Demon Eye Shura

Looking forward to the explosion next month~

"So happy (●°u°●)", Xiaohun's Immortal Asura is a song I like very much. I just found out today that it is the theme song of this book. First add ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

I came here with Mo Tong Shura. I looked at the writing style of the introduction and saw that this novel is very well written. I can see that I have great writing skills and wild imagination. However, again, this style is not suitable for the current style of online novels. The two novels are like two people. I am very curious, what made the author change so much? It's really a good novel.

I hope you will overcome the suffering as soon as possible and get back on your feet!

It is the first time for the author to write a book. After more than 150 chapters, he has become quite clear about the two skills of digging holes and filling holes in writing novels. During the construction process of this book, I personally feel that the author is a well-deserved master of digging holes. However, I am really not completely satisfied with the author's hole-filling process from beginning to end. The title of this book, "Demon Eyes Shura", naturally uses the protagonist's pair of magic pupils as the main entry point to form the plot of the book. However, after all, the protagonist had his eyes and arms transplanted back then. The author wrote that I think the protagonist's arms, which were supposed to be like artifacts, gradually "disappeared from everyone". In fact, if you add the iron hand to the protagonist while writing the magic pupil, the plot of the book will be more exciting. After all, there is an extra sub-line, and it will always become more exciting. But now the author seems to have forgotten these arms, which always makes the protagonist and the readers feel a slight sense of discomfort when thinking about it. There are still places like this in the middle, and it has become a common phenomenon in this book that the author fills in the gaps but does not fill them up. This will make readers fall into a pit and be unable to get out. What a tragic thing. Another outstanding representative of the pit of dissatisfaction is Ms. Guanyue. Author, author, do you know that I really want to know whether the girl Guanyue is dead or alive now? I really don't understand the current life state of this woman! I remember that the author still spent a lot of pen and ink on the aspects related to this character. In the end, this person passed away with uncertainty about his life and death, and it was always difficult to explain... If you take a closer look at these unfilled holes by the author, you will find that they are all very small and unintentional mistakes. However, once these unintentional mistakes appear, the integrity of the book will be greatly affected. Therefore, the author's creative process needs to be more detailed in order to successfully become a god!

He said that what Chinese people like most is action scenes, and I hope the author can include more exciting fight scenes in this book. Of course, there are also many books in this book. What I mean is that if the fights between people can be more detailed, it means that you will enjoy reading it more. . [Fn=2_3] I love the plot, it's very interesting. [Fn=3_7]

😊I had a slight cold today, so I didn't go to work. Stay in bed and read this novel. I am really looking forward to the following plots more and more. Each chapter is more exciting than the last. The narrative and writing skills of the story are quite strong, so I must continue to support it~🤝🌹

Check out the update, come on! ! !

Looking at the title of the novel, I thought it might just be an ordinary novel with some surprises and surprises. However, after reading the content of the novel, I realized that I really looked at this novel a little superficially. I have to say that the author's ability to control words is very strong, which will make this novel even more outstanding. 🤝

Come on, author! ! ! 🌹🌹🌹😄😄🥺🥺

I have a weak question, will the author release a follow-up?

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The novel pays great attention to many detailed descriptions, allowing people to vividly follow the changes of the heroine and feel the direction of the entire story bit by bit. I am looking forward to what will happen next, so I hope the author can update it soon. I send you a flower and cheers for the author! ! ! Support~~~

The plot of this book was set up in such a way that it was difficult for me to figure it out. The sense of plausibility was really refreshing!

Support Xuanzi, come on in the new week!

After reading through the updated chapters, the article is not lackluster in terms of text expression at all, but these words are piled up with orthodox intentions and even a little bit of personal style. It is this original writing style that deeply attracted me. After reading it through, I felt a hearty pleasure. 🌹

😍I didn't notice it at first, but it turns out that this novel also has a theme song. Wow, can I say it sounds so good? It turns out that reading this novel is not only a visual enjoyment, but also a cleansing and enjoyment for the ears. Wow. I feel so excited, especially the sentence: I am the immortal Shura! It sounds super good.

I discovered this article yesterday and couldn't put it down. I read it until around two o'clock in the middle of the night and finally finished it! The writing is wonderful, the characters are very distinct, and the plot is not procrastinating. It is a good article worth reading! Finally, there is one more thing I want to ask for: can you go faster! There are many articles on my bookshelf that are too slow. Now I have forgotten what they are about. When I open them to read, I have to re-filter them. Sometimes I give up in order to save time, so I would like to ask if you can read them less slowly, because I still really hope to read two chapters of such articles every day. Thank you!

Don't smash down the bounty points carelessly [fn=2_3] Tomorrow, you should have almost used up the 10 opportunities today~

This kind of fantasy cultivation novel is really well written. It makes people happy to see it. However, the Zhuo family are not good people. Just like Zhuo Wentian, he has no grace at all and will kill the male protagonist in a single competition. Fortunately, it comes with the glory of the male protagonist~~~😊

Personally, I particularly like reading fantasy and cultivation-type novels. Because I have always felt that this type of novel is not only full of adult fantasy, but most importantly, the type of protagonist in this type of novel will make people particularly moved. It seems that when I came into contact with this novel, the male protagonist Zhuo Yifan was not radiant at the beginning, and he did not look like one man could stand in the way of others. Moreover, it is even compared to many stories. He is not someone who shocked everyone as soon as he appeared on the stage. The words "sensational" and "enthusiastic" are not suitable for this person when he first appeared or even long after. And this is also the initial highlight and foreshadowing of this article. A small person who is not a small person, little by little he amazes our sight and hearing, and little by little some vigorous, vivid, and even interesting stories happen, and he slowly grows into a great god. Let's go a little bit. Witness it step by step! The appearance of the Blood Hell Book. The creation of my own magic pupil (PS: At the beginning, when I read the title of the book, I thought the magic pupil was the protagonist's aura with its own attributes~haha). And there is no lack of introduction and description of the protagonist's character. Stubborn and unyielding. A resolute man, a disobedient man, a naturally domineering man. In my mind, Shura used to be a not-so-good, even negative image. I always felt that it was an adjective for being extremely cruel and cruel. He had a destructive character, a fiery and arrogant character. This is my understanding of Shura. But I saw the introduction of the novel: "When I became Shura, I crossed the road of evil and swam in the sea of blood, and used Shura to kill demons and demons..." "When I became a Shura, I walked the right path and saw the desolation. I saw the vicissitudes of life in the right path of the world..." "When I became Shura, I looked at the mountains and rivers and saw the beautiful scenery. I was the master of beasts and the king of hundreds of spiritual beasts..." "When I became Shura, black and white were impermanent, and I stepped on hell and destroyed the Emperor of Hell..." "When I became an Asura, my soul was unobstructed and my heart was fearless, and I deceived the hungry ghosts, Rakshasa and Buddha into death..." "When I became an Asura, I entered the outside world without seeking anything, and sat in the Immortal Hall of Heavenly Dao!" 😃 Seeing the story again, I slowly understood the author's interpretation of the word Shura and the interpretation of the male protagonist in the story. Slowly I discovered that this is a lovable word, this is a positive protagonist, and this is a story that is not boring or easy to predict. Without a single fantasy and ordinary story, we cannot know the direction, nor can we guess what will happen next moment. We can only experience it slowly like the protagonist in the story, and follow the author's writing, bit by bit, step by step. Only then can you know that when you read a book, you are not reading a novel, but a legendary story, and the experience and growth of a hero! 🤭 🌹🌹In addition, I have to say that the writing style of the story is also very good. Not only is the story outstanding, but the writing style is also worthy of recognition. This book is indeed worthy of careful reading and some thought-provoking later. It's been a long time since I've seen such a good-looking novel, and I felt so much emotion in my heart that I was very happy. I hope the author can continue to write more and more beautiful stories. 😄

😃Also, wait for the new book!

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