A Fine Son-in-Law for the Tang Dynasty

Ever since I became fascinated by the Tang Dynasty time travel, I have basically seen the Sui and Tang Dynasties at the starting point. What I like the most is Li Er's reign, and secondly I like Li Chengqian. I was very happy when I saw "The Good Consort of the Tang Dynasty". Because I had another book to read, I followed it for some days. But I always feel there are some shortcomings. 1. Is Changsun Chong a romantic or a pervert? In terms of the author's portrayal, the eldest grandson before time travel should be regarded as a young man (he opened his own game company and it is prosperous), his family is in a good situation, and his parents have a very good relationship. That's why when traveling through time, I feel it's very cheating and want to go back. The first thing to do when arriving in the apocalyptic space is to ask how to return. Then there is a problem here. After traveling through time, the eldest grandson saw Little Steamed Bun, and because she was a girl, he immediately felt the urge to do it, and even considered taking action that day (if it wasn't for his age). A man who had just traveled through time and was determined to be reunited with his family, at least not yet considering staying in the Tang Dynasty, actually planned to kill a woman because she was impulsive? This doesn't show romance at all, only sex demons. As a family, the relationship is very good, and as mentioned earlier, he is very envious of his parents' friendship. Would such a person become a pervert as soon as he traveled through time? Not staying in the Tang Dynasty, but also planning to kill others in the Tang Dynasty? He hasn't even integrated into the original Changsun Chong yet. As for the original creation, I think it is more reasonable to treat Little Mantou as a younger sister. And the eldest grandson from later generations should know very well that he should marry the princess. If you don't marry for the sake of three generations of blood relatives in the future, at least for now, you don't plan to stay in the Tang Dynasty, and you probably won't think about having three wives and four concubines in the future. 2. Description, that is, writing problem The author doesn't know whether he likes to use vernacular writing or is too simple. The whole article is relatively too brief in description. The dialogue is also similar to Dou's, "Wait until tomorrow, how many drumsticks will Mom ask for in the kitchen?" In the dialogue in the Tang Dynasty, I feel that this is not how a matron would speak. It would be more appropriate to say that it is the mother of the eldest grandson. "Although I greet Yuchi Jingde..." The matron of the family can actually call Yuchi Jingde by his name? At least I have to hand it over to General XX. 3. The space in the apocalypse is too unnatural What diseases can be cured with medicine in the apocalyptic space? You must know that Li Er is a green and immortal emperor, and his eldest grandson from a later generation dares to be so open-minded, even revealing the secret that antiques are needed to change the dressing. Regarding the shaping of Li Er, I suggest the author to take a look at Tang Brick. Personally, I think things can be changed in the apocalyptic space, but at least it should be at a certain level. For example, it will not affect the world process. Rice seeds can appear, potatoes can appear, but grenades cannot be given directly to you. Of course, you can make them yourself. This is the basis. We can give you the bricks you need, but you need to build the house yourself. For example, that pill can give you a prescription, but you need to do it yourself and find the herbal medicine. Rather than getting something for nothing. This was what helped the Tang Dynasty move forward. Instead of giving what you ask for. What else do ministers and emperors do? For example, rice seeds can tell you how to get good rice seeds and plant good land, but you shouldn't just get a dozen seeds that are incredible. This is unrealistic.

How could Changsun Wuji be fat? As a down-and-out nobleman, how could he gain weight even if he didn't have enough to eat? Even if you get rich later, you can't let your descendants inherit fat. That's nonsense.

Changsun Chong and Li Lizhi are brothers and sisters, right?

People in ancient times didn't understand. Don't those who traveled through time understand? These two are close relatives.

When I saw he was a fat man, I decided to forget it. It wasn't that I hated fat people, but I just couldn't take him in.

Who says cottonseed oil can't be eaten? Don't talk nonsense if you don't know