen power is so profound that it makes Yu blush, and the writing and thinking are so sensitive that it makes me snap at the table. The plot of the story flows freely, just like moving clouds, winning step by step. Watching it makes you feel like you can't stop. Such a masterpiece is bound to be popular after it is completed. It is not just empty writing, but has something to say. It can be called a classic and brilliant. I often laughed out loud when I read the whole book. The plot is compact, the concept is exquisite, the front and back are consistent, and it is just right. Sometimes it is right, sometimes it is bizarre, it is right and wrong, and it points directly to the center. Just like the title of the book, it is not to be missed. Written by a friend, it is a pleasure to read, the content is novel, and it is worth reading carefully. Yu Changkawen came over to take a look. I occasionally gained something and benefited a lot. I read it for the first time, and I wanted to review the book, but I couldn't make up my mind, and there were so many distracting thoughts that I found it difficult to write, and I couldn't finish it. Looking back now, after thinking hard for three days, I finally figured it out. I dare not go into details. All the above words are full of emotion. If you don't understand, please forgive me. If you like it, give it a detailed review. If you find it boring, just delete it. In just a few hundred years, with the rest of his hard work, he jokingly called it: "The Four-Character Divine Commentary". This is not arrogance, but must be the first of its kind. Whether it is a classic or not, I won't talk about it. If this review is not popular, Lantian will vomit blood. If this review is popular, Qiaotou will see ghosts. Brother Lan Tianqiao, this is the brainchild of my father. I bow my head and pay my respects. Cheer up my friend, keep the excitement going, and stick to the completion of the book. I was also delighted when he reached the summit. I hereby send it to you to help you become a god.

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I read in someone else's book review section that you said I jumped at the chance to read it. In fact, a very serious problem is that urban cultivation is a bit poorly written, and the routines are as obvious as fantasy fairy tales. Many old readers don't buy it anymore, and occasionally they just follow a few old masters. After the new book period, most rankings will plummet. Now, with the same themes and routines, it is necessary to spell out the writing and plot design. The story needs to be innovative, the writing style should no longer be like the pure novice routines before 2010, and the plot should be compact and enjoyable, but the excitement should be appropriate. It should not be too tense, nor should it be infinitely exciting in the early stage to attract attention. This will easily cause reader fatigue, or create an embarrassing situation where there is no content to write later. Working hard to write the plot in the development stage will make the book more interesting and have a lot more words. In addition, the outline must be designed well, and what goals the protagonist must achieve at each stage, instead of blindly upgrading and being confused about what the promotion is for at the end. It is recommended to read the book "Entertainment: Achiever System". It was a bit fun in the early stage, and the development stage was also well written. Unfortunately, the author finished it by himself. In fact, he could have written 200-300 chapters if he used the general entertainment writing routine. The above are purely personal suggestions. Hope it's useful

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Was he also the best in the world in his previous life? Why did you become such a coward after being reborn? A person who is thousands of years old will call others senior when meeting old people. . . When I met Bai Yutang, I called him Brother Bai. . I'll go. . . Author, do you want to show that the protagonist is kind-hearted or respects the elderly and loves the young? Or do you want to put the protagonist on a higher level? Don't you care about these kids playing around? ? So what happened to Tang Shiba? Are you embarrassed to be stared at? ? Isn't it natural to touch your nose? ? Are you feeling furious? ? The magnanimity, the magnanimity. . The author describes it this way. To be honest, what kind of information is revealed between the lines? It's because the protagonist places his position too low from the heart, as if he is a junior, a person of low status. He has a sense of inferiority from beginning to end, so he has this childish behavior of "can't get out of the kang". . The result of this is that if you want to be polite in front of the seniors and promote the moral virtues of China for thousands of years, you will always be a grandson. In front of the younger generation, well, you were the best in the world in your previous life, so I am very tall and disdain to play with you children. They will always be kicked in the face and constantly provoked. . . The author has to consider one thing. Standing at an altitude of several thousand meters and looking down, there is no difference between 1 meter and 10 meters. . In the same way, for old monsters like the protagonist who lived thousands of years ago, there is still no difference between a 20-year-old young man on earth and an 80-year-old grandfather. . .

Thank you to all the brothers who have always supported Yuxian. I would like to thank you all here. I will definitely do my best to write this book to repay everyone. I hope you can continue to support me! 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹